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26-01-2004 13:28femme7_4 is offline femme7_4  

467 posts
u take me for granted but the truth is i m precious
n u dont understand
that sooner or later it might be over n
there’ll be no more love at ur command

I dont know where to start, i m searching for the words
I m screaming inside but i still cant be heard
N i wish i could hate u
Because blight is so much the worse
when my heart slowly get broken
n u dont even show a little remorse
i wish i would grow up a brain
n see i give so much more than i recieve
but thats the price i had to pay
n somehow u gave me reasons to believe



i wrote this right now at work ;-) common, i m a trainee....... greets n hugs




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26-01-2004 13:36dismissed is offline dismissed 

10,611 posts
nice
27-01-2004 17:11jollie_jane is offline jollie_jane 

437 posts
its okay not ur best but keep riting
27-01-2004 17:21FireWaterBurn is offline FireWaterBurn 

28,885 posts
i cant tell you really tried to do a good job
27-01-2004 17:29Katka36 is offline Katka36 

11,063 posts
its nice!!

btw, hi curtis!!!
27-01-2004 19:55FireWaterBurn is offline FireWaterBurn 

28,885 posts
hey katka... nice try
27-01-2004 23:21Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

179 posts
its alright but you can use some improvement i look forward to seeing more of your work.

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check out my thread if you have any extra time i have like 10 poems!!! and i am in need of critisism
28-01-2004 11:31femme7_4 is offline femme7_4 

467 posts
thank u guys this is criticism i can use to get better!
28-01-2004 13:27x69x is offline x69x 

16 posts
These are relly great, personal experiences or just made up ???

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