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@ 13-06-2007 02:34 Scrawney | 1 posts
| I wrote this a couple of years ago and I just wondered what people would think! Its pretty mild compared to some other stuff I've written thats why I put it on here? but tell me wat you think because no one has ever read these apart from me!
When I was young I looked up to you,
Now your nothing better than the scum on my shoe!
When I was young I thought you could keep me safe!
When I was young I thought you were the best man ever,
Now I can see you strugfgle to hold it together!
When I was young I though you could keep me happy!
When I was young I though you could do no wrong,
But obviously you are not that strong!
When I was young I though you could keep me safe!
When I was young I thought you could do anything!
Now as I know you can't do a thing!
When I was young I thought you could keep me happy!
Now I've grown up!! |
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 0  @ 14-06-2007 03:55 fireatwill_x | 10 posts
| I like it, I think it sounds cool. | | 0 @ 14-06-2007 18:46 Samantha03 | 369 posts
| its cute, but it seems like you were stretching a little to make it rhyme. |
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