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The Song Corner
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@ 23-07-2003 20:36 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| This is a thread in which you can post songs you wrote. Basically the rules are the same as a the Poem corner..... ill post one of my songs later |
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 0  @ 17-07-2004 09:07 MixAh | 139 posts
| Frozen Smile!
V1-
The reflection of my life has been and gone
This song has me in a trance, thinking and drinking
Is this who i've been all along?
Has this life changed or is it just me?
As happy as i am i just can't see
Where are you bubie when i need you the most?
Seems like i've made friends with a midnight ghost
But as this time will past, My rhymes will blast
Making a nickle and a dime for this time we have lost
But this is a happy song, no need to pay the cost
As i travel to Mackay and i look into your eyes
I'll see our destiny and find out the lie's
I wont find much coz my body u can touch
Depression wah? enough is enough
Ya can't live no-more been treated to rough
I see the pain now i can't feel these tears
They are now in the past, my shaddow has forgotten those years
Peoples bodies and minds affected
I'm over it now coz the pain was injected
Taken care by my loved one's my soul protected
Now im on my own, now u can try and step it!
Chorus-
You need a mastermind to beat these kings and queens of rap
That mastermind is my but it took time to addapt
It's not a rap game it's a rap life
Living by the gun, relating to the knife,
But now all the gangsters are dead and gone, as i sit back and smoke on this bong
The smile that never leaves my face, my frozen smile! x2
V2-
Somtimes i hit the weed, to proceed
the beats that g's need spark up the weed
and it's like a dream when we sip this erin cream
but no1 has seen,when we go to extremes
and skull this 700mL beam
Burns our throat but we dont scream
Coz our life is like a pipe dream
Got no skill like highdro and mix
We scream, muthafuckers we hope your qualified
Loserz died, sluts, bitches and hoes Disqualified
If ya'll want my talent, access denied
Coz the bullets have been inserted
And your life gone with the wind
Now i'm striking back hard coz im now on the mend
Parties parties all across the globe
Today i got my hope, so dont reach for the rope
Stick to parties drug selling and smokin dope
Today on and on i have a frozen smile
Cant get it off my face
God damn i wonder if this weed is laced
Bash the muthafucker his two-faced
Frozen smile.
Chorus-
You need a mastermind to beat these kings and queens of rap
That mastermind is my but it took time to addapt
It's not a rap game it's a rap life
Living by the gun, relating to the knife,
But now all the gangsters are dead and gone, as i sit back and smoke on this bong
The smile that never leaves my face, my frozen smile! x3
[Let it fade with the beat]!©
| | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:03 TigerLileh | 16 posts
| Okies. Here's a song I wrote about 4 months ago. It's called "What If Romeo" - Very country. Just thought I ought to warn you. lol.
Verse One
I shouldn't have let you take me over
To begin with
But you were gonna be a lover
Now it's over and done with
There was never any guarntee
That you'd spend all your life with me
So I'll try not to look back
You can count on that
And hope that I don't miss you for long
Try to be strong
Chorus
This is too much
I need your touch
But I can't have you now
I don't know where to go
Now that I'm all alone
You're my What If Romeo
This is too much
I need your touch
But I can't have you now
I don't know where to go
Now that I'm all alone
You're my What If Romeo
Verse Two
I want it all to fade away
To make all the past just go away
But I can't
So I am
Haunted by
What might have been
You were always there to catch me when I fell
But being as it is I should keep this to myself
But at night while I'm trying to sleep
I lay awake, but into my dreams you creep
I can barely feel shame
Even through my all of my pain
And then the past comes back
Fades to black
All the memories
Bring out the tears in me
Just when I think I can't cry anymore
Somthing else breaks down deep in the core
Of my heart
Of my soul
Look what you've done to me
Romeo
Chorus
This is too much
I need your touch
But I can't have you now
I don't know where to go
Now that I'm all alone
You're my What If Romeo
This is too much
I need your touch
But I can't have you now
i don't know where to go
Now that I'm all alone
You're my What If Romeo
Verse Three (whispered)
Yea, noise, then I'll be brief
Oh happy dagger, this is thy sheath
There rust
And let me die
Hook
Then the past comes back
Fades to black
All the memories
Bring out the tears in me
Look what you've done to me
Romeo
(repeat to fade)
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Lol, please, tell me what you think.
| | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:05 TigerLileh | 16 posts
| And more of my randomness...
Teardrops Like Raindrops
Hook:
Teardrops like raindrops falling on me
Ending my memories of sweet life can be
Raindrops like teardrops falling 'round me
Verse One:
Staring out the window into the night
It's got to be dark before it can be light
The sun's gone out
And the rain pours down
Closing my eyes, I see your face
This vision of you leaves me with nothing to say
I turn my head away from the rainy scene
Strugging not to think about what might have been
You've made me miss you
Not letting me kiss you
Curled up in the corner, I sit and I cry
And let the sound of the rain be my lullaby
Chorus:
My teardrops are like raindrops
How they fall on me
The raindrops are like my teardrops
That only I can see
Like drowning in a river of all my pain
Then starts the thunder all over again
(2x)
Teardrops...
(2x, whispered)
Reverse Hook:
Raindrops like teardrops, fallin' 'round me
Ending my memories of how sweet life can be
Teardrops like raindrops, fallin' on me
mmm fallin' on me
teardrops
mmm fallin' on me
| | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:07 TigerLileh | 16 posts
| Okay. Last one. =)
Obsession
Hook
Obsess
Impress
Caress
Possess
I obsess, impress and tempt anew
I love to caress, possess and subdue
Verse One[b]
Obsession (background, whispered)
You're always on my mind
Impression (background, whispered)
Thinkin' 'bout you all the time
Caress me (background, whispered)
I'm completely overcome by you
Possess me (background, whispered)
Too much to just be strung along by you
I'm obsessed (background, whispered)
Infatuation
Infatuation (background, whispered)
[b]Chorus
I want that feeling to take me over
Touch me - hold me just a little bit closer
Whisper my name just a little bit softer
Kiss me just a little bit longer
I'm in it so deeply
So completely
Infatuation ('obsession' on repeat)
Verse Two
Obsession (background, whispered)
Mm I'm gettin' that feelin'
Impression (background, whispered)
Something's got to happen
Caress me (background, whispered)
Chorus
I want that feeling to take me over
Touch me - hold me just a little bit closer
Whisper my name just a little bit softer
Kiss me just a little bit longer
I'm in it so deeply
So completely
Infatuation ('obsession' on repeat)
| | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:08 nefariouslady_t | 11,509 posts
| You're my What If Romeo
Very catchy line 
Keep up the good work! | | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:13 TigerLileh | 16 posts
| Thanks!
| | 0 @ 08-08-2004 17:41 Lija | 85 posts
| this is just summit i threw togetherin 5 so honesty plz! i wont mind
in the light of this dark night
the darkness gives my heart new fight
and im driven by the thought i might
speak to you again
so this time you say not this way
and the pain inside my soul today
tells me i cannot make my home
all alone oh all alone
chorus:
please tell me why you talk and lie
and turn my world around the silence that now fills the room is the loudest kind of sound
the loudest kind of sound
you knew my dreams i knew none of yours
and the sadness from my mind still pours
and your evil gives me such due cause
to leave you anyway
so this time you say not this way
and the pain inside my soul today
tells me that i cannot make my home
alone oh all alone
(chorus)
and turne my world around
itz the loudest kind of sound | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:34 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| wow. its good. man, now i want to hear the song that goes with it!!  | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:35 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| sometimes the ones that are thrown together end up being the best ones. lifes weird that way... | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:45 Lija | 85 posts
| hey ninja babe! u got ne songs to submit! wat kinda music u like? | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:50 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| hm, i like hard stuff. like underoath, thrice, fince, beloved, dead poetic, as i lay dieing, ... yeah. u? hang on ill type up one of mine... | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:52 Lija | 85 posts
| keane oasis the verve im an indie boy look 4 ward to reading it! | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:55 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| k. this ones called Sudden Death Slowly...
captivated.
your heart beats to this tune.
motivated.
the eyes that caused this wound.
dying.
to find the circle's end.
falling.
youre giving up again.
the same song plays every day
only with different words.
the hopes you built your life upon
were strung with rotten chords.
trapped within this empty pit
youve dug with all your fears
the sky is wating somewhere else;
the floor receives your tears.
this cell has got you.
you let the moment slip through your fingers
as the hammer hits the floor.
this room has got you
pinned, like a nail to a door.
its too hard to kill
something youve made so lovingly.
its to hard to life
when death sits here so comfortably.
..... what do ya think? | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 15:56 ninja_babe | 333 posts
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* offtopic :
live* not life at the end.... oops.
| | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:02 Lija | 85 posts
| u dun it yet!!!? | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:03 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| wut do u mean? like have i put it to music yet? | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:06 Lija | 85 posts
| wow! that is gr8 ! u have a talent there! i aint written a song 4 a while now!! gotta get writing again! | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:12 Lija | 85 posts
| soz yep i ment dat! hey ive just written anuvva one im a 5 min wonder!! | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:23 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| awesome! thanks!glad you like it and glad it inspired you to write!! | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:24 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| wuts the one u just wrote?? | | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:25 Lija | 85 posts
| u got ne more songs?
| | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:36 ninja_babe | 333 posts
| yep. i do, but i gotta go so ill post it later. thanks for you enthus! its really encouraging!
| | 0 @ 11-08-2004 16:38 Lija | 85 posts
| kk
| | 0 @ 19-08-2004 17:18 Dibs16 | 22 posts
| it took me a while to discover this one i couldnt tell you why but ive been writing songs for a while now and heres one i wrote the other day..tell me if u like it
Rediscovering A Dedication To Love
Staring out the window, the stars are so bright, just above the overpass .
Remembering all the tears, smiles, love hate and fears, Just don’t look down.
Kept beneath my skin is the silence beckoning just for one last gasp, for one last good-bye.
The thick yellow lines are beginning to sing a lullaby on this dark night,
as the stereo guides me along the roads.
The destination is unknown,
but the music shall take my hand and lead me tonight.
Only the wind can deafen my ear and wake me up, wake me up.
Calling from inside you, where I have always longed to be.
Through the river of your heart from top to bottom.
Pick up the phone its screaming from inside you,
just for one last goodbye.
I just wanna be in love,
and I want you to feel the same.
Leave our lives behind with kerosene and a match.
Give our belongings a tablet of cyanide and walk away,
as the gasoline over takes the oxygen
as we take the air for granted, but never the love. Never the love.
Calling from inside you, where I have always longed to be.
Through the river of your heart from top to bottom.
Pick up the phone its screaming from inside you,
just for one last goodbye.
We know what its like to grow up,
with the sweet smell of summer in our lungs,
and the freshly cut grass beneath the small of our backs,
watching the earth spin circles around us,
just like the scene from your favorite movie, and my favorite song. This is for you my love, But who are you? But who are you? But who are you?
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i dont know about some parts of it, but pleaaaaaaase tell me what you think even if you absolutely hate it tell me...and about the title, i think i was completely hammered when i made that one up | | 0 @ 19-08-2004 18:12 Doc__Holiday | 95 posts
| I'm breaking out
I've held my cards too long
This heart so alive
Has Got to bring life back
To this calculated, controlled expression
Flash me in the spotlight
'cause I've got a message to give
I want to scream love to the masses
I want to put a gun to the head
Of the on-going need for man to judge
Himself by another's perception
It's time to kill the snooze button
On the alarm I should have
Toward my alienation from the person I want to be
Time to open the blinds and let the lgiht out
And let the love in
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