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@ 27-03-2003 02:28 JenniGirly
3,631 posts	i wanna read yer thought put into poems, then i'm sure you'll get LOTSA feedback Look at her smile Look at the shine Look at the grin See what's behind Look at her lips Look how they bend Look how they curve Hear the message they send Look at her teeth Look at the white Look at the clean See the reflection of fight Look at her cry Just watch for a while It's what you see When you look at her smile It's not her fake face It's what's behind These are her tears This is her mind

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0 @ 27-03-2003 02:31 El_Mono_Loco
24,347 posts	so wait, do you want a response to your poem or one of our own?
0 @ 27-03-2003 02:31 XxX
4,994 posts	Oooh, I like it.
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:03 gumby
5,051 posts	i really liked that...immensley. you have talent. i also liked the rhyme structure.
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:13 littlechicky
330 posts	Mine isn't a poem...it's a song...but ill make a poem in a sec...here's the song(i posted it on another topic but no one responded to it). Left Alone It was love at first sight, When you were there, You came in my life, and drove me crazy with all that passion. For those two years, I was happy and then… Chorus: You were gone, Underneath my skin was in shreds, What do you do? When your old crush…leaves you… I knew all the things, Everything my feelings, but not yours before… Repeat chorus Then, that life-shattering day…you left me alone…out in the world, With no security… Repeat Chorus Love was no everlasting shield, Especially when it was you that left. I was left alone, and had a life to live, Without you. I found how much I loved you, Too late: you were gone, Repeat Chorus Do you remember the feeling? Of loneliness, spinning your world away… But, that feeling rushed to my veins, When you came back to me, Then my feelings for ya came back, But why? Repeat Chorus End of Song
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:17 littlechicky
330 posts	*a sec later* Here ya go, fellow forumers! The Untitled...by Ally (it could be a song, too...i guess???) Singing birds, laughter filled voies, driving me away. Wishing for mission impossible, when my whole world is blind. Old summer crushes, faces from the past, wishing away my fear, no sorrow. Like it? we can rate each other, want to?
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:26 littlechicky
330 posts	Ok, I'll make up a new song; Ummmmmmm... Never mind.... Keep postin' people!
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:36 built2liv
5,278 posts	New Song: If I was a butterfly I'd fly away into the sky If I was a bird I'd sing you a song If I was spider I'd crawl up your pants and bite the shit outta you. The end.
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:38 littlechicky
330 posts	Oh brother!!! Like mine???
0 @ 27-03-2003 04:40 built2liv
5,278 posts	That last one? It didn't even have a subject...lol.
0 @ 27-03-2003 16:37 littlechicky
330 posts	Whatever...it was improv...the other one wasnt!!! LOL, built2liv for u're poem!!
0 @ 12-08-2003 16:23 _uNwAnTeD_
208 posts	-----Do You Hear Me?----- I’m standing in front of you I'm screaming my head off I'm yelling your name I'm begging for attention Do you hear me? I have a knife Are you scared? I'm in pain But you don't care I'm crying Do you hear me? My heart bleeds It’s wounded from within Scars reopened New cuts made I'm hurting Do you hear me? I raise my arm to your face I take the knife I cut across The blood seeps from the wound I scream out in pain Do you hear me? I fall to my knees Holding my arm Blood overflowing onto my clothes I cry for help Do you hear me? I run the blade across my skin Letting all my pain disappear I start to weep The blood still seeps Do you hear me? Why don't you blink? Why don't you reach for me? Am I here? Why do you feel so far away? Do you hear me? My life it seems is slipping Darkness engulfs me I'm crying out for you to save me Do you hear me? I have fallen I have hit the bottom I have died within Do you hear me? The knife falls from my hand It lies next to me on the ground I look around Is this hell or heaven? I hear voices all around But do you hear me? Its dark I'm scared I think I cut to deep I only wanted to feel better I tried to speak I guess you didn't hear me.
0 @ 14-08-2003 13:00 QUPNCY
9,291 posts	wow.. this is an old thread.. where's jenni girly gone these days anyway?

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