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@ 14-09-2003 07:36 Rass
5,430 posts	hey, this is my songy i wroted ^^ but it is currently nameless (pout) so would ya read it and tell me what you think? or should i just make up some babble for the name lol (cause i can do that) ------------------------------------------------------ Face down in a bubble bath Feeling the warmth at last Of suicides sweet embrace I can't take anymore Oh how I've longed for Suicides sweet embrace Why can’t we just let go? Why can’t I just not go? Why must I commit Suicide in a tub Your stomach churns Your nostrils burn But you don't really care Your eyes flutter Your heart stutters Your lungs beg for air Why can’t we just let go? Why can’t I just not go? Why must I commit Suicide in a tub It’s so hard to do it So hard to go through it When your lungs are burning for air Your instincts take over And you roll over Breathing in that wonderful air Why can't you all just go? Why must I tell and show? Why must I admit To homicide in a tub Why can’t we just let go? Why can’t I just not go? Why must I commit Suicide in a tub But your instincts took over And you rolled over Breathing in that wonderful air

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0 @ 14-09-2003 07:40 fallen_angel666
165 posts	sacred killing
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:41 fallen_angel666
165 posts	or maybe brush with air
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:47 fallen_angel666
165 posts	or even breath of fresh water
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:50 Rass
5,430 posts	lol those are all interesting titles o.O i like "breath of fresh water" but it made me laugh lol
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:52 fallen_angel666
165 posts	or even breathng for someone else
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:53 Rass
5,430 posts	where are you getting these title ideas x.x they're all like, nothing i would think of from reading the lyrics o.O course i'm kinda blah lol
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:55 MiseryMachine
165 posts	random tid bit=....crap...i just said tid bit. It is impossible to die from lack of sleep. If you deprive your self of sleep long enough, your brain will put its self in its own little sleep cycle. Of course your body would be tired but your brain will be able to function properly. Also...when your brain does the whole sleeping while your awake thing....you still dream which is the reason for sleep deprived people to hallucinate. I know lots of useless info and...ok im gonna say it again for lack of a better word....."tid bits"...so uh...yeah...ok.... )O(Marilyn)O(
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:56 ssgogeta_331
19 posts	i think sweet embrace might be a good name for it
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:56 MiseryMachine
165 posts	Lovely Day for a Soak in the Tub
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:57 Rass
5,430 posts	thats why i hallucinate?! wow
0 @ 14-09-2003 07:58 fallen_angel666
165 posts	my war my armageddon neon distraction learning to swim leaving home flying home athousand miles from my conscence like i want it to be blood clot mid air collision ugly end ill think or more......
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:00 Rass
5,430 posts	fallen angel o.o are we reading the same song? lmao
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:02 fallen_angel666
165 posts	yes im just very abstract
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:03 KingJeZter
9,999 posts	A Newbie's First Try... lol yeah, you can't kill yourself by intentionally holding your breath, and if that person in your song are trying to kill him/herself in a tub, him/her must be a newbie at these suicide things
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:04 Rass
5,430 posts	lol i'm like "blood clot"? "my armegedon"? wheres this person comin up with this from x.x (rereads the song) lol
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:05 Rass
5,430 posts	yes i am a newbie at such things o.o i dont like blood ^^ thats my next experimental writing tool
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:09 fallen_angel666
165 posts	digging in air playing god my decision out of control droning memories hard earnings deemed better my finest hour life is final how to soar wasting time open eyes dying alone killing alone almost better almost there i made a friend today through the eyes of god**(who i dont beleive in) lost mind sanity general anestetic impossible needs
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:14 MiseryMachine
165 posts	Sink or Swim? Cherish These Moments OMG....i inhaled some water through my nose!!! How I Got My Fear of Water Dont Try This at Home I Dont Wanna Die Rising Above My Watery Grave Unconscience Self-Indulgence A Fine Time for a Bubble Bath With a Rubber Duckie as my Witness Surfacing Blah...... )O(Marilyn)O(
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:18 Rass
5,430 posts	lmao!!! with a rubber ducky as my witness!!! lmao i love that! o.O prob wont use it but i love it ^^ oh and i can't use "i dont want to die" simply cause the point of the song is nameless wants to die but just can't o.o
0 @ 14-09-2003 08:27 fallen_angel666
165 posts	i need a title for this poem id rather be here sitting with you through all the years its like heaven with you thats how it seems except when you leave me my soul gives up and my heart,it bleeds i dont like being alone and neither do you so heaven can wait just as we do we wait for summer wait through the years we wait for each other and a love so severe its better with you and a love i cant escape untill our time is up heaven can wait
0 @ 14-09-2003 09:38 Rass
5,430 posts	heavan can wait? o.O or how bout "heaven with you"

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