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Poem Dedication
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@ 18-09-2003 20:05 Jez | 12,757 posts
| Hello everybody.
I do realise that there is already a huge thread onPoems and another huge thread for Dedications but I don't think there is yet a thread for dedicating poems to people.
So here it goes. This poem was written by me a few years back and to start the whole thread off I am dedicating this one to Renata. 
18
Time is the healer, your pain will ease
Being young as you are, you’re almost naïve
I’m slightly older, just listen to me
You’re a great girl, be what you want to be
Don’t let that one guy halt your progress
Nothing more you could do, you did your best
He loves you? The truth or just a myth
You’ll find out soon, if it’s you he wants to be with
But don’t sit there waiting, you’re still 18
There’s a whole world out there, just begging to be seen
Make the most of your life, cos before you know
Time has got you, like a cancer grows
Life is so precious, it’s a total premium
So balance yourself out into equilibrium
Just live your life, do what you want and be happy
Cos as someone once said, “Nobody knows the way it’s gonna be”. |
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 0  @ 31-12-2003 22:44 kat_watson | 356 posts
| cool  | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:45 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| I have several other poems that I have written....I must dig them up first, of course..... | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:47 kat_watson | 356 posts
| I write song lyrics mostly, I just find it easy to write down my thoughts, and once I've finished I look at them and they actually sound quite good! | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:49 kat_watson | 356 posts
| I would post my songs on here but I don't want people to steal them for their own use | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:50 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| neato....lemme go find a few of my things....but first, I'm a (wannabe) writer, I would enjoy it if you looked at my stuff.....
Here
If that doesn't work, tell me.... | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:50 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| Son of a biscuit, it doesn't. I'll get the link first. | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 22:52 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| Here we go! | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:07 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| Here's another one, this time for my evil ex-best friends who dumped me in Sept. with no warning.....
You think you're great, you disgusting beasts
The way you hulk around, singing your siren song
I was once under your spell, I once wanted to be you
until I saw the way that you really are.
You backstabbers, betrayers, mutineers,
I have been nothing but loyal
for five years
and what do i get?
Nothing. I gained nothing and lost everything
I wasted precious hours
precious years of my life
on superficial idiots
Who have no idea
how much it hurt
I had nowhere to turn
no way to rant and rave
Until now
I cannot say I honestly hate you
because a tiny part of me wants you to take me back
to become one of you again
Now while I rise to the top
work through life without stopping to party
and do drugs
and get pregnant
which is exactly where you're going
It's just my opinion
that you deserve it
but to me you are all
DEMONS.
Someone's still a LEETLE bit bitter, if you couldn't tell. | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:10 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| *sigh* I'm just reciting my little poems to myself, aren't I? | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:12 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| Yep. I am. Oh well. | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:13 kat_watson | 356 posts
| yours sites pretty cool and I gotta say that poem (magick*) spot on mate | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:14 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| Why thank you!
* offtopic :
which poem???? I have far too many to keep up with!
| | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:18 kat_watson | 356 posts
| Just read your poem. bless  I hate it when your so in love with someone that you actually feel like you want to be them, that came across to me in your poem. I'm in that situation right now but I'm not sure how to stop loving this person | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:20 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| lol yeah....but these were my best friend for five years, not a bf or anything...... | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:26 kat_watson | 356 posts
| Jesus fuckin Christ! what did you do to deserve that? | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:26 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| No clue. And I'm still bitter. They better watch out. | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:27 kat_watson | 356 posts
| I've got to go now, but I'm sure I'll speak to you again sometime | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:28 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| sure. And you are SO getting added to my MSN now. | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:41 kat_watson | 356 posts
| you too! kw_loveislife@hotmail.com | | 0 @ 31-12-2003 23:43 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| OKay, I will as soonas I get on there!
alamo2211@hotmail.com | | 0 @ 01-01-2004 02:17 DeathByMonkeys | 24,877 posts
| *bump* | | 0 @ 07-01-2004 16:33 carole | 26,916 posts
| Sans toi les émotions ne sont plus que les peaux mortes des émotions d'autrefois
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ugh i hope its the exact line...
It is dedicated to Val   | | 0 @ 11-02-2004 08:39 AlienationEd | 9,757 posts
| This is for Yochai. I don't suppose he'll ever see it but whatever...
I miss you Yochai
It hurts inside
Knowing that you're gone
For now.
I won't forget that time
You made me laugh
After everything I knew
Had fallen apart.
I will always have the memory
Of words those you said
When I needed you most
You were there.
I remember you
When I close my eyes
And I hope you're still alright.
My faith in you.
I'll be here Yoch
When you come back.
I'll never forget you.
My friend.
| | 0 @ 11-02-2004 08:40 AlienationEd | 9,757 posts
| ***Of those words you said | | 0 @ 11-02-2004 08:51 vandy | 
9,508 posts
| I didn't write this, but it's for the mother of a friend who died February 16, 2002. Love you Ry!
A Son So Soon Departed
Your first few faltr’ring steps led to my breast,
There guided by my loving outstretched arms.
Oh how I held you close, and felt so blest
To love, protect, and keep you safe from harm.
Your last few falt’ring steps I was not there
To wrap my arms around your trembling frame,
To hold you close and ply a mother’s care,
When slowly was extinguished, your life’s flame.
Into the darkness of that lonely night,
In bitter cold, alone you stumbled on,
Till as an arrow finished in its flight
You fell to earth before another dawn.
Oh Father, God above I humbly pray,
Grant me the peace and strength I need this day
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