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The Crimson Snow
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@ 07-11-2003 14:39 kremitzki | 14 posts
| This is a song that I wrote some months back.
THE CRIMSON SNOW
You never let me to be
It is always hard to see
I search for truth in the lies
It will come as a surprise
But no-one here seems to care
For all the things that I dare
I walk in the crimson snow
Where I'm going no-one knows
I can't see as usual
The path ahead to unfold
Move along and hope one day
I'll get there and there I'll stay
I might be weak but could get strong
Just for now I'll trudge along
But no-one seems to really care
Whether or not I will make my way there
As I venture in this day
It will never go away
It's just too hard to comprehend
Things I've done -- a deadly sin
I hope to sever these lies
It just don't seem to compromise
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 0  @ 07-11-2003 15:00 little_girl | 
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| hmmm...I like | | 0 @ 07-11-2003 15:03 Violent_Jones | 2,600 posts
| I actually rather like that... nice rhyming scheme, I was just wondering if you are connecting the crimson snow to the fact of the deadly sin... if so you might want to make that a little clearer.
Other than that its a right fine effort. Keep it up. | | 0 @ 07-11-2003 16:03 kremitzki | 14 posts
| There's somewhat of a connection there. "The Crimson Snow" is my symbolism of life. The deadly sin is just one of few paths people cross in the crimson snow. |
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