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Poem Dedication

18-09-2003 20:05

Jez

12,759 posts

Hello everybody.

I do realise that there is already a huge thread onPoems and another huge thread for Dedications but I don't think there is yet a thread for dedicating poems to people.

So here it goes. This poem was written by me a few years back and to start the whole thread off I am dedicating this one to Renata.

18

Time is the healer, your pain will ease
Being young as you are, you’re almost naïve
I’m slightly older, just listen to me
You’re a great girl, be what you want to be

Don’t let that one guy halt your progress
Nothing more you could do, you did your best
He loves you? The truth or just a myth
You’ll find out soon, if it’s you he wants to be with

But don’t sit there waiting, you’re still 18
There’s a whole world out there, just begging to be seen
Make the most of your life, cos before you know
Time has got you, like a cancer grows

Life is so precious, it’s a total premium
So balance yourself out into equilibrium
Just live your life, do what you want and be happy
Cos as someone once said, “Nobody knows the way it’s gonna be”.

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04-10-2003 00:01 carole
28,823 posts	ow geez thanx Tobi
04-10-2003 00:06 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	To Ebag Hockey Lockey Nockey Tockey Shockey (see it rhymed) To Carole Carole's a teacher She's not a preacher Cuz she didn't go to school to be a preacher She went to be a teacher
04-10-2003 01:35 El_Mono_Loco
24,350 posts	Gee Sweetness, thanks a lot for that one
04-10-2003 01:36 carole
28,823 posts	AW i got a poem does a little dance THANK U Mariah !
04-10-2003 01:37 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	What can I say, I have a gift, and it only makes sense to spread it to others.
04-10-2003 01:44 El_Mono_Loco
24,350 posts	lol, right, a gift, suuuuuure
04-10-2003 01:45 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	pffft like I'm sharing my gift with you ever again
04-10-2003 01:46 Dekar
36,178 posts	To singingsweetie: She ain't no liah Can't be any highah That's my Mariah She's on fiah
04-10-2003 01:46 carole
28,823 posts	lol that was great
04-10-2003 01:48 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	haha Mattie- Mattie mattie hamburger patty with peanut butter cuz mattie likes peanut butter
04-10-2003 01:59 Dekar
36,178 posts	There once was a little girl named Jamie Whose hotness was so much it could maim me I couldn't get enough, nothing would suffice There you go, I said something nice Now get out your wallet, girl, and pay me
04-10-2003 01:59 carole
28,823 posts
04-10-2003 01:59 El_Mono_Loco
24,350 posts	nice limerick man
04-10-2003 02:00 Dekar
36,178 posts	I have a friend named Jez He really loves his pez He was an excellent fencer With his pez dispenser And he looks a bit like Fez
04-10-2003 02:01 crazydazibaby
8,210 posts	haha dek u really have a talent for this.. me i have no talent at writing poems or anything else for that matter * offtopic : who wants to write about me?! lol
04-10-2003 02:03 Dekar
36,178 posts	A cute little lady named Carole Told me I looked like Colin Farrell So I took her in and we got it on Then threw her out with nothing on And she walked home wearing only a barrel
04-10-2003 02:05 carole
28,823 posts	hey nice haha funny, the rhyme Carole-Colin Farell was already used
04-10-2003 02:17 Dekar
36,178 posts	There once was a girl called crazydaziba....nuts to this!
04-10-2003 02:23 crazydazibaby
8,210 posts	ha well dek u tried..lol
04-10-2003 02:38 Dekar
36,178 posts	For all the non-religious people out there who like dirty jokes: Hail Mary Full of grace Pull down your pants And sit on my face
04-10-2003 02:41 Dekar
36,178 posts	To my enemies... May bloody piles dement you May corns grow on your feet May crabs as big as turtles Crawl up your a and eat And when you're old and feeble And become a nervous wreck I hope your head falls through you a And breaks your f***** neck
04-10-2003 02:41 Rock71
4,639 posts	strong poem there Dekko...very strong
04-10-2003 02:45 Dekar
36,178 posts	It can bench-press 340!
04-10-2003 17:54 tobi_babe
679 posts	to: crazydazibaby---(hope you dont mind being called jessie) there once was a girl named jessie, the ants in her pants where peskie. she ate a pail and started to wail and thats my poem of a girl named Jessie you liek?
16-10-2003 23:46 ellimere
206 posts	[offtopic] Dekar, you are so starting to scare me here (referring to the 'hail mary' poem). Dude, what the hell were u thinking?