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     the artist

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     the artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:09
     
    Dark red
    Trickles
    Trickles down her arm
    A special little secret
    Known as self harm

    Fiery red
    Anger
    Builds up deep inside
    She's got to let these feelings out
    But to who can she confide

    Dark silver
    Blade
    Is the one that she trusts
    The one that she turns to
    When life becomes too much

    Long white
    Sleeves
    To cover her pain
    Hide her relief
    Hide the cuts again

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     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:12
     
    Take me
    Take me in your hand
    Draw a pretty picture
    Go on
    Take me
    Go on
    It's been so long
    Take me
    It'll make things better in the end
    Take me
    Go on
    Upon me you shall depend
    Take me
    Go on
    Cut deep this time
    Cut in a place that they'll never find
    Take me Go on
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:17
     
    Cut when I feel happy
    Cut when I feel sad
    Cut when i feel good
    Cut when I feel bad
    cut because I want to
    Cut for me
    Not for you
    Cut because it helps me
    Cut because... I do
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:27
     
    CUT

    One cut
    Two cut
    Three cut
    Four
    I can't take it anymore
    Five Cut
    Six Cut
    Seven cut
    More
    Watch the blood drip to the floor
    This beautiful blood causes so much pain
    This beautiful blood makes a beautiful stain
    I just have to cut over and over again
    It feels so good
    Not like it should
    I do it more than I ever thought I would
    One cut
    Two cut
    Three cut
    Four
    I can't take it anymore
    Five cut
    Six cut
    Seven cut
    More
    Watch the blood drip to the floor
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:28
     
    She promises herself
    It'll be just one more time
    And then no more
    but she's made these promises
    A thousand times before
    She's hidden the blade
    Away from everyone else
    somewhere she hopes she'll forget herself
    but the whole world knows that she's depressed
    the whole world knows her lifes a mess
    What people don't understand is the reason why
    And the reason why she needs to lie
    Nobody understands why she can't be truthful
    and be the person she longs to be
    if somebody looked deep into her eyes
    I wonder what they'd see
    Would it be a fantasy life
    Or would it be reality
    Only she knows the answers
    But she'll never tell
    The reasons why her lifes a living hell
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:30
     
    It's eating away at my body
    Crawling over my skin
    It's hiding deep inside me
    This evil thing

    It's taking over me
    Won't let me go
    Do I wan't it to leave?
    I just don't know

    It's taking over my mind
    My body
    My soul
    And in my heart
    It's left an unfillable hole

    It's changed me as a person
    For good or for bad
    I want back the body
    I used to have

    I want back my mind
    I want to be the old me
    I want to be happy
    I want to be free

    But I can't be can I?
    I can't be happy
    When all I do is cry

    It's eating away at my body
    Crawling over my skin
    It's hiding deep inside me
    This evil thing

    It's taking over me
    Won't let me go
    Do I wan't it to leave?
    I just don't know

     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:31
     
    I draw a pretty picture
    A picture on my wrist
    The picture keeps getting bigger
    Every time my feelings are dismissed

    You think the words don't hurt me
    That the actions don't cause me pain
    You think that if I smile
    I must be happy again

    I'm not going to blame it on you
    Because I know that its my choice
    But it only ever happens
    when you raise your voice

    I hear the screams and shouts
    And I reach out for the blade
    I do it without thinking
    Then I look at the mess I've made

    It looks ugly and it stings
    But it takes away the pain
    And the hurt
    Of all the other things

    I know you'll tell me its wrong
    If you ever find out
    That's why I keep my arms covered
    I don't want you to scream and shout

    I keep my arms covered so no one else can see
    The scratches ive made on my arms
    There something that's private to me


     tilly_570

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     tilly_570 says:
    026-01-2004 20:32
     
    i like the first one best... all the others didn't really blow me away.. but keep writing
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:33
     
    okay i know that some of these have had threads of their own but i thought i'd put my poems all into two different threads. one 'poems by me' and this one. a lot of my poems are on cutting so i thought well yea okay i'll shut up now. Any opinions/criticism would be great xx
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    026-01-2004 20:34
     
    Thanks kelsey xx
     space_budy

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     space_budy says:
    026-01-2004 21:29
     
    i love them all..........really can relate
     lbp116

    2,479 comments
     lbp116 says:
    026-01-2004 22:40
     
    They are really, really good!
    ...I can relate, too....
     tilly_570

    583 comments
     tilly_570 says:
    026-01-2004 22:49
     
    hmm space_budy, you're one confusing person before you were criticizing a cutting poem, saying that you couldn't relate, but now all of a sudden you can relate to these ones (not saying anything bad about your poems though kayleigh, because i like them )
     Sammi13

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     Sammi13 says:
    027-01-2004 04:56
     
    the first is def the best ... and i couldnt relate more. i think someone should do something about the fact that so many of these poems are about self mutalation ... and how so many relate

    kinda sad ...

    keep writing
     pacified_gurl

    993 comments
    027-01-2004 07:54
     
    Frig these poems are good! Yeah I agree the first one is the best, but the others are all great...
    Wow they sound a bit like my poems, maybe I'll put them on someday...
    I hope you aren't pulled too deep into this cutting stuff though....I know how addictive it can be, but it helps to talk to someone...
     ignacio

    14,843 comments
     ignacio says:
    027-01-2004 07:55
     
    Good poem
     space_budy

    29 comments
     space_budy says:
    027-01-2004 14:36
     
    u morons , when i meant i can relate i was making fun of ur little "i can relate" cliche' phrase......like c'mon think of something original.....its getting kinda boring you know...you should upgrade ur vocabulary and say something dif for a change....u know or all of ur posts sound exactly the same: FAKE
    anyhoooo...
    the cow shall prevail
     BoozinBecca

    321 comments
     BoozinBecca says:
    027-01-2004 14:44
     
    I like the first one and the sixth one the best! They're all really good!!
     ghetto_ass_girl

    7 comments
    027-01-2004 14:52
     
    hey chat w/me
     ghetto_ass_girl

    7 comments
    027-01-2004 14:54
     
    hey chat w/me
     jollie_jane

    437 comments
     jollie_jane says:
    027-01-2004 17:51
     
    *bump* read these ppl
     AJC

    169 comments
     AJC says:
    029-01-2004 06:10
     
    You must need like 10 blood donations now!

    The first one rocks! I didn't read the rest.

    AJC
     pidgeonbabe

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     pidgeonbabe says:
    005-02-2004 20:28
     
    hey those are really good poems, i was wondering if i could use them on my webpage or not? (u know those whole copyright things) so if im aloud to use them just e-mail me - baby_shaw@hotmail.com rock on
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    015-02-2004 19:36
     
    ADDICTED

    Addicted to the pain
    Addicted to the blade
    Addicted to the scars
    That will never fade

    Addicted to the cuts
    Addicted to the blood
    Addicted to the one thing
    That consumes all my love

    Taste my pain
    Feel my tears
    become addicted
    And taste my fears

    Taste what i taste
    Feel whst i feel
    Become addicted
    And you'll know that it's real

    Addicted to the pain
    Addicted to the blade
    Addicted to the scars
    That will never fade

    Addicted to the cuts
    Addicted to the blood
    Addicted to the one thing
    That consumes all my love
     gumby

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     gumby says:
    015-02-2004 19:42
     
    You have a lot of pain inside of you, don't you? You express it beautifully.
     the_artist

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     the_artist says:
    015-02-2004 19:52
     
    thanks Liberty. A lot opf pain at the moment but not always. its just i only usually write when I'm down so i seem like im always down.
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