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@ 17-10-2003 10:44 fruity | 
12,214 posts
| hey everybody. it seems like the army has some kind of a tendency 2 inspire me 2 write. so here I'm gonaa share wit u some of the things I wrote there during the last 2 weeks. I didn't manage 2 bring all of the stuff wit me yesterday when I came back, therefore I'll add them next week (btw- I'm finishing my course on a week and 2 days {but who's counting? lol} and I'm gonna b here on an every-day basis again. c this as an official warning.) so here they r! (don't shoot me)
A tender breath,
although it's last.
A softened smile,
just for a while.
That sweet-heared tone,
before there's none.
Quick blink of eye,
and then
she dies
so beautiful and so divine,
just like she was afore months-nine.
A kiss from God,
a drop of blood,
a new-born child,
and mother's
gone.
this one has a special meaning 4 me, and if any of u would get it, then my purpose is fulfilled-
You were my eyes.
You were my soul.
You were my heart.
You were my whole.
No hands to hold.
No mouth to speak.
Just two strong legs
and wish to seek
the hidden eyes,
the hidden soul,
the hidden heart
that kept it all,
the hands that held,
the mouth that talked,
but all that's found
are legs
that walked
the endless way
into nowhere,
since all I had
was lie to bear.
and this one I wrote just two days ago-
You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?
Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?
tht would b it 4 now. I'll b glad 2 c wht u think of them- and the most important thing- b honest! |
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 0  @ 27-08-2004 14:23 fruity |
12,214 posts
| aw haha thank you blondi... mm for a moment there.. well.. anyways, thank you. but my poems just go on and on about the same subject. nothing to special about them but it's sweet you said that. here's a bowing smiley for you!  (you just click on it lol) | | 0 @ 28-08-2004 18:24 fruity |
12,214 posts
| I died today.
I died today.
I wished to take you with me,
but you were away.
so I died today.
alone
I died today.
the red and yellow mixed up.
and it's a burden on my shoulders.
so here,
I die today.
to make it easier
on either way
I'll die today.
the lock is getting shaky
it isn't going to last.
you thought I'd be that strong
but I'm not
anymore.
I died today.
you probably haven't noticed,
since you were away,
but I died today.
on sanctification of your name
I die today.
why, I cannot say
but I die today
I'm here for you no more. | | 0 @ 01-09-2004 20:24 fruity |
12,214 posts
| you would be great for me to love
you would be great for me to love.
to lay my soft gracious care upon.
would be great to be bestowed.
to have me giving all I have in whole to.
you would be great for me to need.
as a solid base for trust
for voice
for knowing.
you would be great for me to want.
to lust without a fear,
to have without a doubt.
be great for me to steal
for precious moments in time that is still,
for days that join together as beads on a magnificent brcaelet
called ever after.
but you
without a word
have made it clear-
you will not love
you will not give
you will not need
you will not want
and you will not steal.
you
would be great for me
to dream. | | 0 @ 03-09-2004 17:26 fruity |
12,214 posts
| scream
scream, in my ears,
in my soul,
in my whole,
so I'll listen.
scream,
dream, is no more,
out of store
blow my mind
with the truth.
it's time for me
to realize,
out of my mind.
stop deluding me..
you're not deluding me..
but you got to make it clear
so please
scream
scream, in my ears,
in my soul,
in my whole
so I'll listen.
I
cannot control
what my soul
has in mind.
it's time for me to realize..
aw
you got to make me realize,
I'm begging you to
scream,
scream, in my ears,
in my soul,
in my whole
so I'll listen.
scream
scream. | | 0 @ 03-09-2004 18:07 vandy | 
9,526 posts
| Neta...you're so talented...but it sounds like you're being tortured, babe.
 | | 0 @ 03-09-2004 18:11 AstralPhoenix | 779 posts
| you write beautifully !
Alexandra | | 0 @ 03-09-2004 18:48 fruity |
12,214 posts
| aw thank you guys!
and, yes, Meggy, I am kinda tortured.. hehe but that's what life's all about, right? lol | | 0 @ 13-09-2004 20:46 fruity |
12,214 posts
| heh.. it's not really a poem. I don't really know what it is. it's a note, I guess. a lil scribble of feelings that must get outside. sorry for being like "that" again.
as it
seems
I'm whole drowning.
and cannot
see
my
surroundings.
it's not what I want anymore
I don't want to drown anymore
but I'm still
pushing myself into water.
and it's hard..
to see my desires drift away
from me
and to know I will never
see
no
what I need to see.
but I want to end this life,
it's not for me.
I need to end this life
can't let it be
anymore.
please, God
please,
dear God
I need this,
I promise.
I'm sorry,
I promise.
can't live another day
without
it.
and it's not for me.
not this time,
not ever.
will never.
you think I'm lying,
but I'm truthful.
is spoken from the heart.
and I still don't understand,
why anyone else can find it,
but only for me it's still a mystery,
and I need it the most.
I can't keep drowning anymore.
I need my air.
please
give me my air.
| | 0 @ 14-09-2004 04:44 AstralPhoenix | 779 posts
| you will have your "air" honey, you have to open your "nose" for that though if you know what i mean... "air" is in many places, in the most unexpected ones... don't focus only on one perticular destination... "air" can be right where you are.
Alexandra | | 0 @ 14-09-2004 20:01 fruity |
12,214 posts
| haha Alex you're so cute 
Satan is my angel.
you always have been.
say that evil attracts the best of me.
I shall not believe.
Satan is my angel.
angel is my angel.
but angel is Satan for me.
unrecieved love is satan for my heart
its burning arrows
are actual sweet words of innocence.
I close my eyes and red hot sign
is drawn on my eye lids.
its the seething mark of painful love,
of pure grace,
of passionate mistake.
my angel drew it.
the day it became my Satan. | | 0 @ 15-09-2004 15:55 AstralPhoenix | 779 posts
| WOW woman i started reading it and i thought you turned all satanistic, clutish on me !!! YABALEEEE
you got me a bit confused lol
Alexandra | | 0 @ 23-09-2004 20:21 fruity |
12,214 posts
| it's the end of the game for you
and you knew it from the start.
you loved me, you wanted
you failed me.
I refuse to feel the same,
but I don't blame you for trying.
there were times.. it was a burden for me too.
you considered the silence,
and it was never an option for me.
as much as I'm scared,
I am brave for the friendship.
but maybe,
you're scared of the pain.
since nights will come and go,
and we will never have a night for our own,
not if I have anything to do about it.
but I don't blame you for trying,
I don't blame you for trying, my dear.
sometimes I feel the burden too. | | 0 @ 24-09-2004 13:56 fruity |
12,214 posts
| eh.. I don't know what that is..
you're my medical pain,
medical pain..
feed me struggles
and strain,
medical pain.
I go out of my mind,
and can't seem to find,
a cure and a stand
for my medical pain.
for each every ache
is there to protect
is there to resolve
my terrible acts.
it's my medical pain,
my metaphore shot,
to keep me alive,
to keep me from not
seeing clear as I should,
getting misunderstood,
by you who refrains
as my medical pain. | | 0 @ 24-09-2004 18:06 Dekar | 
36,123 posts
| I know my poetry could never match up to yours, but I'm putting this here anyways.
I don't have lots of money
Or nice clothes or a car
But the one thing that I do have
Is your big butt in a jar | | 0 @ 25-09-2004 17:00 fruity |
12,214 posts
| and that is all a man really needs in this world.. encore! encore!! | | 0 @ 06-10-2004 15:37 life4rent | 75 posts
| wow..... ur amazingly talented... i dont get the meaning of some of the poems, but i understand them. does that make sense?! | | 0 @ 07-11-2004 18:02 fruity |
12,214 posts
| I took a sip
off your glass
and found it bitter,
but nonetheless
good for the throat,
,now I know
I don't want you either. | | 0 @ 07-11-2004 18:04 the_Apocalypse | 14,257 posts
| So you're the reason I finish my drinks so quickly eh.  | | 0 @ 07-11-2004 20:46 fruity |
12,214 posts
| guilty as charged | | 0 @ 11-11-2004 19:54 fruity |
12,214 posts
| something
you're
something in the distance
to me.
something in the moment
to me.
the feeling is
unfilling,
you see.
I think you do mean
something
to me. | | 0 @ 11-11-2004 20:05 icefyre | 
10,980 posts
| i like the one about the drink, that's a neat little idea 
i love something, especially the way you've chosen the lines, really good little poem  | | 0 @ 11-11-2004 20:26 fruity |
12,214 posts
| thank you! | | 0 @ 11-11-2004 20:27 Maybe_Not | 92 posts
| Yeah, me like it aswell. Nice and short, and rhyming. I like rhyming. | | 0 @ 12-11-2004 18:45 fruity |
12,214 posts
| and at nights
you will go
to a slumber,
and the cracks
on the walls,
they will know.
watch me out
as I go
to another.
and
I'll
go. | | 0 @ 22-01-2005 18:59 fruity |
12,214 posts
| well... I didn't really feel like writing, but Matt asked so nicely so how could I refuse?
find me
in a white gown
and pearls
find me
for the night is getting short.
find me
with drops of poison in my hair
find me
as you left me
long ago
tuck me tight
inside your wallet
as you do to all your
others
find me suffocated
still
amongst your long forgotten
leftovers,
still the one
who blushed so rosy
with the eyes that
burnt with passion
seems as if my heart
could bleed once more.
find me
and my eyes closed
as my hand's still
on my chest
and this new smell,
unfamiliar,
covering the room.
find me
in my coffin
and my lips are dry
for the kiss I longed for
didn't come
unless death's name
is
you.
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