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its_all_bout_me | 20-05-2005 23:10
well you deserve to be told
memento_mori | 27-05-2005 09:04
Oh my God! I've only read the first few of you poems, but I had to stop to tell you just how beautiful they are! I can't wait to find the time to sit down and read the rest of them!
fruity | 24-06-2005 19:29
it's going to be okay,
you say?
but I don't know.
hence I can't stay.
white roses on my bed,
they laid.
they seemed at once so grey.
and delicacy,
it beaten me,
could be sometimes so vain.
and always even if it's real,
it fades away by rain.
it's going to be okay,
you say?
you promised me,
so I shall pray.
a velvet tie
could lift me high,
instead it choked away.
you say?
but I don't know.
hence I can't stay.
white roses on my bed,
they laid.
they seemed at once so grey.
and delicacy,
it beaten me,
could be sometimes so vain.
and always even if it's real,
it fades away by rain.
it's going to be okay,
you say?
you promised me,
so I shall pray.
a velvet tie
could lift me high,
instead it choked away.
jonbball89 | 24-06-2005 19:32
not bad i like all the ways you turn one thing to anouther nice
midnighteyesAFI | 24-06-2005 19:34
I absolutely love your poetry, it's so inspiring. you're really talented
Tash1213 | 26-06-2005 22:08
omh i am in love with all your poetry its so good, i would love to know how to write poetry like you.>
Tasha121314 | 26-06-2005 23:15
OoOoO....... some one has nearly the same name as me>
Anyway fruity i am 13 yrs old and when i was 11-12 i started writing poems,storys and about half way through last year my dad died and i stopped writing beacuse my dad was my inspiration he was encouraging me and everything, but i came to look at your poems and you have inspired me so much so start writing again thank you so much and you poetry is absolutly amazing. its wonderful to see what people can do if they try
Tasha
Anyway fruity i am 13 yrs old and when i was 11-12 i started writing poems,storys and about half way through last year my dad died and i stopped writing beacuse my dad was my inspiration he was encouraging me and everything, but i came to look at your poems and you have inspired me so much so start writing again thank you so much and you poetry is absolutly amazing. its wonderful to see what people can do if they try
Tasha
fruity | 30-06-2005 13:34
you said the sweetest things, you guys, you have no idea how much you touched my heart with your words, especially you, Tasha... I know what it is to lose a father, my dad also died last year, for a matter of fact, on July 3rd it's gonna be a year to his death. one of the poems i wrote here was about his death too... several experiences that you go through in your life teach you and develope you they'd build you up if you'd let them. you gave me one of the greatest compliments anyone could give me by saying I inspired you to write, and I'm anxious to see your poetry soon. I'll be looking for a thread of poems by you, so get that keyboard knocking!
and to all the other girls, thank you so much for your kind heart warming words, they mean a lot to me.. I'm so glad you liked my poems..
and to all the other girls, thank you so much for your kind heart warming words, they mean a lot to me.. I'm so glad you liked my poems..
thegrlsguy | 30-06-2005 14:55
i liked ur poem & i hope bothof ur dads r in a nicer place.
Tasha121314 | 02-07-2005 12:41
well as i said i said you inspired me and i wrote one poem about my dad wat its about is my dad leaving me and then coming back cause he left me with my mum for six years
ok the last 4 lines are crap but i tried my best at 12 yrs old and im still taking english class to inprove my english so yea, and when i showed my cuz she cried beacuse its the exact same thing except with her mum so yea
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ok the last 4 lines are crap but i tried my best at 12 yrs old and im still taking english class to inprove my english so yea, and when i showed my cuz she cried beacuse its the exact same thing except with her mum so yea
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Tasha121314 | 02-07-2005 12:47
You are my insperation,
I love you very much,
I cry cause i cannot see you,
its very very tough,
When i sleep at night
You touch my sore heart
I think off all the good times
Especially when we played darts
Why did you leave me at such a young age
Did i do something wrong?
Or is it cause you got locked up in a cage
And you know what, i havn't seen you in so long
You tore my heart
You tore my soul
You tore my flesh
I love you alot
But you have hurt me to much
1 day i may forgive you
But you have to pay the price
you are my dad
dad i know your up there looking down on my and i hope your proud of my work
I love you very much,
I cry cause i cannot see you,
its very very tough,
When i sleep at night
You touch my sore heart
I think off all the good times
Especially when we played darts
Why did you leave me at such a young age
Did i do something wrong?
Or is it cause you got locked up in a cage
And you know what, i havn't seen you in so long
You tore my heart
You tore my soul
You tore my flesh
I love you alot
But you have hurt me to much
1 day i may forgive you
But you have to pay the price
you are my dad
dad i know your up there looking down on my and i hope your proud of my work
fruity | 15-08-2005 15:17
that was beautiful, Tasha I'm sure wherever your father is, he's proud of you and appriciates this poem so much..
here's a new one by moi -
I'm the child's mom.
I gave birth to epiphany,
but epiphany's a crime.
and the stronger they get,
the wiser they grow.
trust me,
I'm one to know.
I'm the mom's son.
I was born out of freedom,
but lived on the run.
for the shame is to live,
and the hope is to die.
trust me.
I can say no lie.
I'm the calling above.
I could reach for the stars,
but got tired of love.
there are mothers and sons
who'll be always alone.
trust me,
I've learnt on my own.
here's a new one by moi -
I'm the child's mom.
I gave birth to epiphany,
but epiphany's a crime.
and the stronger they get,
the wiser they grow.
trust me,
I'm one to know.
I'm the mom's son.
I was born out of freedom,
but lived on the run.
for the shame is to live,
and the hope is to die.
trust me.
I can say no lie.
I'm the calling above.
I could reach for the stars,
but got tired of love.
there are mothers and sons
who'll be always alone.
trust me,
I've learnt on my own.
fruity | 02-09-2005 16:55
you really hurt me this time.
with your words
with your knives
with your self
and I wonder,
maybe I shouldn't wonder anymore.
with your words
with your knives
with your self
and I wonder,
maybe I shouldn't wonder anymore.
Dekar | 02-09-2005 17:13
I'm sorry, but I told you before, don't mess with me when I'm cutting vegetables in the kitchen.
wannabepunk | 19-09-2005 15:10
you are so sad i think it was really good!!
fruity | 08-10-2005 12:35
it's the bed time story
you used to tell
and the princess' name
you tend to misspell
it's the ticking clock
and the missing shoe
but on top of all,
you know it's you.
when the storms are strong
and the nights are dark
when I feel so wrong,
when I lose all spark
it's the fairy tale
you forget to make true
but on top of all-
it's so hard it's not you.
you used to tell
and the princess' name
you tend to misspell
it's the ticking clock
and the missing shoe
but on top of all,
you know it's you.
when the storms are strong
and the nights are dark
when I feel so wrong,
when I lose all spark
it's the fairy tale
you forget to make true
but on top of all-
it's so hard it's not you.
fruity | 23-11-2005 21:24
this is something really really stupid I just wrote lol i don't even think it has any artistic value. but I like it
you.
you, I love you.
yes
you
too.
you.
I want someone
just like you
not you.
I love you.
you are
perfect
you are
everything
that
a woman
wants.
I don't want you.
but I love you.
you
are
my dream.
my nightmare.
you are
wrong
you're so
right.
I don't want you.
but I can't have another.
you.
you, I love you.
yes
you
too.
you.
I want someone
just like you
not you.
I love you.
you are
perfect
you are
everything
that
a woman
wants.
I don't want you.
but I love you.
you
are
my dream.
my nightmare.
you are
wrong
you're so
right.
I don't want you.
but I can't have another.
fruity | 14-03-2006 19:20
I'm not afraid to say "I'm sorry"
I don't care if I'm the one to blame.
I know I've got no reason to worry,
I'm sure things will be the same.
I made a mistake, but,
for heaven's sake,
I'm honest and straight and sincere.
the chain didn't break
since no one was fake,
so why am I filled with this fear?
I really can't think about losing
the beautiful contact we had
and I understand your resentment
at all of the lies you were fed.
I'm gonna be brave,
I won't be a slave
to sorrow and horror and fright.
I'll get in my cave
and never will crave
for something so off of my sight.
I don't care if I'm the one to blame.
I know I've got no reason to worry,
I'm sure things will be the same.
I made a mistake, but,
for heaven's sake,
I'm honest and straight and sincere.
the chain didn't break
since no one was fake,
so why am I filled with this fear?
I really can't think about losing
the beautiful contact we had
and I understand your resentment
at all of the lies you were fed.
I'm gonna be brave,
I won't be a slave
to sorrow and horror and fright.
I'll get in my cave
and never will crave
for something so off of my sight.
squirrelsrkool | 14-03-2006 20:08
i like . your rly good. ttyl.
fruity | 14-03-2006 23:37
hehe thank you
that_wasnt_me | 14-03-2006 23:39
your very talented, good job!
fruity | 04-04-2006 22:52
weary eyed
and heavy limbed
I stumble unto you.
and the nights are cold
and I'm alone.
there was no other
afore to you.
you didn't know.
you knew.
sea breeze in my hair
and you embrace me.
the sound of
solid moans
in my ears
I'm not alone.
my face is sore
of smiling.
you've done your part.
you deny me of my own.
I'm getting closer
to the spot
and you are miles away.
a sip of wine,
a sip of time,
I feel so lost.
your eyes are big.
I'm small inside your kiss.
dedicated to you-know-who lol
and heavy limbed
I stumble unto you.
and the nights are cold
and I'm alone.
there was no other
afore to you.
you didn't know.
you knew.
sea breeze in my hair
and you embrace me.
the sound of
solid moans
in my ears
I'm not alone.
my face is sore
of smiling.
you've done your part.
you deny me of my own.
I'm getting closer
to the spot
and you are miles away.
a sip of wine,
a sip of time,
I feel so lost.
your eyes are big.
I'm small inside your kiss.
dedicated to you-know-who lol
rispergirl | 17-06-2006 04:08
Those are sweet, check out mine
Had I known
Had I known you'd be taken from me,
I would have loved you more passionately.
I would have walked with you to the store,
Said I love you a little more.
Taken a stroll on a sunny day,
Said all the things I meant to say.
I would have vowed
Before every GOD, family and friend,
To make our love last forever
And our time would never end.
I would hit the snooze button
And gone back to bed.
Called in late to work
To hold you instead.
Gazed upon a starry night
Snuggled in your arms so tight.
I would have loved you more openly
Shared my thoughts more frequently.
If I could some how
GO back,
My love for you still on track;
I would not take a thing away.
just say all I meant to say.
When You Were Mine-A poem for Michael
When the rain clouds
Fill my days
I close my eyes
And drift away
When the storms
Flood my mind
I drift back
To a better time
When you were mine
Time filled
With joy and happiness
Hugs and kisses
When the rain drops
Fill my heart
I close my eyes
And drift to a time
When we were not apart
A time filled
With laughter and love
So deep and true
It rose above
All the storms
All the rain
Passing hurt and pain
Passing thunder
Passing lightening
All things scary
And frightening
I remember you are here
Watching me
Always near
Lovingly
Then the storm clears
And the sun shines
And I am grateful again
You were mine
Had I known
Had I known you'd be taken from me,
I would have loved you more passionately.
I would have walked with you to the store,
Said I love you a little more.
Taken a stroll on a sunny day,
Said all the things I meant to say.
I would have vowed
Before every GOD, family and friend,
To make our love last forever
And our time would never end.
I would hit the snooze button
And gone back to bed.
Called in late to work
To hold you instead.
Gazed upon a starry night
Snuggled in your arms so tight.
I would have loved you more openly
Shared my thoughts more frequently.
If I could some how
GO back,
My love for you still on track;
I would not take a thing away.
just say all I meant to say.
When You Were Mine-A poem for Michael
When the rain clouds
Fill my days
I close my eyes
And drift away
When the storms
Flood my mind
I drift back
To a better time
When you were mine
Time filled
With joy and happiness
Hugs and kisses
When the rain drops
Fill my heart
I close my eyes
And drift to a time
When we were not apart
A time filled
With laughter and love
So deep and true
It rose above
All the storms
All the rain
Passing hurt and pain
Passing thunder
Passing lightening
All things scary
And frightening
I remember you are here
Watching me
Always near
Lovingly
Then the storm clears
And the sun shines
And I am grateful again
You were mine
poser1018 | 17-06-2006 06:09
^ wow that's good.
and neta.. marvelous. absolutely brilliant.
i wish i was gifted..
and neta.. marvelous. absolutely brilliant.
i wish i was gifted..
A tender breath,
although it's last.
A softened smile,
just for a while.
That sweet-heared tone,
before there's none.
Quick blink of eye,
and then
she dies
so beautiful and so divine,
just like she was afore months-nine.
A kiss from God,
a drop of blood,
a new-born child,
and mother's
gone.
this one has a special meaning 4 me, and if any of u would get it, then my purpose is fulfilled-
You were my eyes.
You were my soul.
You were my heart.
You were my whole.
No hands to hold.
No mouth to speak.
Just two strong legs
and wish to seek
the hidden eyes,
the hidden soul,
the hidden heart
that kept it all,
the hands that held,
the mouth that talked,
but all that's found
are legs
that walked
the endless way
into nowhere,
since all I had
was lie to bear.
and this one I wrote just two days ago-
You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?
Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?
tht would b it 4 now. I'll b glad 2 c wht u think of them- and the most important thing- b honest!