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Love is so cliche

16-01-2004 02:52

radiate86

3,311 posts

I used to
Believe in your smile.
I used to
Believe in mine too.

But the saying is true—
“The grass is always greener
On the other side.”

So don’t speak
To my senses.
So don’t lie
To my heart.

From the mouth of an idealist—
“Better to have loved and lost
Than to never of loved at all.”

But don’t worry,
It wasn’t love.
But don’t worry,
I haven’t cried.

Led to believe—
“Actions speak
Louder than words.”

Well then that kiss
Spoke in a muffled tone.
Well then that kiss
Was but a lie.

Questions? Comments? Observations? lol

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16-01-2004 02:59 radiate86
3,311 posts	bump bump bump
16-01-2004 02:59 ignacio
14,843 posts
16-01-2004 03:00 EEC1186
60 posts
16-01-2004 03:01 harmony_marion
102 posts	I'm so glad I'm not the person you were talking too...I'd be crying I'm sure, love or not. Very gooo, honest, and moving...
16-01-2004 03:01 harmony_marion
102 posts	"good" not gooo
16-01-2004 03:03 HeArTsHaPeDBoXx
103 posts	very good!!!
16-01-2004 03:03 radiate86
3,311 posts	Aww thanks everyone! Haha I doubt he'd by crying...it wouldn't even phase him. lol
16-01-2004 03:13 crazydazibaby
8,210 posts	awww i like you're so good.. keep it up
16-01-2004 03:32 radiate86
3,311 posts	Thanks Jess
16-01-2004 03:55 KrZeeKLutZ
404 posts	Hehehehe I'm here to post again, and like always I LOVE IT! !!!!!
16-01-2004 04:45 fishmunky
22,057 posts	thats the most creative thing ive seen on this forum....kudos to you....freakin brilliant
16-01-2004 20:22 radiate86
3,311 posts	Thanks! That means a lot! And as usual, you flatter me Julez!
16-01-2004 21:38 jollie_jane
437 posts	i like it unlike all the other "love poems" this one actually shows some truth not lovey dovey u hurt me, i cried crap i really like it, its something i can definetly relate to bump
17-01-2004 04:08 radiate86
3,311 posts	Thanks! Yea...I can't really relate to the love dovey stuff. lol It's sort of sad...
17-01-2004 04:10 hurleysk8r05
7,842 posts	annie is soo pretty. i like it alot.
17-01-2004 04:34 xXpunkrockerXx
320 posts	honestly its not like the best thing i have ever read but i do rlly rlly like it!
17-01-2004 20:09 radiate86
3,311 posts	bump for Lev
17-01-2004 20:23 DNA_Maniac
4,823 posts	is it got a sense of hate in it? YEEAA! not so bad honey... act not so bad! * offtopic : i will kill the first one whoewer says 'forget about levent..' DRAGS 'N' ALCOHOL
17-01-2004 20:25 radiate86
3,311 posts	Hahaha I love you. This is the one I thought you wouldn't like. But thanks.
24-01-2004 16:59 BrandNew88AFI02
7,960 posts	Annie, sorry I didn't comment on this one, but I love it!
27-01-2004 00:54 Trevin_S
179 posts	this is awsome i love the way you incorporate quotes into the poem...real good stuff keep it comming!!
27-01-2004 17:14 jollie_jane
437 posts	i love it...i read it again and its so amazing good job
27-01-2004 21:38 radiate86
3,311 posts	Thanks.
27-01-2004 22:31 dismissed
10,611 posts	good i like it
27-01-2004 23:25 Trevin_S
179 posts	i like this love poem ! [/offtopic] check out my work i need critisism!