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scribbles of mine.
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@ 17-10-2003 10:44 fruity | 
12,214 posts
| hey everybody. it seems like the army has some kind of a tendency 2 inspire me 2 write. so here I'm gonaa share wit u some of the things I wrote there during the last 2 weeks. I didn't manage 2 bring all of the stuff wit me yesterday when I came back, therefore I'll add them next week (btw- I'm finishing my course on a week and 2 days {but who's counting? lol} and I'm gonna b here on an every-day basis again. c this as an official warning.) so here they r! (don't shoot me)
A tender breath,
although it's last.
A softened smile,
just for a while.
That sweet-heared tone,
before there's none.
Quick blink of eye,
and then
she dies
so beautiful and so divine,
just like she was afore months-nine.
A kiss from God,
a drop of blood,
a new-born child,
and mother's
gone.
this one has a special meaning 4 me, and if any of u would get it, then my purpose is fulfilled-
You were my eyes.
You were my soul.
You were my heart.
You were my whole.
No hands to hold.
No mouth to speak.
Just two strong legs
and wish to seek
the hidden eyes,
the hidden soul,
the hidden heart
that kept it all,
the hands that held,
the mouth that talked,
but all that's found
are legs
that walked
the endless way
into nowhere,
since all I had
was lie to bear.
and this one I wrote just two days ago-
You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?
Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?
tht would b it 4 now. I'll b glad 2 c wht u think of them- and the most important thing- b honest! |
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 0  @ 10-11-2003 20:48 fruity |
12,214 posts
| yello, fatso! boy, don't you have some belly for yourself... keep that going lol..
and I DO like my name... it's too much of a long story, and everyone here are already tired of hearing it, so... no new name for moi as for now, thanky. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 20:55 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| Well what do I call you then? "Hey you?" hehehe
Whatever you're comfortable with is what I'll use.  | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 20:56 fruity |
12,214 posts
| Neta would be just fine. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:07 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| Did you know that if you rearrange the letters in your name, it spells "neat"! I think you're neat, neta! | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:09 fruity |
12,214 posts
| why, I'm all blushy and red, santa! now, that must be the very biggest compliment anyone ever paid me! oh, goshy, please stop it!  | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:13 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| Duck, duck, duck, duck, duck, duck, duck, duck, duck, SILLY GOOSE! [runs] | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:13 fruity |
12,214 posts
| noooooo.. don't call me silly.. God, i beg of you.. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:14 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| God? I'm Santa! | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:16 fruity |
12,214 posts
| yea, Matt's God, I was talking to him. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:18 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| El_mono_loco or Dekar? I don't know about you, but they both remind me of the people who sit in trees outside your window late at night. Sometimes I think they're working together.  | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:23 myangel | 2,616 posts
| I just wanted to let you know that I thought your poems were incredible - I had tears in my eyes. They really touched me as I'm having a bit of a rubbish time and it was almost as if you were reading my mind!
Keep it up, you obviously have great talent! | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:24 fruity |
12,214 posts
| oh, they do. but shoosh about it, don't tell anybody *whispers* it should be a secret...
and it was Matt I was referring to. private joke with a guy who has greatness craze. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:24 fruity |
12,214 posts
| lol. I meant Dek. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:27 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| A greatness craze? Hmm, sounds like someone who needs a little coal and cabbage rolls in his stocking to deflate that head. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:32 fruity |
12,214 posts
| thank you, myangel, I really appriciate it!
and santa, leavehim alone. I like him that way, and so does everybody else. he deserves it, he's KingDekar. | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 21:37 Joe_Incognito | 344 posts
| Well maybe he likes coal and cabbage rolls! I certainly do! Uh huh!
Actually I was just saying that. Mrs. Clause is gone now. I HATE cabbage rolls!!!  | | 0 @ 10-11-2003 22:25 Dekar | 36,095 posts
| Aw, thank you, Neta!
*whispers* Thanks, Joe. Here's $20 for your help. | | 0 @ 11-11-2003 16:40 fruity |
12,214 posts
| mm.. my new red and white dress doesn't make me santa yet!! I should be the one to get the 20$, not him!! (heeeeere's granny again! lol)
ah.. the things i can do with 20$..
* offtopic :
starts humming "if I was a rich man" to herself while changing it to "if I was a rich gal"
| | 0 @ 11-11-2003 19:04 fruity |
12,214 posts
| it's a dead end way.
I'm surrounded by trees.
by myself.
a cry is heared in the distance.
it's the wind.
it's me.
am I allowed to dream just this once?
are dreams supposed to come true?
too many questions,
and a dead end way.
the door to your soul
is locked
and only for me.
only for me
the dreams
have dead ends. | | 0 @ 13-11-2003 18:02 fruity |
12,214 posts
| as the vail's taken off
and your eyes are shown
it's no longer a mystery to me.
now the fog is cleared,
and the truth is said
loud and clear
loud and clear, my dear.
the things you used to say,
are now meaningless towards the never ending path,
since now I know the one thing that'll save me-
you are so beautiful,
yet so ugly.
| | 0 @ 05-12-2003 21:51 fruity |
12,214 posts
| not anymore, I can't.
beneath me- an abyss.
above me- yourself,
streching wide
like an arc
a protection from the rain.
I can't choose.
I won't choose.
hand's lifted.
lips tightened.
forbidden
yet
done.
and I don't know anymore
it's our last lesson of life.
lies
are the bitterest
lesson of life. | | 0 @ 24-12-2003 22:08 fruity |
12,214 posts
| yesterday you came home silent,
didn't say a word.
I was sitting in the corner,
doing what you told.
from time to time I passed a stare,
a try for clue, for hint.
just when I thought you didn't care
you started showing glints.
"enough," you said,
"I had enough,
can't live through no more pain."
and then from nowhere there's a gun,
and big red bloody stain.
yesterday you came home silent,
I didn't say a word.
maybe if I did say something
I still had you to hold. | | 0 @ 24-12-2003 22:10 Stomper47 | 497 posts
| very good  | | 0 @ 24-12-2003 22:18 fruity |
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| thank you! | | 0 @ 24-12-2003 22:29 Artisti | 53 posts
| Very good... feels like some of them have a deeper meaning that I can't see... |
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