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cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:36

This is a thread in which you can post songs you wrote. Basically the rules are the same as a the Poem corner..... ill post one of my songs later

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cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:40

alright.... heres one sh***y love song I wrote.... id enjoy imput about it....

It's 2am, you've just logged online
When me and you talk, I have a great time
I pray for the moment, when me and you can meet
Take in a movie, or walk down the street

Cause your everything
That nothing can't bring
You make dark clouds go away
And keep my sun shining
My eyese may never blink
You'll never leave my mind
Your one special girl
Your one of a kind

It's 3am, we've talked for an hour
You explain your whole day, even describe your shower
I take in all the info, It'll never leave my head
The only way I'm leaving you, is if I end up dead

Cause your everything
That nothing can't bring
You make dark clouds go away
And keep my sun shining
My eyese may never blink
You'll never leave my mind
Your one special girl
Your one of a kind

It's 4am, I begin to tire
But every word you type on, I still admire
You say you've got to go, go to resdt your brain
I know if you weren't in my life, I'd have long gone insane

Cause your everything
That nothing can't bring
You make dark clouds go away
And keep my sun shining
My eyese may never blink
You'll never leave my mind
Your one special girl
Your one of a kind

Now it's time for me, to go shut my eyes
I remember all of mime and yours, wonderful happy times
Tommorow will come, and then it shall end
But for my love to disappear, I never intend

Cause your everything
That nothing can't bring
You make dark clouds go away
And keep my sun shining
My eyese may never blink
You'll never leave my mind
Your one special girl
Your one of a kind

Cause your everything
That nothing can't bring
You make dark clouds go away
And keep my sun shining
My eyese may never blink
You'll never leave my mind
Your one special girl
Your one of a kind

WhatIsItToBurn | 23-07-2003 20:41

I didn't read it, but it was very good.

WhatIsItToBurn | 23-07-2003 20:41

aha, I'm kidding.. I read it, good job.

JenniGirly | 23-07-2003 20:42

that's about me isn't it, ISN'T IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just kidding, its really good

cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:42

lol, thank you

cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:43

it isnt about anyone

WhatIsItToBurn | 23-07-2003 20:43

So you say it's the Poems Corner's sibling, eh? Is this Song Corner a male or female?

cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:44

no gender shall be placed on either

little_girl | 23-07-2003 20:45

if the song isn't about Anyone, is it about NoOne?

who will write a song for anyone?

WhatIsItToBurn | 23-07-2003 20:45

damn.. I'm guessing you're their father though, so may I take them both out to dinner tonight?

little_girl | 23-07-2003 20:46

sleep...need sleep, too much work

Shira88 | 23-07-2003 20:46

That was a really really good song !!! Honestly! you should post more....

cRaZy_T | 23-07-2003 20:46

only if u like sausage, if you catch my drift

WhatIsItToBurn | 23-07-2003 20:47

er.. No I don't. Please explain.

Shira88 | 23-07-2003 20:50

lol....

ice_white_tiger | 23-07-2003 20:53

hehe

you spelt sibling wrong in the title...

Shira88 | 23-07-2003 21:00

*tries not to laugh* Ice_white, it's not nice laughing at a person's mistakes.

the_locust | 23-07-2003 21:09

lol i saw that too...hehe. yeah thats a good song, well done

ice_white_tiger | 23-07-2003 21:09

who says i was laughing at the mistake?

Maybe i just felt like laughing...

ice_white_tiger | 23-07-2003 21:10

BTW i like the song!

happygymnast | 23-07-2003 21:21

jillywilly thats really good!

ice_white_tiger | 23-07-2003 21:23

hehe - im laughing again

jillywilly?!

whats that all about?

Shira88 | 23-07-2003 21:25

hahahahah... ok, thats funny...

Snowdrop | 23-07-2003 21:36

crazy, I loved your song!!! it's great, it really is! you're saying it's about no one... but it really seems as if you wrote it for someone you really love or loved.... well, I can relate to this song... anyway, I think it's really great!!!

happygymnast | 23-07-2003 22:15

jillywilly is his nickname from me

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