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All the shit

09-12-2004 21:51

Ozzyfan1229

52 posts

All the shit that youve started
all the sudden you want to stop
fuck your fuckin schedule
fuck your rules
fuck the clock

Fuck your stupid job
And your stupid shit at work
fuck all your assignments
Fuck yourself For sure

Fuck you and your girlfriend
Fuck you and your mind
Fuck you and your consequences
fuck You calling me names, im not a fucking shrine

I hate your stupid ass
you can go and screw your self
Fuck you and all YOUR worthys
Remember, Im just the dust on the shelf

to you i can be sweeped
and completely erased
You can be so fucking cruel
You bastard, you two face!

So now i hope you know
the fuckin thoughts in my head
So fuck you and your life
i wish you were fuckin dead

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09-12-2004 21:58 sweetd
1,291 posts	woow r u mad at someone i kinda liked that.... nice poem
10-12-2004 04:22 SweetSare
3,009 posts	'Remember, Im just the dust on the shelf' clever... wow you have heaps of hurt inside by the sounds of it so here guys are like that some times and i like how uve expressed urself.. well done.. i hope you feel better
10-12-2004 04:27 Ameer
172 posts	singing fuck what I said it don't mean shit now... nice poem maybe you can do a duet with eamon
10-12-2004 05:14 kalsonberry
14,077 posts	um....are you ok?
10-12-2004 05:41 rock67angel
1,418 posts	If you were mad when you wrote it, then thats a good way to get out some of your anger.. by writing. I do that alot of the time.
16-12-2004 19:59 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	wow guys, thanks i really like the comments, i hate my dad. Hes such an ass. I really enjoy, ill post some more if youd like to hear... and no not all of them are in fuck or in anger,lol, actually some of them can be called school girl love or whatever people label love poems by. so i hope youd like to hear, thanks again, Roxxy
16-12-2004 20:02 victorine
3,099 posts	that was harsh...but its prolly some anger great job
16-12-2004 20:03 Cyd
11,162 posts	You used the words fck and sht over 20 times.
16-12-2004 20:05 Pop_killer
6,740 posts	You know swearing is against the rules right?
16-12-2004 20:42 milah245
22 posts	You just might need anger management
17-12-2004 20:02 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	if you had the life i have, youd swear and cuss and be pissed too.
18-12-2004 03:28 Ameer
172 posts	amen to that sister
18-12-2004 03:29 mmmeee0
2,762 posts	YEAH!
18-12-2004 03:29 aflackoh6
28,546 posts	Take my life. Seriously. Youre not the only person that hates themselves...get therapy like most other people. And next time your title has cussing in it, please censor it.
18-12-2004 03:32 fishmunky
22,056 posts	Youre not the only person that hates themselves...get therapy like most other people. most folk dont get therapy...they just become empty shells of human beings and then theres people like me who pick up guitars...and just write...put things like this to music i still think you need a hug but next time keep the cussing to a minimum...or i'll come to your house and kick you in the shins
18-12-2004 03:33 aflackoh6
28,546 posts	*most other people that can afford therapy. that better Ant?
18-12-2004 03:36 fishmunky
22,056 posts	much better...i wonder if i snap will my student medical insurance cover it...hmm thats a good question
18-12-2004 03:36 Ameer
172 posts	but potry is a form of therapy...shes releasing her anger in her words...just like writing/singing a song...an activity like poetry can be considered a form of self-therapy....(heyyy free therapy )
18-12-2004 03:36 DeathByMonkeys
24,877 posts	Hmmm. Maybe we should get the goderator in here.
13-01-2005 22:06 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	you know, i understand the cussing, but just one thing. i like the people who wrote comments, im thankful, but when you judge my poem and what i have to say and dont comment it and be a smart ass about it, you dont have to post me anymore,. thanks to you who wrote me the comments you wrote, im happy people like you look at my stuff and say really great things, luv yous, Rox
13-01-2005 22:26 Sophie_1
100 posts	lol i know ya said we dont have 2 post any more but i just wanted 2 say i think ya poem wor wicked well dun it's really good..ope ya write some more
13-01-2005 23:52 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	thanx i will
29-01-2005 14:04 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	[b][i] She stands there cold frozen in time eyes so empty no chance to rewind floating in space with blank empty eyes she stares at the man who told many lies No more can she take so she turns away not looking at the man who made her hurt more everyday tears stream down her face as rain on a leaf would she hates to turn away though she knows she should A touch unfelt a word unspoken her heart once full is now left broken No one to fill the empty space in her heart hurt over comes her and tears her apart Shes now no more a being of life But just an empty soul who gave up the strife by roxxy
29-01-2005 15:01 Suck__me__dry
136 posts	i like the second when a hell of alot more, but atleast you got some shit out in the first one, keep it up. Writing is the best way to get over shit because it forces you to except the event and face it head on so yeah when ever you down or pissed off write poem about it.
01-02-2005 22:42 Ozzyfan1229
52 posts	thanks so much, please keep posting

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