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well i suck but i guess u all know that already...
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@ 09-11-2003 13:41 QueenDarling | 10,250 posts
| yeah so i thought writing songs was as bad as it gets but today i wrote some sorta something thats a little like a POEM!  yes, this is shocking. i dont write poems. i just dont. so yeah. thats mainly the reason this one sucks....
constructive criticism please....
Traumatized
I remember when you first came along
When you first walked into my life
When everything was going wrong
And I most needed someone around
When I needed to be found
And there you were
Reaching out for me
Chasing me
Calling me
It was you
Wanting me
And now it's me
Only me
Lonely
You left me scared
Scared to look a boy in the eye
Scared to fall for another guy
Scared to lead
Scared to need
Scared to love
Scared to apologize
You left me traumatized
Traumatized for life
I gave you love
I gave you everything I had
Then I gave you mpre
I thought you were the only one my heart was for
But you let me go
Without first letting me know
You let me drop
I fell from the top
And there you left me
Lying on the floor
Staining the carpet
With blood droplets
Streaming out of my crushed heart
I wanted to make you shudder
I wanted to make you scream
I wanted to run for cover
For it all to have been a bad dream
When I opened my eyes
You were gone
You just walked
Right out of my room
Right out of my house
And right out of my life
I'll never forget you
Because you taught me so much
You taught me what it's like to hurt
And what it's like to break
And you forced me to learn
To leave it all behind
To get you off my mind
And now when I say it i know its true
Whatever doesn't kill you
Makes you stronger |
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 0  @ 09-11-2003 16:38 QueenDarling | 10,250 posts
| no i dont have a tune for it.  my other songs have tunes tho.  | | 0 @ 09-11-2003 18:07 ice_white_tiger | 
14,492 posts
| lol you think i'm the actress type?
I admit, i thought about drama for a while. Hell, i still think about it now, but... i dunno. I guess i dont really know why i didnt go for it.
Mind you, i like being 'the mind' behind it, you know? I like writing up ideas and I'm thinking about maybe possibly going into script-writing when I'm older.
But then there's the whole dramam inkling in the back of my mind... i dunno. it's a long story...
But still, now that i think about it, you do seem the actress type. You're always bouncy and funny and stuff, you can tell... you'd make a good lil actress... |
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