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Love to write lyrics and I want your opinion

19-05-2007 21:28 | 5 reaction(s) | add reply

Hi...i'm new on all this blogging thing so please excuse my mistakes...I'm just a guy from Greece,Mineos Pavlos(that's me bloody name...) who's taking exams on a national level (that will probably determine if my dream will come true(that must have sounded too poetic...didn't mean to...)...wanna be a chef,cook,or whatever you wanna call it and open my own restaurant with good old chicago and luisiana blues playin') and needed someone's opinion on a subject...not a friend...not my bro......you see i'm all stressed up cause theese exams tend to do this to teens like myself cause they're important...today i took my first lesson...it went good but let's stop with the blablabla... Heres the question; I like to write lyrics and i would like your opinion on this one...It's called 15 Illusions and i imagine i would like it to sound like the song "Do the Evolution" from Pearl Jam,album "yield"

15 Illusions

What's a bridge with no river below?
What's the sky with no clouds going by?
What's the truth with nobody to listen?
It's like the love that you gave me
It's like me without you by my side

CHORUS
It's an illusion baby
It's an illusion
I'm an illusion baby
I'm an illusion
I am the false belief
Where only angels exist

What's the heaven with no hell to compete?
What's a god with no believers alive?
What's the sun without the night to wave goodbye?
What's a falling star when you got nothing to wish for?
It's like the love that you gave me
It's my existance standing in vain

CHORUS
It's an illusion baby
It's an illusion
I'm an illusion baby
I'm an illusion
I am the false belief
Where only angels exist

What's a warrior with no one to protect?
What's a body with no soul to live in?
What's a mind with no goal to achieve?
What's a fire with no one to warm?
What's the sea with no one to sail?

CHORUS
It's an illusion baby
It's an illusion
I'm an illusion baby
I'm an illusion
I am the false belief
Where only angels exist

CHORUS
It's an illusion baby
It's an illusion
I'm an illusion baby
I'm an illusion
I am the false belief
Where only angels exist

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0 @ 19-05-2007 22:25 Rawrr_
493 posts	That's really cool that you want to open up your own restaurant. =] And you're lyrics are really good. Very impressive. I liked them a lot.
0 @ 20-05-2007 07:16 loveuchaz
5 posts	by just reading the lyrics personally i think it sounds really good! go for it!!!!
0 @ 21-05-2007 20:39 Schoolintrusion
9 posts	thanks guys...or girls...a lot... ill try to keep it up this way...with both restaurant and lyrics...ill put up my other lyrics in time...
0 @ 21-05-2007 21:11 Schoolintrusion
9 posts	OK...sorry for the last post,girls...(not guys)
0 @ 21-05-2007 23:04 Rawrr_
493 posts	=] That's okay. I was interested when you said 'Louisiana Blues'. I know all about that. Lived in Louisiana for about 6 years now. But I'd really like to see some of your other lyrics.

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