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27-10-2004 21:33 Bex4Benj |
1,197 posts
| WOW. oh the talent! oh the blinding talent!
kayleigh, i LOVE your poems, they really touched me inside. although i can't say i can particularly relate to the subject of them i can feel your pain in each one of them.  i hope life gets better for you and i definately think you should carry on writing. good luck on the future   |
| 28-10-2004 19:10 Kittie_Lover |
38 posts
| I think all of these are EXCELENT. I like to read something and know that there are other ppl that i can relate to in a BIG way. THANK YOU!  |
| 28-10-2004 19:22 Dekar |
36,178 posts
| Slice
Across the edge
Thin and sleek
So smoothly it slides
The river flows
A waterfall of liquid
Juicy and fleshy
Placed in between
Two parts of white
Add spice, and hence
I have a turkey sandwich |
| 08-11-2004 21:24 dying_alone |
2 posts
|  Honestly i have never ever shared anything with any one. But i am really suprised to see other people who cut like me expressing them self online with peoms i might try this.  |
| 08-11-2004 21:25 Cyd |
11,577 posts
| Matt's was simply beautiful. It made me cry.  |
| 08-11-2004 21:28 dying_alone |
2 posts
|
I try to stop cutting
it makes me feel in control
you don't know me at all
telling me to stop makes it worse
I keep slicing away
whats left of my soul
telling my self i can stop if i must
but mother will never know
about my scars
there everywhere reminding me
i am still here
still here alive
I just wrote this i don't know why either
are all you cutters? |
| 11-11-2004 21:58 Kittie_Lover |
38 posts
| These are really good. I can relate all too closly. Try flicking a rubberband on ur wrist when u feel like cutting. It's not the same but it does help! Trust me i know from experiance! |
| 25-03-2005 00:19 sweetrevenge04 |
54 posts
| that is awsume!!!!  |
| 23-05-2005 12:16 atreestump |
78 posts
| Angst, anyone? There's the chance that your "poems" could've turned out well but they're just the same repetitive teen drama bullshit that's all over the rest of the Internet. Your picture of quote un-quote "self-harm" is completely cliche--pretty pictures on your wrists... I'm sorry if that's how it is to you but you sound just like every other wannabe out there who's trying to be gothic by wearing costume make-up and carrying around their composition books with them wherever they go.
Thanks for taking the time to read this. You're a doll.  |
| 05-06-2005 00:06 PinkTurkey |
6 posts
| Your poems are amazing. Beautifully amazing. A lot of the poems i write are about cutting/suicide and i put my heart into all of them, they tell my story- i can tell by the emotion in your words that you put your heart into your poetry too. I would really appreciate it if you would read my poem under the post Sanity and give me your opinion! |
| 05-06-2005 00:14 lepper_messiah |
723 posts
| Why you would openly admit to the world that you like slicing your body up is beyond me.
All the poems about cutting and feeling pain have been done so many times before, it just gets a bit boring.
I'm not saying your poems suck or anything like that, just they all seem like generic 'I cut myself poems' |
| 09-06-2005 01:28 sadnessisme |
2 posts
| first of all artist that sayin u wrote that u said was by u n not to steal was in a book called cut that i got outta of the library at my school. n i kno how it goes the gurls gets back from runnimn she gets her mom x-acto knife thingy n presses it upon her wrist n she tells this story in the office at sea pines. so thats like bad cos u said it was urs but its really not  |
| 09-06-2005 01:31 sadnessisme |
2 posts
| n o yea artist it was a gurl not a guy if ur gonna steal ot make it right |
| 09-06-2005 02:49 Metal_Raiser |
487 posts
| HA, stupide emo shit. This thread has humored my day. |
| 15-06-2005 20:17 the_artist |
406 posts
| In reply to 'sadnessisme' all my poems are my own and are not stolen from anywhere. They helped me in bad times and that's what I did. I also have no idea which poem you are referring to as none of the poems in this thread (that are by myself) have any reference to guys. All these poems are about cutting and I don't talk about a guy in any of them. Somehow, I think you're getting your wires crossed here. If it's somebody else that has stolen or copied a poem then I'd be grateful for you not to accuse me of things like that and if any of my poems are similar to other peoples it is simply because a lot of people go through similar experiences to what I did. If any of the poems were not my own I would make it perfectly clear as I think it is wrong to steal others work and pass it off as your own. Thankyou to everyone else for your really great comments - much appreciated. Fair enough if you don't like my poems but I feel that constructive criticism is far more helpful than just taking the mickey.
Thankyou xxxx |
| 15-06-2005 20:34 Devils_Spawn |
389 posts
| i didn't get through all of them but the poems I did read were amazing! Keep writting |
| 16-06-2005 01:54 hotcake2 |
40 posts
| I wish this pain could get away
My promise i can't brake
I can't make it my way
Tried every single other way
Nothing works for me
This pain is still in me
It just can't be
Theres only one thing i want to do
Is cut myself and get away from u
They don't know how fine it feels
To see the blood release
All this tension dies
As i can't stand cry
Tears coming down my face
This is just another phase
One little cut is enough
But i promise just because of ...
Gravity pulls the knife
It wants to end my life
Don't want that happen
Play w/it like a pen
Draw in my skin
My uncome dreams
I become addicted
I need to quit it
But it feels so damn fine
The body is mine ... |
| 16-06-2005 05:17 CraZyPsycho1409 |
27 posts
| hi i really love the poems you write the artist your so good at writing i wish i was as good as you i have 3 poems on my page so you can look at them if you want i also love all other poems in this fourm thax jaimie |
| 17-07-2005 17:11 Unwanted_Cutter |
2 posts
| i love ur poems, i can so relate to them.....Don't stop writing! |
| 27-07-2005 01:46 wctmjg420 |
1 posts
| these poems are very good. to all who wrote them that is a good way to express. if anyone needs to talk about anything my aol is MRamsgurl05 and my msn is mollygrant370@hotmail.com and my yahoo is XxXdisturbedgurrl420XxX so let me know. |
| 06-08-2005 18:27 t_kk |
17 posts
| "the artist"... how long have u been goin through all this pain? |
| 06-08-2005 18:40 jonny0017 |
504 posts
| wow those poems are great! keep that up i'd love to read more  |
| 06-08-2005 18:47 jonny0017 |
504 posts
| oh and treestump... f*ck off because ur probably just jealous that u don't have any talent to be able to do this |
| 08-08-2005 04:12 FireWaterBurn |
28,885 posts
| Horrible job Hotcake |
| 15-09-2005 00:51 torn_and_broken |
12 posts
| the emptiness she feels
the lonelyness they ignore
she pushes them away
praying she dosen't have to stay
alone now
and alone then
she will never be loved
cause she won't let them in
she lets the razor do the deed
she cuts and cuts till she can no longer bleed
with each tear fall
she begins to lose it all
slice after slice
and peice by peice it seems
she bleeds like human
but she still don't understand
if i can bleed like human
feel the bitter emptiness
like human
why am i conviced i am not human?
people feed back please |
