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nanki_c | 08-07-2004 17:38

from the moment i met u,
i knew we wer ment 2 b
i kno u felt it too
we're da same in evry way

u were there 4 me
thru evrything, evry sting, evry bite
i kno u'll see
me thru evry fite

ill go beyond limits 4 u
i kno u'll do the same 4 me
ur neva far 4rm my mind
ill care 4 u endlessly

i rote these lines
coz ur soul matches mine.
....................................................................
every word u say is a little jolt to my heart,
every thought in my head shouts out your name,
my heart breaks while we're apart,
every breath in ur lungs is a tiny little gift to me.

My mind races when i hear ur voice,
ur an endless picture in my mind,
my heart faces an endless battle to tell you how much i love u,
we're two of a kind.

Just saying 1 word to u brightens my day,
seeing your face shines a light through my eyes,
this is all i wanted to say,
I dont want to hide behind lies..
......................................................................

i luv u
u say u do too
but all that is - is a lie,
sumtn fake,
u dont mean a single word u say,
m just a face in d background..
calling out ur name
but u don hear me..

i luv u
u sed u did too
how did those words go to waste?

.......................................................

all alone
on my own again
in a wasteland of nothingness.. a barren land
my life..

boredom, emptiness, lonliness.. sad n alone
lost the ppl who cared for me
lost the ppl who i care for..

all alone
in this battlezone..
called home

all alone,
on my own again..
in my bubble of self loathing and hate

no one knos me
no one cares
no one knos the person inside the ugly exterior
beauty is only skin deep
why dont u look alittle further?

all alone..

........................................................

i loved u
n i stil do
but m wounded..

stick a knife in me..
break all my bones
crack my skull, crush my lings
nothing will hurt me more..
than this pain

i'm bleeding inside
m dying
ur killing me
m dying.

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b00 | 21-07-2004 15:23

very nice

especially the most recent ones...

nanki_c | 21-07-2004 16:48

thanx

blondi3542 | 21-07-2004 16:54

i like them! so what if theyre sometimes not in perfect english? u still get the feel of them! keep on writeing!

[offtopic]
ha urs are alot better than mine!

nanki_c | 21-07-2004 16:56

Lol thanks.. oh u mean the ones with all the spelling mistakes lol!
* offtopic :
i'm sure they're not lol

blondi3542 | 21-07-2004 20:12

[offtopic]
trust me on this one

ManOnFire222 | 21-07-2004 20:19

i think they are good but i am not really in to poetry so i dont know if my what i think really matters

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 11:29

anyone else..?

Princess_ceci | 22-07-2004 11:52

wow they are great very very meaningful, those sort of poems can make people understand your pain (if you have any or you are just making them up) either way they are great!!!!

Keep on writing

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 11:54

i wouldn't make it up

..
but thanks

Princess_ceci | 22-07-2004 12:00

i didnt mean to write make it up i meant to write 'writing it from other peoples experiences' yeah thats right

anyway they are really good

* offtopic :
IM STUPID

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 12:04

oo ok don't worry you're not stupid! and no i don't write from other peoples experiences.. i write from my own..
ah well.. thanks alot

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 12:25

does anyone have any critisism.. just wondering.. hopefully u don't lol but anyway if anyone else has a comment.. please post

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 14:01

* offtopic :
*bump* < what do people mean when they write that

JustxMe | 22-07-2004 14:03

* offtopic :
It's used to bump posts so they would go up and people would see them and take a look at them

Btw, nice poems you've got =)

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 14:04

* offtopic :
oo ok finally i know! lol

and thanks

nanki_c | 22-07-2004 15:44

*bump*

nanki_c | 23-07-2004 12:27

*bump*
sorry for bumping this again.. but i really wanted some more comments

nanki_c | 30-07-2004 08:54

*bump* for corbin

DannyB | 25-08-2004 15:23

wow..

thts really good nanki!!!

nanki_c | 25-08-2004 15:25

thanks danny

lil__Lady | 25-08-2004 16:23

I really like ure poems Nanki.. very well written.
Better than alot of poems I have read. Keep writing gurl! you write poems alot better than I could ever write!

nanki_c | 26-08-2004 13:39

thanks vikki

Corb | 27-08-2004 04:00

aww nanki im guessing you're not having that great of a time over there in india...

cheer up.. the first one is great but that last line needs fixing. the second one i didnt finish because its too upsetting.. CHEER UP!

nanki_c | 27-08-2004 13:47

aww corbin

ok i'm gonna post a new one. i wrote it in about 5 minutes so it really sucks!
but i'm posting it anyway ok here goes..
..................................................................
a long road
a place to go
but which way?

too many decisions
too many complications
too much confusion
i cant see clearly

i stop
i look
i turn
i dont know where to go
a crossroads..

one side
and another
in the middle,
as always

friendless
flitting from one group to another
trying to be accepted
but not fitting the mold
i am me
theres nothing i can do about it

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DannyB | 27-08-2004 13:54

thats gd!!

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