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fields of your love

 
27-01-2004 02:45Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S  

179 posts
Now im chasing you
Through fields of glass and fire
Your making it so hard
But maybe this is how it should be
Blood is pouring from my vanes
But i'll run, ill run forever
Cause in the end i know you'll be waiting
No more struggling

Now im cut and burned
From the glass and fire you led me through.
But now i've got you
And in your heart i've found love
This can be anything or nothing at all
Im hoping for anything at all.




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27-01-2004 02:51pdub is offline pdub 

312 posts
thats good i like it keep it up
27-01-2004 02:53Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

179 posts
alright i notice you dont have any poems?

you should get some up in there so i can see what you have to say!
27-01-2004 02:54pdub is offline pdub 

312 posts
hahaha i cant write at all, sadly, but i like readin them
27-01-2004 02:56Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

179 posts
o well you should really try man its sooo fun!


and yeah i love reading what other people have to say...makes me feel good and sometimes gives me insperations
27-01-2004 02:58pdub is offline pdub 

312 posts
ill try ....when i have something to say and ill show yea...but until the keep writting u have crazy/madskillz too prime
27-01-2004 03:00Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

179 posts
hey go to "this love if you wanna look at any of my future work that is going to be my permanent thread instead of like 10 different ones
27-01-2004 03:03pdub is offline pdub 

312 posts
kapes....good idea
27-01-2004 03:49LuckixAngel is offline LuckixAngel 

135 posts
good poem. i like it.
27-01-2004 17:47jollie_jane is offline jollie_jane 

437 posts
a bit too mushy but still great
27-01-2004 17:49ice_white_tiger is offline ice_white_tiger 


14,780 posts
Again - good poem



* offtopic :
i know this has nothing to do with anything, but you spelt vanes wrong... its veins...

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