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poems from the mind of a 16 yr old

06-01-2004 04:48

GuitarGal5100

19 posts

hey.. ill post more if you like. i respect all opinions... please feel free to respond

tears streaming down a face
of hope shattered & failed dreams
bright blue eyes dart form place to place
seeing him still, she beams

Saddened feelings soon subside
as her joy returns
all emotions hidden inside
spilling out, they burn

she walks over to the body
she was once his obsession
crimson liquid spilled on the floor
she couldnt live w/ his rejection

for hours she's sat there
for hours she's cried
although there is no regret
it is now her turn to die

swallowed
I'm just wishing, and dreaming...
but never really seeing,
or believing, or even trying..
.i feel like dying.
the yearing inside will soon take me over,
i feel like i will never again see the day and its light
for the trying has killed my heart
the world has taken me over,
I can see the surface.
the water covered my face,
I don't know whether I'm swimming
up or down in this burning hell
frantically panicing in what Ive become
afraid of the past and what is to come,
seein what's made me the way i am
hating all that have tried to fix me
ill never return the being that i was
Don't leave me alone in the darkness,
please stay.
I love you so...
don't let me go...
they're coming to get me,
save me please!
but i know you wont come..
you never come,
all of the times ive needed your help
you never came,
you like me to suffer you want me to die
im sorry
im sorry
please dont leave me hear to cry
you keep me following,
but you never wait.
you leave me alone to burn in the sunlight.
come back to me my darling,
and we'll be together forever,
never again to part

Last Kill
Another day another life taken
sad to say but im not mistaken
people who do not value life
soon become close to a knife
it starts with just a cut here and there
then becomes more than you can bare
try to stop but its an addiction
stop the pain stop the affliction
you cant, you just keep going
away your life you will be throwing
add emotions on top of this
slowly you cut your wrists
warm scarlet painless guilt
watch it flow onto your quilt
see it seep into your bed
then remember things they have said
how your always on there mind
no. yourself you remind
nothing can change your decision
slow careful another incision
more of your essence spilling out from within
open a window to feel the wind
not much longer now you think
then it hits you and you sink
its getting dark and your getting clod
too bad your only 14 years old
yet your heart stull pumping pounding
your un-conscience yet subconsciencly doubting
shaking now veinds thumping violently hard
you've made drama, and you've stared
its over now you lie there still
your life is over,
this has bevAnother day another life taken
sad to say but im not mistaken
people who do not value life
soon become close to a knife
it starts with just a cut here and there
then becomes more than you can bare
try to stop but its an addiction
stop the pain stop the affliction
you cant, you just keep going
away your life you will be throwing
add emotions on top of this
slowly you cut your wrists
warm scarlet painless guilt
watch it flow onto your quilt
see it seep into your bed
then remember things they have said
how your always on there mind
no. yourself you remind
nothing can change your decision
slow careful another incision
more of your essence spilling out from within
open a window to feel the wind
not much longer now you think
then it hits you and you sink
its getting dark and your getting clod
too bad your only 14 years old
yet your heart stull pumping pounding
your un-conscience yet subconsciencly doubting
shaking now veinds thumping violently hard
you've made drama, and you've stared
its over now you lie there still
your life is over,
this has been your last killen your last kill

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06-01-2004 04:50 idiotic
556 posts	well done
06-01-2004 04:51 XxNirvanaxX
13,961 posts	Oh my gosh....so emotional, that was great! I truly loved it!
07-01-2004 04:31 tilly_570
583 posts	wow.. amazing poems
07-01-2004 09:26 AJC
169 posts	I like the knife one, the third one, thats sick! Flows awesomely! Did you mean to repeat yourself like that? What's the deal? The first one was, "Naaaaaaah!" Dragged out and slow! The second was universal, all people relate to that. That poem was illl! I like your stuff, keep writing! AJC
07-01-2004 09:38 knickers
325 posts	they were so powerfully wrote - i think alot of people can relate to them. - vicky xxx
09-01-2004 03:50 DarkNails23
3 posts	can you write more?
09-01-2004 20:53 radiate86
3,311 posts	I like them all. But I love the first one.
11-01-2004 04:31 GuitarGal5100
19 posts	Thanks Guys!! AJC... no.. i didnt mean to repeat my self... copy and pasting can screw those kinds of htings up.. my bad, i appologize, you wanted more.... Apparently you dont understand what you put me through and apparently you dont care! It seems as though you like to see me like this all brawled up and enflamed. Obviously you enjoy making my life misserable and obviosley your not going to stop. Need it not be said that you like my pain, my loss of reality, my gain of selfless respect. Shall you forever live off of my suffering for its the only way you survive. Being my strife is your way of life May I always be in pain for it is yet the only way you continue to live like you do. Will I ever forgive you You make my life H*!! I will forever forgive you, But I will never forget. this is kidna dumb, but it came to really fast and i liked the cornyness of it... can i not eat my pizza in peace? with out seeing you popping up in my head. with out listening to your comments running through my head Cant I go to sleep with out thoughts you have polluted me with thoughts you have controlled me with Thoughts that you have harmed me with w Is it not possible that I read my book with out your dreams of popularity in my head with out your dreams of being the queen with out your dreams of being "IT" So it seems that i cant live my life with out you wondering where I am going wondering what I am doing wondering why I exsits and if that is the case I bet i cant live my life with out you always knowing that I really dont care. ~~~~~ I am surrounded in your sea of sorrow engulfed in your oucean of pitty ive been embellished in your misery I have sunk in the lake of your unhappiness when you finnaly die from depression please feel free to take me too. ~~~~~~~ you ment everything to me you were always there you'd just appear you were always in sight I went back to you then I always needed you I was with you I always returned Now; You mean nothing to me you are never here you've been erased your no where insight I leave you now I never really needed you I have been decived I shal not go back ....coments... someone please answer this.. what does this little guy mean, what is he doing ? .... is he drinking? .. thats bad..... in anycase... Emi's outie
11-01-2004 06:03 _aria_
9 posts	umm.. i think he is saying 'cheers' maybe. I love your writing. it's inspiring, well the talent is and it is really accurate hai. i hope one day im half as good as you.
11-01-2004 06:07 _aria_
9 posts	umm.. i think he might represent 'cheers'. I love your writing, your talent is so apparent, i hope i can be as good as you one day
12-01-2004 00:54 jollie_jane
437 posts	WOW i am so jealous that i cant rite as well as u omg that was prolly the most beautiful thing i have ever heard wow
13-01-2004 00:23 AJC
169 posts	What's wrong with drinking? It could be OJ Guiiiiiiitarrrrrr! That first one was moving. That little annoying person who won't piss of in the first one... Is a FUCK! Everyone has one! The pizza one was corny, quite right about that! I didn't read the third one though, I lost interest after the second. Keep posting! AJC
27-01-2004 17:56 jollie_jane
437 posts	bumpppl read this...i love these poems...i memorized last kill and recite it to my friends all the time lol