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08-04-2004 21:57BoozinBecca is offline BoozinBecca  
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Ok...this is a poem I wrote today in class. Tell me what you think

I'm at a loss of words,
but I know how I feel,
I just can't describe it.
Every time I see you
I get a smile on my face,
but you don't know that.
Whenever I make you smile
I melt inside; just knowing
that you exist in my life.
I've been blessed to have you,
even if we're just friends.
You don't understand that I need you;
I need you to be with me.
Be with me through good times and bad.
You don't know how I feel.
How I really feel inside.
How it feels to know you love another,
knowing you no longer love me.
We could have been great,
but I blew it...
Now I want you back, I need you,
but I can't have you.
You belong to someone else.
They say it's better to have loved and lost
then never to have loved at all...
but I would rather die
then live with the knowledge
that you love another...




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08-04-2004 21:58filo is offline filo 

4,508 posts
Iv lost my words Cool poem very nice!
08-04-2004 22:03Ghoulscout is offline Ghoulscout 
247 posts
I Like it, It's really nice!
08-04-2004 22:22Cowboy_Lover15 is offline Cowboy_Lover15 
633 posts
very awesome poem,i can relate to the top half,but not about me blowing it or anything,lol or about them loving someone else
09-04-2004 21:24PIERRO is offline PIERRO 
306 posts
i really like this piece its class
02-05-2004 19:322hot2handle2k3 is offline 2hot2handle2k3 
42 posts
gr8 poem well done
02-05-2004 20:53deftonedgirl is offline deftonedgirl 
339 posts
i love it! , keep 'em coming!
02-05-2004 20:54dismissed is offline dismissed 
10,611 posts
nice poem!!
25-05-2004 23:25Moddie is offline Moddie 
141 posts
That was great I can completely realte to the entire thing. Nice Work

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