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    cRaZy_T
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    cRaZy_T23-07-2003 20:36
    This is a thread in which you can post songs you wrote. Basically the rules are the same as a the Poem corner..... ill post one of my songs later
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    yami21
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    yami2131-07-2007 17:56
    your rele talented i loved your song. i try to write my own music but i suck
    Rtoolhead
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    Rtoolhead30-10-2007 13:35
    Here's the piece I wrote inspired by historical article.
    It's called The Demonic Fate

    His face was bleeding mixed with sweats and blood
    dripping a little by little from the cut
    in his bare flesh you have been whipping
    grilling, dropping and pouring the acid
    on this demon who you've been calling.

    I just want to know
    why you've been calling him that.

    For now you can resume doing
    what you've been doing
    and be done with the verdict

    Demons in my eyes exist only in fairytale
    who take pleasure planting pain
    in you and not the other way around.
    You think you know it all and out.
    You think you can decide the fate.

    Once and for all
    you'll be surprised how wrong you were.

    For now you can resume doing
    what you've been doing
    and be done with the verdict.

    It's hard to say what I have just set my sight on,
    all the limbs from the demon were gone.
    All that left was a torso covered in blood
    on that day when the stakes were burnt.
    The remain of the demon was thrown in fire.

    The trouble will come
    for you to be prepared when you die.

    When the troubling day comes,
    a demon is capable of camouflage
    and trick you with his illusion
    then doom the fate of the innocent person
    by copying you.

    For now you can resume doing
    what you've been doing
    and be done with the verdict.
    Be done with the verdict.
    Done with the verdict.
    hottr_thn_ur_bf
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    hottr_thn_ur_bf15-06-2008 18:50
    This is a song for any body stuck in a bad authority situation. i'm in one right now and this is how i'm letting it out

    " Run Away"

    1 for my pressure
    2 for my pain
    3 for this hell I'm in
    4 it's all the same
    And I know that it won't change

    Each day, seems like I can't make my way.
    Listen when you hear me say
    No way am I gonna ever stay
    In this place. It's got me goin crazy
    I wanna run away
    And Each time that i look into your eyes
    I see right through your stupid lies
    You're not fine, babe,you know it's no disguise
    In your face i see you're goin crazy
    You wanna run away
    We wanna run away

    Run away, run away, run away
    In the dark of the night
    Gotta say wanna stay
    But I just can't keep up my fight
    I wanna run away
    We wanna run away

    Each rule they make to try to keep us down
    they won't work. we're gonna win this time around
    Thanks you but no thanks ,people, we're just fine
    We don't need authority to keep us in line.
    Gotta say this place has got us goin crazy
    And Each night I look at things they seem so gray
    It's not right for them to make us live this way
    Things just might end up better if we run away
    Let's run away because were going crazy

    Run away, run away, run away
    In the dark of the night
    Gotta say, wanna stay
    But i just can't keep up my fight
    I wanna run away
    We wanna run away.

    (Run away
    From the pain and the pressure
    run away
    Things aren't gettin any better
    Run away
    From this hell we're in)
    Run away
    Let me hear it again(reapeat)
    Cuz we're never gonna win

    Run away, run away, run away
    In the dark of the night
    Gotta say, wanna stay
    But i just can't keep up my fight
    I wanna run away
    We wanna run away.

    I wanna run away
    We wanna run away.













    Rpurtell
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    Rpurtell19-07-2009 09:03
    They told me I can't write to heaven to speak to my dad,
    So I decided to pick up this pad
    And just reminisce on the life I had ,I miss you dad,.i miss you dad



    Going back to the years when I just a young kid,
    I think of all the shit me and dad did,
    Its hard to cover emotions behinds these eye lids,
    It's hard not cry when you think like I do.
    Imagine trying to live with only half of you.
    Cuz that's what dad was, my hero,
    He was the Robert to my DeNiro,
    Now I'm alone, I've got zero,



    They told me I can't write to heaven to speak to my dad,
    So I decided to pick up this pad
    And just reminisce on the life I had ,I miss you dad,.i miss you dad


    I'll never forget where I was when I got the news,
    It's was 5th hour English, I was about snooze,
    When teacher called my name, "shit what'd I do?"
    "pack your stuff I got a pass for you"
    So I walked to office seen step mom crying.
    "Richie it's your father.."
    "No, you're lying!"
    "no I'm not Richie, it was a car accident."
    I couldn't believe what was happenin'.



    They told me I can't write to heaven to speak to my dad,
    So I decided to pick up this pad
    And just reminisce on the life I had ,I miss you dad,.i miss you dad



    His funeral came, his funeral went,
    I tried to be happy but i couldn't vent.
    But instead I just spent
    The summer in my room,
    Trying to hide from the gloom.
    As months went on I lost faith,
    I didn't care my life was going to waste.




    They told me I can't write to heaven to speak to my dad,
    So I decided to pick up this pad
    And just reminisce on the life I had ,I miss you dad,.i miss you dad

    One day sittin in my room letting time waste,
    A revelation came along hit me in the face,
    The past is something I can't erase,
    If my dad was here he'd be disgraced.
    That's when I said, I'm not gonna cry no more, I'll replace it.
    Screw hiding from adversity, I'm gonna face it.
    I realized my dad wasn't gone, I just misplaced him,
    Now he's in my heart where he belongs,
    The funny thing is, he's been there all along,

    They told me I can't write to heaven to speak to my dad,
    So I decided to pick up this pad
    And just reminisce on the life I had ,I miss you dad,.i miss you dad
    BasseZ
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    BasseZ29-06-2010 16:19
    I have actually writed 60 songs so far so here is 1 of them.
    Let me know what you think.

    Lonely Girl

    Her existence, was a mystery to everyone except herself,
    all she told of, herself was a fake name and a fake birthday,
    do you know, who she is, and do you know, why is she like this,
    would you care, to help her change her ways,
    would you care, to be her friend, just for a one day.

    Shes the girl, thats all alone, out in this this world, so dark and cold,
    theres no one, she could call friend, theres no one, to grap her hand,
    so could you please become, could you be the one,
    that she can trust, and she can love.

    Everyday she wonders why she has to feel the darkness inside her,
    even now she, is praying and crying to make her feel relieved,
    cant you see, shes in pain, and cant you see, the pain is draining her,
    would you care, to help her find her strenght,
    would you care, to be her friend, just for a one day.

    Shes the girl, thats all alone, out in this this world, so dark and cold,
    theres no one, she could call friend, theres no one, to grap her hand,
    so could you please become, could you be the one,
    that she can trust, and she can love.

    All her life she, is trying to find someone she could believe,
    someone who, is ready to help her and give her what she needs,
    it is you, who she needs, it is you, cant you feel it too,
    would you care, to make her dreams come true,
    would you care, to be her friend, just for a one day.
    SergeU
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    SergeU21-07-2010 18:30
    Fuck You if you can't accept me for who I am,
    Truthfully i don't really give a damn.
    I'm my own worst fucking critic,
    so I don't need to hear you fucking judge me,
    and tell me how i really need to be.
    I'd rather not hear this shit and be free,
    from all the negative shit you bestow on me.
    You don't know the shit i go thru,
    You don't know the shit thats in my head,
    What kinda fucking shit i think about when i go to bed.
    You think you are a fucking saint?
    Put yourself in my fucking shoes for once
    Try to be me for 1 fucking Day,
    See how fast ur fucking hair starts turning gray.
    It takes a strong motherfucker to handle my shit everyday,
    without blowing ur own fucking brains away.
    You really need to think about the words you use,
    Cuz im a patient motherfucker and i even I can blow a fuse.
    And Then ill hold my middle finger high,
    Saying FUCK YOU...Bye
    SergeU
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    SergeU21-07-2010 18:31
    You think you are the only with anger issues?
    well, here sit down, grab a box of tissues.
    And let me show how angry I can be,
    maybe after Im done you can finally see,
    How strong the words can really be.
    How hurtful shit can sound,
    How few words can make you drop to the ground
    And make you wish you didn't hear it.
    No don't cry, your make up, you will smear it.
    Actually thats why you have that box of tissues,
    cuz i told you, you are not the only 1 with issues.
    And Maybe after all is said and done,
    I can just say sorry, what i said was dumb,
    I didnt mean anything i said.
    I didnt know the toll it'd take.
    No? its not enough?
    Oh..I said some hurtful stuff?
    Well now you know how that shit makes me feel
    Maybe next time you'll think twice,
    before saying shit that isnt nice. Deal?
    bcole
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    bcole22-09-2011 09:36
    I just joined but i wanted to post a song i wrote it needs work so im lookin for opinions

    ​When my heads clouded by jealousy it brings out the worst in me and I fear that Ill never be who I should ever truly be. Deep down I feel the pain only wanting for things to stay the same even tho i know it hurts i do my part and only listen to what I know in my heart. My heart tells me you are true it crys out "i love you" I stay silent until that day Im sure that you will feel the same way. Til then....I sit awake listening to sad songs that have been deafening the happy thoughts of a you and me just wishing and wanting to be together for an eternaity.Deep down I feel the pain only wanting for things to stay the same even tho i know it hurts i do my part and only listen to what I know in my heart. My heart tells me you are true it crys out "i love you" I stay silent until that day Im sure that you will feel the same way. So.... how can this suposively be something that brightens me knowing that it possibly could have never have been meant to be? Deep down I feel the pain only wanting for things to stay the same even tho i know it hurts i do my part and only listen to what I know in my heart. My heart tells me you are true it crys out "i love you" I stay silent until that day Im sure you that you will feel the same way. Itl never happen in the end so im stuck feeling the pain of being just your friend. Do i give up and jus pretend my shatterd heart isnt left in pieces to mend? Deep down I feel the pain only wanting for things to stay the same even tho i know it hurts i do my part and only listen to what I know in my heart. My heart tells me you are true it crys out "i love you" I stay silent until that day Im sure you that you will feel the same way only to realize Im waiting for a never coming day!
    AloeVista
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    AloeVista24-10-2011 03:31
    @bcole
    ummm it would help if you broke all of that up into proper song format? I mean really what parts are the verses o.O what's the chorus?? Is there any bridge or anything sheesh x.x Same thing with SergeU
    Wease1
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    Wease121-01-2012 16:24
    my song wrote it a while ago,

    i cant stop thinking of you

    because your the one that keeps me breathing

    you still are my world my everything

    without u in my life i have nothing

    stay in my life forever

    i promise ill never ask u to leave



    i still love u with all my heart

    i have the will to wait

    just because maybe it was fate



    i will wait for the date we

    will be together again

    i remember when we begain

    and i hope to regain what we once had



    your are my life but i hope oneday

    you will be my wife i love you with all my heart

    you fixed my heart nd made it like a piece of art



    i love you,i need you ,i miss you

    with the heart i gave you

    i dont want it back because

    i no u can keep it safer then i ever could



    i will wait for the time u are mine again

    i just hope u will love me with all ur heart

    because i still love you with all of mine



    i will wait for the date we

    will be together again

    i remember when we begain

    and i hope to regain what we once had



    i just wanna be able hold u tight and tell u all is right

    just soo u can hold me in the light



    im sorry about the fights

    but im hoping ur alright



    im hoping ur alright....

    im sorry about all the fights

    im just hoping everything will be alright...
    Hollowedblood
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    Hollowedblood23-11-2016 01:30
    I usually listen to more classical music and such that has either no lyrics or very few. so I know this isn't a lot of lyrics maybe not enough for a song but I just thought of it one day thought I'd get some feedback.
    title blinding brilliance maybe? I don't know quite yet please some suggestions would be appreciated.

    I see the rain up in the sky, an' wonder why it's dry. Telling story of what couldn't be, what shouldn't be, all mine. Finally falling to the shadow of night, the absence of might, it's done. It's won. I see the rain up in the sky, an' wonder why it's dry. Oh scared of the frightening flight, the drawn out fight. What's right? Lost sight.

    So much color for those of day, to which rainbows show the way. Telling stories of what could be, what should be. Alright.
    Failure doesn't define your site, only one's spite. All night. My light. I see what could be in the sky today but lose my way. Potential cast aside from the golden path to find a refined melody that failed all's love and broke my mind. And I wondered why. The raindrops tell a story of dryness until I realized the expecting light just leads to blindness.

    also, I'd like to know what you interpret these lyrics mean. I wrote this with a meaning in mind, however i want to see how it comes across.
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