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Poem Dedication

18-09-2003 20:05

Jez

12,759 posts

Hello everybody.

I do realise that there is already a huge thread onPoems and another huge thread for Dedications but I don't think there is yet a thread for dedicating poems to people.

So here it goes. This poem was written by me a few years back and to start the whole thread off I am dedicating this one to Renata.

18

Time is the healer, your pain will ease
Being young as you are, you’re almost naïve
I’m slightly older, just listen to me
You’re a great girl, be what you want to be

Don’t let that one guy halt your progress
Nothing more you could do, you did your best
He loves you? The truth or just a myth
You’ll find out soon, if it’s you he wants to be with

But don’t sit there waiting, you’re still 18
There’s a whole world out there, just begging to be seen
Make the most of your life, cos before you know
Time has got you, like a cancer grows

Life is so precious, it’s a total premium
So balance yourself out into equilibrium
Just live your life, do what you want and be happy
Cos as someone once said, “Nobody knows the way it’s gonna be”.

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18-09-2003 20:06 Jez
12,759 posts	* offtopic : Ooops! Alex... could you be so kind as to unmess my mistake with all the links please.
18-09-2003 20:09 happygymnast
1,918 posts	aww that was great!!
18-09-2003 20:17 Jez
12,759 posts	This one is for a good friend inside and outside of the forum. This is for you Mattie. Close To The Heart You’re still so young, yet you feel so old Still searching for your fairytale ending, yet to be told What’s inside your mind? If you start to delve One day soon, you will understand yourself So take the time out and you shall see That there is always respite after stormy seas Confide in your closest friends through the bad times and the good If anyone can understand you, then they should They’ll always be there, tough time may try to part You’ll be fine, just keep them firmly in your heart Cos I believe in trust and friendship Being there for one another when our lives take a dip Do what you want and never regret Be proud of being different, a contrast, a silhouette I am back, I’ve re-discovered my smile For a time though, I’ve been away a while I am now refreshed, it’s clear to see Unlike a month ago, stone cold and unhappy So come to me whenever you’re down You will never truly be alone; I’ll understand and will always be around. * offtopic : thanks happygymnast
18-09-2003 20:18 El_Mono_Loco
24,350 posts	Jez! You're the man! nice work, bro
19-09-2003 02:53 QUPNCY
9,291 posts	jez, your so sweet, thanks for that darling
19-09-2003 02:55 IrishMeg1
21,216 posts	those were some nice poems, jez. and that is a good idear for a peom dedicated to people! cause we do have one for songs...
19-09-2003 02:55 tobi_babe
679 posts	aww! those are soo cute Jezzy pinches cheek like a granny
19-09-2003 05:40 Guinness1759
5,220 posts	those are great! think I can take some of my stuff in the poem corner and re-dedicate them here? or that would just be spamming?
19-09-2003 05:52 Dekar
36,178 posts	Hey! Where's mine?
19-09-2003 09:44 Masterful_Ally
15,628 posts	* offtopic : mistake unmessed sweetie!
19-09-2003 18:42 Jez
12,759 posts	* offtopic : thank you alex. Okay then Matt (Dekar). This one's for you... Unique Who are your friends and who are your foes? To get the answers, time will let you know As time ticks on, you will learn to see Who your real friends are, from the wannabes I am different, I express my mind Fast forward to the future, not back in rewind Live for the present and not for the past Don’t worry, good memories, they will last So act upon now, you’re in your peak You’re wonderful, different, definitely unique See? You’re an individual, just like me Your own thoughts, feelings, a personality So just keep on smiling, you’re a shining star Your spark and magic lights near and far.
03-10-2003 13:38 fruity
12,214 posts	ooooooooookay! I'm back again and I have some new poems wit me! and first of all... Matty(dek). this one's 4 u. THE CLOWN A drawn smile on your face, fix your red round nose. Put your make up on, it's time for another show. You can't laugh anymore, but you have to, you clown. Making funny tricks for the people in front, playing the act, you can't let them now you're just wearing a masc, passing a test, you funny, funny clown. But when the night comes, and the lights are turned off, when there's no audience to pretend for and show off, there's no longer laughter, the joy has no sound, and all u can hear is the cry of the clown. and Yochai. I just had to. I know. As long as the sun keeps shining, I know. When there's storms and lightnings, I know. You put the hope in me. The ink of your words keeps dripping over my heart, marking the facts that are finally proven. Thank you for assuring me that my mind made sense. I believed in a dream, and you've made a silence wish come true. I know that the good is alive and as long as you keep touching the hearts of us all it will keep on surviving the fall. I know. Don't go.
03-10-2003 13:47 carole
28,823 posts	Oh i wrote several poems for pple on msn. I think i should get published so i'll write them here too... To Stan There was a man whose name was Stan He didn’t like bankers I said they’re wnkers I wrote him a poem in which I said fck’em To Gabe Roses are red Violets are blue Flowers of all sorts I say “eat my shorts” To Stu There was a dude Whose name was Stu I thought he was rude But that wasnt true AM I GOOD OR WHAT ???
03-10-2003 23:03 tobi_babe
679 posts	yea, there cute...but wheres mine
03-10-2003 23:04 carole
28,823 posts	Hold on hold on TobiBabe, im writin this, dont be so impatient !
03-10-2003 23:05 carole
28,823 posts	There was a girl Whose name was Tobi Her heart was a pearl And so was she
03-10-2003 23:12 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	To Matty You're a loser But that's ok, Cuz you're cool like that And move to Guatamala
03-10-2003 23:14 IrishMeg1
21,216 posts	hehe
03-10-2003 23:14 carole
28,823 posts	Hey mine have rhymes at least ! and go check the milestone thread Mariah
03-10-2003 23:18 singingsweetie
8,389 posts	awww I feel so loved (it's called free verse Carole )
03-10-2003 23:46 tobi_babe
679 posts	hawwwww! thanks!! i feel special now hands fluffy pink teddy bear to Carole
03-10-2003 23:47 tobi_babe
679 posts	awwwww*** i hate typos
03-10-2003 23:48 carole
28,823 posts	I work hard for an hour or so (do u have any idea how hard it is to find rhymes for a foreigner?) and all i get is a lousy teddy bear? ? Ok ill take it anyway. lol
03-10-2003 23:50 Gabe_M
4,575 posts	I have one ... ehehe someone You are like the sky; Always high. All bow down to me
03-10-2003 23:57 tobi_babe
679 posts	sniff jez has already made me cry, but here you go........ gives 4 more teddy bears to Carole... happy??? sniff sniff