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@ 17-10-2003 10:44 fruity | 
12,214 posts
| hey everybody. it seems like the army has some kind of a tendency 2 inspire me 2 write. so here I'm gonaa share wit u some of the things I wrote there during the last 2 weeks. I didn't manage 2 bring all of the stuff wit me yesterday when I came back, therefore I'll add them next week (btw- I'm finishing my course on a week and 2 days {but who's counting? lol} and I'm gonna b here on an every-day basis again. c this as an official warning.) so here they r! (don't shoot me)
A tender breath,
although it's last.
A softened smile,
just for a while.
That sweet-heared tone,
before there's none.
Quick blink of eye,
and then
she dies
so beautiful and so divine,
just like she was afore months-nine.
A kiss from God,
a drop of blood,
a new-born child,
and mother's
gone.
this one has a special meaning 4 me, and if any of u would get it, then my purpose is fulfilled-
You were my eyes.
You were my soul.
You were my heart.
You were my whole.
No hands to hold.
No mouth to speak.
Just two strong legs
and wish to seek
the hidden eyes,
the hidden soul,
the hidden heart
that kept it all,
the hands that held,
the mouth that talked,
but all that's found
are legs
that walked
the endless way
into nowhere,
since all I had
was lie to bear.
and this one I wrote just two days ago-
You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?
Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?
tht would b it 4 now. I'll b glad 2 c wht u think of them- and the most important thing- b honest! |
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 0  @ 24-01-2005 18:03 vandy | 
9,508 posts
| *eyebrows raise*
you know what?
I think that is really, really good. | | 0 @ 25-01-2005 17:43 Dekar | 36,095 posts
| *puts out his cigarrette and takes a sip from his double-latte*
Splendiferous. | | 0 @ 14-02-2005 01:27 JayMay321232 | 217 posts
| Love the poems!   | | 0 @ 15-02-2005 11:46 neamior | 1 posts
| wooooow  you're GOOOOD, love the poems! keep 'em coming  | | 0 @ 18-02-2005 22:29 fruity |
12,214 posts
| but I thought that you were
gone.
at nights
I think I can still hear that
song
you used to
hum
at nights
to me.
like a soft sound of a
piano
combined with some
beat
and violin.
I close my eyes
and bleed
a sea
of thoughts of
you
of
who
you were
and what you said.
I thought you were gone
but could never be sure.
wrap a velvet ribbon
of feelings that are
immortal
and the sand clock turns over.
I thought you were gone,
but you're not.
as long as there's sun to rise
and dirt
in that clock
you'll be
right here
burning
in the flames of my hate.
I'll never forget.
what you did. | | 0 @ 23-02-2005 05:35 acoustic_soul | 22 posts
| i love your poems. i love to write poetry, i havn't for a while, been slakin. but i deffinetly love it and need to start writing more. reading everyone elses poems are so inspirational! | | 0 @ 07-03-2005 17:37 fruity |
12,214 posts
| lol I hope I won't get banned for that hehe.. anyways, you know ME and there's no way in the world I could write erotica.. enjoy 
lately
you've been kissing me
in the strangest ways.
your lips move,
but your eyes wander
and your mind's abstracted.
as I breath
and moan
and shout,
you remain silent,
still,
almost not moving a muscle
while you're kissing me.
your hands are cold.
your lips are cold.
my heart is burning with passion
for you.
but lately
you kiss me
in the strangest ways,
mechanicaly, they'd say,
and I shall not wonder.
mechanical indeed are the deeds
of a man whose heart
can not beat. | | 0 @ 24-03-2005 19:09 fruity |
12,214 posts
| I'm saying goodbye to a day.
goodbye to a way.
to something that's lost
and is gone.
I'm saying goodbye to a friend.
goodbye to a hand.
that once held me
and now all hers' done.
I'm saying goodbye to a place.
goodbye to a face.
to the moments that passed.
I'm saying goodbye to a smile,
goodbye for awhile.
and I wish you the best. | | 0 @ 26-03-2005 16:45 fruity |
12,214 posts
| tell me the story you refuse to tell
about the people who refused to love
and the darkness that was always there
and the feelings that have far long dove
tell me the words you will never say
with that tone you will never use
tell me the truth as for just today
I am ready to leave and lose. | | 0 @ 26-03-2005 16:57 Dekar | 36,095 posts
| A poem of mine to contribute...
Dial-up internet sucks big fat arse
Errors 404, run-time, and even parse
It's a pain in the butt and never stays on
By the time it does, your friends are gone
I traded it in a long time ago
For high-speed broadband internet, yo
Right now I suggest to give up on it
Because dial-up internet is a piece of...crap | | 0 @ 26-03-2005 17:08 fruity |
12,214 posts
| psht and you say i write better poems than you do. man, the verse "Right now I suggest to give up on it
Because dial-up internet is a piece of...crap" is a masterpiece of poetry and i'm in awe of its sacrecy | | 0 @ 26-03-2005 17:09 Dekar | 36,095 posts
| Good poetry, and sound advice. | | 0 @ 26-03-2005 17:23 fruity |
12,214 posts
| a sound and good intentioned advice, yet not a very usable one on my case..  | | 0 @ 04-04-2005 20:59 fruity |
12,214 posts
| when people who work with me heared the Hebrew version of that poem (it was originally written in Hebrew, I just translate it now... sounds better in Hebrew), they got scared and pleeded me not to kill myself. TOTALLY missed the idea. I'll let you be the judges-
the sides of the sink got red.
the salt got diluted in the broken blood.
your heart's wounds won't recuperate
and that pain didn't start from the outside
astonished to your yearnings
want to wish, but aspire to cease
my views are not yours since long ago.
let the insanity inside me grow.
(it rhymes in Hebrew..) | | 0 @ 17-04-2005 15:24 fruity |
12,214 posts
| truth be told-
I love you not.
truth be told-
you're just a thought.
truth be told-
Im never sure.
truth be told-
I got to lure.
truth be told-
I can't be now.
truth be told-
I can't see how.
truth be told-
I got you caught,
but even you
do love me not. | | 0 @ 17-04-2005 15:57 dontavvaclue | 1,290 posts
| You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?
Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?
ok i know this is one of your first ones but i read it and WOW i can completely relate to what that one says its moving 
| | 0 @ 17-04-2005 16:32 fruity |
12,214 posts
| hehe thank you I'm glad you liked it | | 0 @ 26-04-2005 21:10 fruity |
12,214 posts
| I've been missing you today.
is that okay
that I've been missing you today?
promised I wouldn't cry,
but that's alright.
I also promised I wouldn't miss you
tonight.
I made a bag with all your stuff.
you said,
I know,
you had enough.
hence I'm not there,
I turned away.
but I'm still missing you today.
keep looking at the door,
it's still.
I wonder what you really feel
I tired you,
that's what you say..
can't help but missing you today. | | 0 @ 28-04-2005 01:40 Burnt_Offerings | 2 posts
| The first poem you wrote was very touching..keep it up! | | 0 @ 28-04-2005 01:42 Pepsi_226 | 2,030 posts
|  yummy poem. | | 0 @ 07-05-2005 17:26 fruity |
12,214 posts
| thank you so much, guys! | | 0 @ 07-05-2005 23:17 Dekar | 36,095 posts
| Gonna write
Wanna fight
I invite
I take flight
And tonight
You are right
I am tight
And despite
All your fright
You need light
To have sight
To ignite
The bomb site
Overnight
Overwrite
Over might
Yellow light
At first sight
To excite
The white knight
Play it right
Be polite
Out of mind
Out of sight | | 0 @ 20-05-2005 22:11 fruity |
12,214 posts
| you called her beautiful?
yea, that's what she was thinking.
and the moment that your eyes met she clearly knew.
too much in one place is never enough.
it's never what she intended to make.
let your eyes drift away
from her
'cause she doesn't worth it
she doesn't care
go find someone who will
who'll appriciate you,
stop calling her "too good to be true".
she isn't, you know.
I'm not crying
I'm just sad
I guess I made my own bed
it's not your fault
I'm weird like that
I'm going to die alone.
you want to fly to America with me?
wow so that's the way the blind can see
for a moment there i thought
we were having something. | | 0 @ 20-05-2005 22:21 its_all_bout_me | 409 posts
| your poetry is v.beautiful and your extremely talented. your poems bring goosepimples to my arm. | | 0 @ 20-05-2005 22:50 fruity |
12,214 posts
| omg Rosy that is such a nice thing of you to say! thank you so much, you really made my day with that comment! |
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