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  26-01-2004 20:09 the artist  
 
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Dark red
Trickles
Trickles down her arm
A special little secret
Known as self harm

Fiery red
Anger
Builds up deep inside
She's got to let these feelings out
But to who can she confide

Dark silver
Blade
Is the one that she trusts
The one that she turns to
When life becomes too much

Long white
Sleeves
To cover her pain
Hide her relief
Hide the cuts again




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  15-09-2005 00:51 FireWaterBurn 
FireWaterBurn
 
28,885 posts
Terrible. All cutting poems are.
  15-09-2005 00:54 torn_and_broken 
torn_and_broken
 
12 posts
if cutting poems are so horrible then don't read em
  15-09-2005 00:55 FireWaterBurn 
FireWaterBurn
 
28,885 posts
Nah, sometimes I need to remember what pat.... Nevermind, I'm not gonna say it.
  15-09-2005 00:59 torn_and_broken 
torn_and_broken
 
12 posts
ok...
  15-09-2005 00:59 FireWaterBurn 
FireWaterBurn
 
28,885 posts
You wanted feedback, you should be thanking me
  15-09-2005 01:33 Tyrannical_King 
Tyrannical_King
 
5,164 posts
Aren't poems about cutting going to end up a sort of dead style of poetry? There's only so much you can say about mindlessly cutting yourself. And in any case, I don't find it a very good thing to wallow in your pain and sit here writing poems about it.

But I forgot, no one is in real pain anymore, it's just the cool thing to do.
  15-09-2005 01:40 Naked_Shooter 
Naked_Shooter
 
806 posts
One, two, six, eight
com drips
As I masturbate
Five Six Nine four,
Wach out, don't slip on this floor


BTW I fill sorry for any of the people who can relate to artists poems
  15-09-2005 11:57 FireWaterBurn 
FireWaterBurn
 
28,885 posts
Are you trying to be funny? If so, you've failed.
  21-09-2005 16:25 LoveIsMySuicide 
LoveIsMySuicide
 
33 posts
That's good! I like to write Emo poems, too! I'm fixing to go post some of mine, but I don't think that ne of them are as good as yurs! lol! So, wow, I luv reading and writing these kindapoems, cuz one of my friends died by cutting herself... I hang w/ a hard crowd...I've never cut, but I know lots of people who do/have, and like, I said about my friend... anyways, keep up the writing! I'll read em til u stop! ~Linda
  21-09-2005 16:30 Roxy_Ryan 
Roxy_Ryan
 
21,759 posts
I've read all the poems in this thread... some were just mind-blowing... and eh, some weren't. Blah I have to admit that they've brought back the memories of when I used to slightly cut when my Mum left... and then memories of how I was strong enough to overcome the urges to mutilate my body so much that I'd have to end up hiding my body parts because of the ugly scars, and in the end I just stopped cutting.

You all have that kind of strength inside of you.
  25-09-2005 20:02 blackandblueme 
blackandblueme
 
1 posts
ok first of all to all of the people talking shit about cutters a big f-You! what the hell do you know about cutting? thats what i thought nothing. and if you think you do all i have to say is drop dead. and you know what, im going to post a poem about cutting and i dont give two shits what you or anyone else thinks of it. and to all of you who posted poems i loved them all dont take crap from anyone.

cut my wrists before you go oh
dont leave me here beind
cut my wrists before you go oh
just leave me here to die
cut my wrists before you go oh
make them deep so they will show oh
just leave me here to cry
cut my wrists before you go oh
just leave me here to die
cut my wrists before you go oh
just let me die on time.

  25-09-2005 20:10 FireWaterBurn 
FireWaterBurn
 
28,885 posts
How original.
  25-09-2005 20:20 NightHobbit 
NightHobbit
 
24,269 posts
original poems? I think not... it's all the same crap I see all over the itnernet it's an inane subject nothing original is ever written about it.

and dont say what the hell do i know about cutting.

i know alot been there got the t-shirt and for a pure fact it's the stupidest thing i have ever done in my life..becuase it's pointless and gets u no where.
  22-10-2005 22:49 HeartbrokenCut 
HeartbrokenCut
 
4 posts
i love all your poems! you are a great writer... i love to write poems to but yours are alot better than mine! keep writing.. i love to read your poems!
  13-12-2005 12:19 bom_diggity 
bom_diggity
 
91 posts
i no this thread is hell old but i have one i herd ages ago

she paints a pretty picture
but a picture with a twist
the paintbrush is a razor
and her canvas is her wrist
  13-12-2005 12:20 bom_diggity 
bom_diggity
 
91 posts
i made it
  13-12-2005 13:35 _ANARCHY_ 
_ANARCHY_
 
1,003 posts
Those poems are really nice, but maybe better kept private. You are a very good writer.
  24-02-2006 01:40 bloodyrazor4 
bloodyrazor4
 
1 posts
my arms are bleeding and i am crying all i hear is that same voice locked inside my head telling me 2 do it telling me never quit keep it up with all this blood every were the taste of it teh smell of it calms me down the crimson color looks so calming just knowing its from em and my bodie driping every were is peacefull blood falling off my arms calms me blood every were is peacefull cutting myself 2 make the blood helps the pain cutting helps the pain and i liek it i love the pain i love the suffering! i love the blood
  24-02-2006 10:56 NightHobbit 
NightHobbit
 
24,269 posts
^ you put shame to those who actually need help. I'm sorry had to be said.
  14-04-2006 02:35 confusedmisfit 
confusedmisfit
 
1 posts
cut
Then I placed the blade next to the skin on my palm. A tingle arced across my scalp. The floor tipped up at me and my body spirled away. Then I was on the ceiling looking down, waiting to see what would happen next. What happened next was that a perfect, straight line of blood bloomed from under the edge of the blade. The line grew into a long, fat bubble, a lush crimson bubble that got bigger and bigger. I watched from above, waiting to see how big it would get before it burst. When it did, I felt awsome. Satisfied, finally. Then exhausted.

he cuts himself. Never too deep, never enoguh to die. But enoguh to feel the pain. Enough to feel the scream inside.



DONT STEAL THIS





This is from a book called"Cut"Sorry but I dont like people stelling my work so I dotn think this person likes it either nxt time dotn steal from a book!Anyways that book is about a grl named callie not a guy>
  20-04-2006 02:59 shelly47 
shelly47
 
427 posts
No blood left inside me, no tears
No sight in my eyes, no sound in my ears
Empty, hollow and dead
Nothing but voices in my head
Loneliness, black and cold
I long for someone to hold
But no one can recognize
The one who is pain deprived
No one can see
The person who is me
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I cut to remember
I cut to forget
I cut to punish
And to show my regret
I cut to know I'm real
I cut to know I'm still alive
I cut to remind myself
That anytime i could die
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  20-04-2006 03:00 shelly47 
shelly47
 
427 posts
woops! damn lil symbol thingys made a lil emoticion

* offtopic :
i hate it when that happens
  20-04-2006 08:39 Tyrannical_King 
Tyrannical_King
 
5,164 posts
/emo cry cry pew pew

You'll grow out of your "I hate the world cause Im special and they dont understand me" phase kids, don't worry.

Unless its a way to bag chicks, then dont grow out of it, no.
  22-05-2006 02:13 hell_born 
hell_born
 
1,421 posts
f*cking emos.
  22-05-2006 02:58 Molle_Rulz 
Molle_Rulz
 
223 posts
You hate emo's, yeah we get it. So why bump one of their threads back to the top with a useless comment like that. This thread should have stayed dead and buried. Nice work idiot.

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