07-11-2009 04:24 Fwuitwoop |
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| This is my very first poem :/ not sure if im done yet or not, tell me what you think 
Sorry Momma
She yelled again.
I'm not perfect.
I'll never be perfect.
"I'm sorry momma"
"I'll do better next time"
She yells louder.
I cry, hoping my tears will stop this noise.
Flash Forward
I'm numb.
I'm alone.
I reach for my only friend.
oh how i love you razor blade.
your not like daddy, or momma
your always there,
remind me im alive,
you don't yell,
and my pale white skin is perfect for your now crimson covered blade.
??? it doesnt sound finished... idk what to do to it though. suggestions pleassee |
