frozen42long • 28-04-2014 14:25
Recovering addict can't cut
Can't lift the blade so take the blunt.
Light it up, Blow it out.
Make a wish though you doubt.
Hold your breath, suck it in,
Though you try, you'll never fit in.
Blow it out, nice and slow.
Those careless hurtful words? let go!
Feel the burn deep inside.
That sinister smile you just can't hide.
Empty your brain and clear the thoughts.
Untangle those emotional knots.
Kill the brain cells, kill the worry.
The line of right and wrong begins to get blurry.
With the blade you see your reflection,
But the cloud of hate only mangled perfection...
kalsonberry • 28-04-2014 18:48
Well-written, but depressing..
Captain_Keeta • 28-04-2014 18:49
I agree. Is everything okay?
Olivia_Ka • 11-05-2014 00:49
A strange poem. Sometimes, I write that sort of things.
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Reminds me that I gave up smoking one year ago.
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