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depressing poems

 
27-09-2003 00:47pielickchick is offline pielickchick  

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yeah this is the depressing poetry thingy plz feel free to add


What is this specious feeling, you have pretended to bestow upon me?
What makes you think my ignorance will play in favor of you deck?
Why did you have to leave me a worthless shaken wreck?

Why did you speak forbidden words and lie to tear me apart?
Why did you cause my tears to be shed, why did you sever my heart?
Why did you hurt me in ways that torture and torment my soul?
Why waste a gracious feeling and turn my love to coal?

For now I am solemn, but never quite at peace
The hole that is dug before me, is one thats filled with grief
I sleep tonight forever in an oblique melodic song
Praying that this overbearing pain won't stay with me long

Katatonia, the only noun left of a broken hearted me
I cry a silne cry of desperation before I make my plee
But the plee is not heard and all i receive is a deathly silence I cannot bear
As I grasp on the the last of my sanity that is beginning to tear

Why? I ask one last time before my grand finale.
Why me, to ruin tarnish and more
Why did you injure the last of me, ad force me to close the door

Theres nothing to say
Nothing left to speak
NO me to see now
not even a tiny me, weak
but in the background
a faint whispher you may hear
goodbye goodbye my love
farewell forever my dear




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27-09-2003 03:34DarknessGypsy is offline DarknessGypsy 

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That was good
27-09-2003 03:34DarknessGypsy is offline DarknessGypsy 

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Lol
27-09-2003 03:35DarknessGypsy is offline DarknessGypsy 

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just another meaningless thread though i guess
27-09-2003 03:39pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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how is that meaningless
27-09-2003 03:40Rass is offline Rass 

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i think maybe she meant cause no one was replying? but i just now saw it i haven't read the poem yet, i just read the depressed poetry thingy and feel free to add. does that mean add our own poems? cause lordy i have alot of depressed poetry
27-09-2003 03:41pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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yeppers...read the poem..i need some opinions
27-09-2003 03:42pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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add depressing poems
27-09-2003 03:53Rass is offline Rass 

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oooooooooooooooh...i just read the poem and OH MY DEAR GOD!

that is like, awesome, like, shivers and like, goose bumps and like, wow

may i copy this and save it with all the poems i've read and copied (with author permision) cause they got to me?
27-09-2003 03:54pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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wow im flattered yeah go ahead
27-09-2003 04:02pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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the word silne is supposed to be silence oops
27-09-2003 04:03pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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nope silent
there we go
27-09-2003 04:04DarknessGypsy is offline DarknessGypsy 

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i didnt mean that the pome was meaningless i mean that u ppl have so many meaningless threads how do we know which ones to go into with your name on them
27-09-2003 04:07pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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ooooh
well....its called guess and check actually the majority of the i dont like that word soo i'll use whatchamacallits arent meaningless......and the ones that are...have the most posts surprisingly enough
i keep life interesting if you dont know what ur gonna get than....it makes it fun
27-09-2003 04:49DarknessGypsy is offline DarknessGypsy 

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27-09-2003 05:00Rass is offline Rass 

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i knew it was a supposed to be silent what name should i put for the author, your screen name or the one in the profile or something else?
27-09-2003 05:09Rass is offline Rass 

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a poem i guess you could say is 'depressing' from me, seeing as it seems most people are like this when they're depressed


TRAPPED

“Stop the insanity!”
Was I talking to them or me?
Either way you were the only one who heard me.
“Stop the insanity!”
Echoes scream in the halls.
They ring against the walls.
They bang upon the doors.
They diminish back into the hollows of my mind.
Sitting by the phone to see if it will ring.
Watching the door to see if it will knock.
But the phone is unplugged
And the door is locked.
There’s no outlet for the phone
No outlet for my soul.
There’s no key for my mind
No key for the door.
No way in and no way out
The Raven lies dead…
…dead upon my chamber floor.
We shall quote the Raven, nevermore.
27-09-2003 05:16Dekar is offline Dekar 


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Raindrops keep fallin' on my head...
27-09-2003 14:59pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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i went to bed b-4 i could answer that my name off the profile if you havent already put something doesnt really matter tho
27-09-2003 15:00Rass is offline Rass 

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i can always change it
27-09-2003 15:00pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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i like that poem its really good
27-09-2003 15:01pielickchick is offline pielickchick 

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u dont have to
27-09-2003 23:33FoZZy_FrEEk is offline FoZZy_FrEEk 

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Nice one Rass... I don't think I could write THAT good...

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