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long lost tomorrow
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@ 28-09-2003 20:27 pielickchick | 195 posts
| a long lost tomorrow
lost forever a time ago
lost between the time i felt right amist the people
and the time i let if go
before i ever met him
or even saw his face
before i lost my sense of time
before i lost my place
before he said he loved me
before he made me cry
before i fell i love
before we said goodbye
and withing the time lost long ago
the tomorrow got lost too
i kept on running right in place
before life passed me by and i forgot who
who i am ...who i was
why i life this life
why i go on everyday between this pain and strife
and so i sit and look around
at the life i once lived with joy
and though i cannot hear a sound
i still remember that boy
this is....like the worst poem ive written...oh well...i think its cute...let me no what you think |
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 0  @ 29-09-2003 06:33 FoZZy_FrEEk | 80 posts
| really cute!  | | 0 @ 29-09-2003 06:46 Rass | 5,430 posts
| i dont care what you say ginette, this poem is cool, and shivery  (which is a good thing) and the context in it is awesome, i mean i personally love the whole losing tomorrow thing, as if it was something to miss, but tomorrow never comes, it just is so cool lol i'm babling
sum up: i like this, and its really good and if its one of your worst my god you must be a completely totally awesome poet | | 0 @ 29-09-2003 23:39 pielickchick | 195 posts
| thanx for the compliment...it is...ok i guess.... | | 0 @ 29-09-2003 23:42 pielickchick | 195 posts
| hey go check out my other poems...the ginnie ones and tell me what you think when u get the chance...
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