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the_artist | 26-01-2004 20:09

Dark red
Trickles
Trickles down her arm
A special little secret
Known as self harm

Fiery red
Anger
Builds up deep inside
She's got to let these feelings out
But to who can she confide

Dark silver
Blade
Is the one that she trusts
The one that she turns to
When life becomes too much

Long white
Sleeves
To cover her pain
Hide her relief
Hide the cuts again

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gumby | 15-02-2004 20:02

My heart goes out to you.

I love you words, but I can't relate to them because I dont' cut. I know I'm assuming that you do cut, I'm sorry if my assumption is wrong. I write a lot too, its my release.

the_artist | 15-02-2004 20:08

no your assumption is right. I go through bad stages and good. I'm just going through a bad stage at the moment so yea. thanks for your kind words. I appreciate any comments on my poems or anything i've said so thankyou x

gumby | 15-02-2004 20:12

The first poem/song from the first page is very good.

the_artist | 15-02-2004 20:15

thankyou. have you posted any of your poems on here?

gumby | 15-02-2004 20:19

Oh no. I don't have the courage to share my songs (I'm in a band) with so many people just yet. I could never let so many people know me that well... but I will have to get over that when we get our EP out... and then our album...

the_artist | 15-02-2004 20:24

aaah wow you're in a band. thats so cool. id love to be in a band but i cant sing oir play any instruments so thats just a total impossibility (is that a word?)

gumby | 15-02-2004 20:27

Yes it is...

"Cradled in imposs... impossibilty"[i]

...my random AFI moments...

gumby | 15-02-2004 20:27

Damn it for not working...

Cradled in imposs... impossiblity

gumby | 15-02-2004 20:35

Sorry for taking over your thread. I have to go now, but I'll talk to you again sometime soon. I hope you are okay. Also, I can't spell... yay!

the_artist | 15-02-2004 20:39

that's okay feel fre to take over my threads whenever you want. speak to you again soon x

the_artist | 15-02-2004 21:40

**bump** wooh bumping my own threads- the sadness- o well **bump**

AnorexicTeen | 16-02-2004 20:51

I can relate. They're very good.

Cut me, Cut me.
Deep Deep Deep
Let me, See me.
Bleed Bleed Bleed.
I deserve it,
I was bad,
I ate so much,
I am so mad.
Cut me, Cut me.
Till I bleed.
Let me feel pain.
It's what I need.
Cut me, Cut me.
Till I cry.
Let me bleed.
Until I die.
--Andrea

lbp116 | 17-02-2004 04:15

those were all great!!!

...I really relate to them too...

the_artist | 17-02-2004 20:55

Thanks Andrea and Lori. thats a good poem Andrea x

AnorexicTeen | 17-02-2004 23:02

Thanks. Yours are really good.

chicken_nugget | 19-02-2004 15:48

why is every one so misserable ,cheerup!!!!

Lost0938 | 13-03-2004 17:21

wow i love ur Poems "the artist" they are very good.... i have one poem i wrote but its not half as good as the artist... it relates to cutting also

things start to get worse
beginning with just a whisper
than to a scream
the urge to cut gets deeper
the scream gets louder
its sending a message
a message for help
but no one hears
just me and the blade

jollie_jane | 15-03-2004 14:10

holy crap....artist i am soooo jealous....and u said i rite better than you...ya rite..i mean every single one of these poems totally blew me away...no exeptions...wow..u have sucha great talent...i mean...just wow......artist.....*bows in awe before the great poet*...words cannot describe ur talent...keep ritng

the_artist | 18-03-2004 21:47

thanks both of you. It's been a month and 4 days since i last cut now - go me . thanks jane but your poems are a lot better than mine and i wish i could write like you. I haven't written for so long . thankyou xx

darknessfallss | 20-03-2004 00:38

hey.. i've been cutting for a while now and i am just looking for people to talk to once in a while on msn maybe... is anyone here able to talk to me on msn? if so, post here and we'll talk! k... so yeah... that's all.
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icefyre | 23-05-2004 21:15

Theyre all very sad kayleigh,

you can tell when someone really writes from the heart. Be Strong

alina_boo | 25-05-2004 01:44

i think there all really good. u really grasped every thing u think and feel when u do it. like describing almost how u crave it. i have a feeling uv cut youself b4????

Wous | 25-05-2004 19:07

I think your poems are really beautiful and touching..

Do you have so much pain in you, or a friend does?

I really admire youre courage to express it this way, and share it with people you don't really know and you probably won't even see.

Really great poems!

Cheers!

STEPHONIX | 13-10-2004 09:24

those are really amazing poems. i can see you're feeling a lot of pain

Donnie_darko_77 | 27-10-2004 21:17

cut
Then I placed the blade next to the skin on my palm. A tingle arced across my scalp. The floor tipped up at me and my body spirled away. Then I was on the ceiling looking down, waiting to see what would happen next. What happened next was that a perfect, straight line of blood bloomed from under the edge of the blade. The line grew into a long, fat bubble, a lush crimson bubble that got bigger and bigger. I watched from above, waiting to see how big it would get before it burst. When it did, I felt awsome. Satisfied, finally. Then exhausted.

he cuts himself. Never too deep, never enoguh to die. But enoguh to feel the pain. Enough to feel the scream inside.

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