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fruity | 17-10-2003 10:44

hey everybody. it seems like the army has some kind of a tendency 2 inspire me 2 write. so here I'm gonaa share wit u some of the things I wrote there during the last 2 weeks. I didn't manage 2 bring all of the stuff wit me yesterday when I came back, therefore I'll add them next week (btw- I'm finishing my course on a week and 2 days {but who's counting? lol} and I'm gonna b here on an every-day basis again. c this as an official warning.) so here they r! (don't shoot me)

A tender breath,
although it's last.
A softened smile,
just for a while.
That sweet-heared tone,
before there's none.
Quick blink of eye,
and then
she dies
so beautiful and so divine,
just like she was afore months-nine.
A kiss from God,
a drop of blood,
a new-born child,
and mother's
gone.

this one has a special meaning 4 me, and if any of u would get it, then my purpose is fulfilled-

You were my eyes.
You were my soul.
You were my heart.
You were my whole.
No hands to hold.
No mouth to speak.
Just two strong legs
and wish to seek
the hidden eyes,
the hidden soul,
the hidden heart
that kept it all,
the hands that held,
the mouth that talked,
but all that's found
are legs
that walked
the endless way
into nowhere,
since all I had
was lie to bear.

and this one I wrote just two days ago-

You make me cry
into the night.
I feel ashamed,
I want to fight,
don't cry no more,
make these tears stop,
can't take it, no,
I had enough.
You cause me pain,
I don't know why,
yet what I feel
is need to cry.
The words can hurt
although they're nice,
unless they're meaningful,
they're lies.
So stop it, please,
I beg of you,
can't take in ease
those things you do.
You're cruel,
yet soft,
and clueless too,
don't know what you
still put me through.
How can those
honey lips of yours
fill-up my heart
with all them sores?

Look straight in my
weeping eyes
and tell me-
are you willing to sacrifice?

tht would b it 4 now. I'll b glad 2 c wht u think of them- and the most important thing- b honest!

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Cheater138 | 17-10-2003 10:58

I like them, the last one the best. They are all really good though.

star_light | 17-10-2003 20:24

theyre pretty good!

rawkerNoNagal | 17-10-2003 20:26

I like all of them... very pretty, almost brought tears to my ears.

tullio | 18-10-2003 02:12

beautiful

fruity | 24-10-2003 14:48

hi peeps! back again, and have some new stuff 2 add here, if u don't mind. so let's get started!

this two are not poems, and I'm not so sure they can b called short stories either. they're short scribbles tht I wrote and i hope u'll like.

Beneath the vails of Yesterday,
Today lays.
Though they know it's in there,
Yesterday is all they can see.
"You can't change the past,
but you can create new future",
they tell it,
yet the vails won't come off.
Slowly, Today begins to get
the shape of Yesterday too.
Now, they're not even sure it's in there.
Can't believe new future can be created.
But it IS inside.
Beneath the vails lays Today.
And Tomorrow.
As the belief sinks in,
the vails drop and they're shown in all their glory-
Today,
Tomorrow,
and ever after.
Happily
ever after.

There rides the knight with no name.
His passionate battle is hidden from others.
His search is for stranger causes in their minds.
His love is an unknown secret for them.
Alone he rides.
Since his misterious battle is not shared with the crowd.
Yet, no matter how strongly he'll fight,
how willingly he'll search,
he'll never find his ideal.
for he's the nameless knight,
and it's of the nameless knights' way
to seek
for the lost.

Just_Jamie | 24-10-2003 14:49

Neta! I like!

fruity | 24-10-2003 15:06

andi like u!

how r u, babe?

Just_Jamie | 24-10-2003 15:07

I'm sad!

How are you, m'dear?

fruity | 24-10-2003 15:11

no! y r u sad, sweetie? I wanna do anything I can 2 make u feel better

Just_Jamie | 24-10-2003 15:12

Sign on MSN...

fruity | 24-10-2003 15:19

I can't, honey, my computer crashed! I'm talking 2 u from another computer, but it doesn't have msn on it right now.

Just_Jamie | 24-10-2003 15:19

Hmm...can you access your email?

fruity | 24-10-2003 15:42

no, dearie, i can't. the whole thing isn't working!

Just_Jamie | 24-10-2003 15:43

Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.

fruity | 24-10-2003 15:55

I know, I know...

fruity | 28-10-2003 19:35

this is a fairwell.
the darkest wounds are gone now.
no,
no,
don't worry.
this is a fairwell,
not a goodbye.
a new leaf had opened.
I'm healed.
never,
had never been.
you hurt.
I go.
this is a fairwell.
blue sky and the horizon's open.
for new mistkes.
for different leads.
for other wounds.
my fight
against the universe.
this is a fairwell.
now I depart.

little_girl | 28-10-2003 19:38

I love your poetry!

fruity | 28-10-2003 19:41

thank you, sweetheart!

fruity | 28-10-2003 20:01

the soap.

scrape and scrub.
wash then rub.
all the stains
all the slob
all the sins
all the faults
take them off
take them off......
foam them
grade them
just damn lade them
all the waters cannot fade them
take good deeds
make them cope
nothing can compare the soap.

fruity | 10-11-2003 18:23

ah... the good thing about really crappy stuff that happen to you is that they inspire you. aren't I'm glad to be sad.

I wouldn't mind
if you told me that lie.
I wouldn't care
just as long as you're there.
living in a bubble.
shuttered from truth.
I don't wanna know.
I don't.
keep my heart
from tearing apart.
im-
possible.
fragile to
pieces
and you're
to blame,
not to blame you are.
I wouldn't mind
but, then again,
it doesn't matter,
since you would,
wouldn't you?

you do.

radiate86 | 10-11-2003 20:19

You're very talented. They're beautiful.

fruity | 10-11-2003 20:30

thank you.

Joe_Incognito | 10-11-2003 20:33

I always know when something is good when i'm confused by it. You're very poetic fruity! Santa's got something good for you this year!

fruity | 10-11-2003 20:37

lol santa. I'd might even convert for you

but what have we said about calling me fruity? *lifts warning finger than moves it from side to side like the guy with the thing from Seinfeld* naughty naughty...

Joe_Incognito | 10-11-2003 20:39

you don't like fruity, huh? Strange that you piked it. How would you like Santa to bring you a new name for Christmas?

neta, is it? Hi! I'm Santa. You can call me fatso. hehehe

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