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Love is so cliche

 
16-01-2004 02:52radiate86 is offline radiate86  

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I used to
Believe in your smile.
I used to
Believe in mine too.

But the saying is true—
“The grass is always greener
On the other side.”

So don’t speak
To my senses.
So don’t lie
To my heart.

From the mouth of an idealist—
“Better to have loved and lost
Than to never of loved at all.”

But don’t worry,
It wasn’t love.
But don’t worry,
I haven’t cried.

Led to believe—
“Actions speak
Louder than words.”

Well then that kiss
Spoke in a muffled tone.
Well then that kiss
Was but a lie.

Questions? Comments? Observations? lol




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16-01-2004 02:59radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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*bump bump bump*
16-01-2004 02:59ignacio is offline ignacio 

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16-01-2004 03:00EEC1186 is offline EEC1186 

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16-01-2004 03:01harmony_marion is offline harmony_marion 

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I'm so glad I'm not the person you were talking too...I'd be crying I'm sure, love or not. Very gooo, honest, and moving...
16-01-2004 03:01harmony_marion is offline harmony_marion 

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"good" not gooo
16-01-2004 03:03HeArTsHaPeDBoXx is offline HeArTsHaPeDBoXx 

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very good!!!
16-01-2004 03:03radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Aww thanks everyone! Haha I doubt he'd by crying...it wouldn't even phase him. lol
16-01-2004 03:13crazydazibaby is offline crazydazibaby 

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awww i like you're so good.. keep it up
16-01-2004 03:32radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Thanks Jess
16-01-2004 03:55KrZeeKLutZ is offline KrZeeKLutZ 

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Hehehehe I'm here to post again, and like always I LOVE IT! !!!!!
16-01-2004 04:45fishmunky is online fishmunky 


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thats the most creative thing ive seen on this forum....kudos to you....freakin brilliant
16-01-2004 20:22radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Thanks! That means a lot!

And as usual, you flatter me Julez!
16-01-2004 21:38jollie_jane is offline jollie_jane 

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i like it unlike all the other "love poems" this one actually shows some truth not lovey dovey *u hurt me, i cried crap* i really like it, its something i can definetly relate to *bump*
17-01-2004 04:08radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Thanks! Yea...I can't really relate to the love dovey stuff. lol It's sort of sad...
17-01-2004 04:10hurleysk8r05 is offline hurleysk8r05 

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annie is soo pretty.

i like it alot.
17-01-2004 04:34xXpunkrockerXx is offline xXpunkrockerXx 

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honestly its not like the best thing i have ever read but i do rlly rlly like it!
17-01-2004 20:09radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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*bump for Lev*
17-01-2004 20:23DNA_Maniac is offline DNA_Maniac 

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is it got a sense of hate in it?

YEEAA!

not so bad honey...
act not so bad!




* offtopic :
i will kill the first one whoewer says 'forget about levent..'




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17-01-2004 20:25radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Hahaha I love you. This is the one I thought you wouldn't like. But thanks.
24-01-2004 16:59BrandNew88AFI02 is offline BrandNew88AFI02 

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Annie, sorry I didn't comment on this one, but I love it!
27-01-2004 00:54Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

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this is awsome i love the way you incorporate quotes into the poem...real good stuff keep it comming!!
27-01-2004 17:14jollie_jane is offline jollie_jane 

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i love it...i read it again and its so amazing good job
27-01-2004 21:38radiate86 is offline radiate86 

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Thanks.
27-01-2004 22:31dismissed is offline dismissed 

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good i like it
27-01-2004 23:25Trevin_S is offline Trevin_S 

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i like this love poem !
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check out my work i need critisism!

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