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I'm ruined, a song I wrote.

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Aeris
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Aeris | 02-11-2002 03:19
Anyone want to know a song that I wrote, it's called I'm ruined. I want to be a singer when I grow up. Is it nice or stupid? Here it is:

Life is broken for me
I need someone to like me
Someone like you
The one I love, but doesn't love me

Chorus:
I feel the sky falling on me
And it will be dark
Until you love me
I'm ruined since you
Don't care about the way I
Feel about you

Undersand about how I feel
Don't think the opposite
All I say to myself
Is please love me cause
I never felt that way before

Repeat Chorus

I hope someday you
Understand
I always have this
Problem everyday cause
I can't stop thinking about you

Repeat Chorus
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Nirvana_guy
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Nirvana_guy | 02-11-2002 04:41
i like it, i also plan to be a singer. in one of yer other topics i told you the name of the band i plan on leading
Aeris
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Aeris | 02-11-2002 05:06
I hope you become one to. Thanks!
FireWaterBurn
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FireWaterBurn | 02-11-2002 06:39
Id like to have a band in high school or college but not to sell records or anything...what was your band name nirvana guy?
Nirvana_guy
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Nirvana_guy | 02-11-2002 20:04
the american mammals
TheHappyLion
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TheHappyLion | 02-11-2002 21:07
Nice job Aeris, it's always cool when people write their own stuff.

It does seem kinda ballad-ish, but if it expresses your feelings than: RIGHT ON!!

You should read my thread called "Writing you own songs...", and please do comment!

Keep on writing!!

Hugs,
-=[TheHappyLion]=-
anonomy
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anonomy | 03-11-2002 15:05
ok, i feel compelled to say that it really says a lot about society when little (no offense) girls are writing songs about how their lives will be ruined if some guy (i'm assuming) doesnt like them. dont stop writing, aeris, but dont fall into the i-hate-myself-cuz-you-dont-like-me trap either.
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