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the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:09

Dark red
Trickles
Trickles down her arm
A special little secret
Known as self harm

Fiery red
Anger
Builds up deep inside
She's got to let these feelings out
But to who can she confide

Dark silver
Blade
Is the one that she trusts
The one that she turns to
When life becomes too much

Long white
Sleeves
To cover her pain
Hide her relief
Hide the cuts again

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the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:12

Take me
Take me in your hand
Draw a pretty picture
Go on
Take me
Go on
It's been so long
Take me
It'll make things better in the end
Take me
Go on
Upon me you shall depend
Take me
Go on
Cut deep this time
Cut in a place that they'll never find
Take me Go on

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:17

Cut when I feel happy
Cut when I feel sad
Cut when i feel good
Cut when I feel bad
cut because I want to
Cut for me
Not for you
Cut because it helps me
Cut because... I do

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:27

CUT

One cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four
I can't take it anymore
Five Cut
Six Cut
Seven cut
More
Watch the blood drip to the floor
This beautiful blood causes so much pain
This beautiful blood makes a beautiful stain
I just have to cut over and over again
It feels so good
Not like it should
I do it more than I ever thought I would
One cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four
I can't take it anymore
Five cut
Six cut
Seven cut
More
Watch the blood drip to the floor

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:28

She promises herself
It'll be just one more time
And then no more
but she's made these promises
A thousand times before
She's hidden the blade
Away from everyone else
somewhere she hopes she'll forget herself
but the whole world knows that she's depressed
the whole world knows her lifes a mess
What people don't understand is the reason why
And the reason why she needs to lie
Nobody understands why she can't be truthful
and be the person she longs to be
if somebody looked deep into her eyes
I wonder what they'd see
Would it be a fantasy life
Or would it be reality
Only she knows the answers
But she'll never tell
The reasons why her lifes a living hell

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:30

It's eating away at my body
Crawling over my skin
It's hiding deep inside me
This evil thing

It's taking over me
Won't let me go
Do I wan't it to leave?
I just don't know

It's taking over my mind
My body
My soul
And in my heart
It's left an unfillable hole

It's changed me as a person
For good or for bad
I want back the body
I used to have

I want back my mind
I want to be the old me
I want to be happy
I want to be free

But I can't be can I?
I can't be happy
When all I do is cry

It's eating away at my body
Crawling over my skin
It's hiding deep inside me
This evil thing

It's taking over me
Won't let me go
Do I wan't it to leave?
I just don't know

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:31

I draw a pretty picture
A picture on my wrist
The picture keeps getting bigger
Every time my feelings are dismissed

You think the words don't hurt me
That the actions don't cause me pain
You think that if I smile
I must be happy again

I'm not going to blame it on you
Because I know that its my choice
But it only ever happens
when you raise your voice

I hear the screams and shouts
And I reach out for the blade
I do it without thinking
Then I look at the mess I've made

It looks ugly and it stings
But it takes away the pain
And the hurt
Of all the other things

I know you'll tell me its wrong
If you ever find out
That's why I keep my arms covered
I don't want you to scream and shout

I keep my arms covered so no one else can see
The scratches ive made on my arms
There something that's private to me

tilly_570 | 26-01-2004 20:32

i like the first one best... all the others didn't really blow me away.. but keep writing

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:33

okay i know that some of these have had threads of their own but i thought i'd put my poems all into two different threads. one 'poems by me' and this one. a lot of my poems are on cutting so i thought well yea okay i'll shut up now. Any opinions/criticism would be great xx

the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:34

Thanks kelsey xx

space_budy | 26-01-2004 21:29

i love them all..........really can relate

lbp116 | 26-01-2004 22:40

They are really, really good!

...I can relate, too....

tilly_570 | 26-01-2004 22:49

hmm space_budy, you're one confusing person

before you were criticizing a cutting poem, saying that you couldn't relate, but now all of a sudden you can relate to these ones

(not saying anything bad about your poems though kayleigh, because i like them

)

Sammi13 | 27-01-2004 04:56

the first is def the best ... and i couldnt relate more. i think someone should do something about the fact that so many of these poems are about self mutalation ... and how so many relate

kinda sad ...

keep writing

pacified_gurl | 27-01-2004 07:54

Frig these poems are good! Yeah I agree the first one is the best, but the others are all great...
Wow they sound a bit like my poems, maybe I'll put them on someday...
I hope you aren't pulled too deep into this cutting stuff though....I know how addictive it can be, but it helps to talk to someone...

ignacio | 27-01-2004 07:55

Good poem

space_budy | 27-01-2004 14:36

u morons , when i meant i can relate i was making fun of ur little "i can relate" cliche' phrase......like c'mon think of something original.....its getting kinda boring you know...you should upgrade ur vocabulary and say something dif for a change....u know or all of ur posts sound exactly the same:

FAKE

anyhoooo...

the cow shall prevail

BoozinBecca | 27-01-2004 14:44

I like the first one and the sixth one the best! They're all really good!!

ghetto_ass_girl | 27-01-2004 14:52

hey chat w/me

ghetto_ass_girl | 27-01-2004 14:54

hey chat w/me

jollie_jane | 27-01-2004 17:51

*bump* read these ppl

AJC | 29-01-2004 06:10

You must need like 10 blood donations now!

The first one rocks! I didn't read the rest.

AJC

pidgeonbabe | 05-02-2004 20:28

hey those are really good poems, i was wondering if i could use them on my webpage or not? (u know those whole copyright things) so if im aloud to use them just e-mail me - baby_shaw@hotmail.com

rock on

the_artist | 15-02-2004 19:36

ADDICTED

Addicted to the pain
Addicted to the blade
Addicted to the scars
That will never fade

Addicted to the cuts
Addicted to the blood
Addicted to the one thing
That consumes all my love

Taste my pain
Feel my tears
become addicted
And taste my fears

Taste what i taste
Feel whst i feel
Become addicted
And you'll know that it's real

Addicted to the pain
Addicted to the blade
Addicted to the scars
That will never fade

Addicted to the cuts
Addicted to the blood
Addicted to the one thing
That consumes all my love

gumby | 15-02-2004 19:42

You have a lot of pain inside of you, don't you? You express it beautifully.

the_artist | 15-02-2004 19:52

thanks Liberty. A lot opf pain at the moment but not always. its just i only usually write when I'm down so i seem like im always down.

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