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broadway_babe
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I am somewhat a songwriter myself. here's a song I wrote earlier...
As gazing leads to pleasure
in the eyes before your own
You've missed the actual treasure
and untill you find it you're alone

(chorus) the mirror holds no secrets
but reflections of the world
you master the eyes longingly
you've seen it all before
once the mirror shatters
nothing else but time
can help you in your mission
the treasure you're to find

the down fall of the place around you
complacently remembered
the captors let you keep your face
in light of cooling embers

(chorus)
(vers one)
(chorus)
whddya think if ya like it... say so if you don't... i'm open 4 suggestions THANX
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Crazy_Joe
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Crazy_Joe | 01:02
Hey, that's pretty good! It kinda sounds like a classic rock song, or something '80s. But I like it!
broadway_babe
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thanx joe I'm really into that style of writing and i listen to that sort of music... Sting, stuff like that.
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