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The Song Corner
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@ 23-07-2003 20:36 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| This is a thread in which you can post songs you wrote. Basically the rules are the same as a the Poem corner..... ill post one of my songs later |
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 0  @ 08-09-2003 12:51 Darling15 | 8,440 posts
| alrighty then. i got a bit bored in math class today so i decided to shock myself by writing a song.
now, im no good at songs and its a bit kitchy but its the best i can do so tell me if u think its REALLY bad or just a little... 
its for.... this guy.... u dont know him....
you said you wanted me
but what did you expect me to be?
i only have my heart to give
cuz its with you i want to live
you're the one who makes me smile
and i swear i'll make it worth your while
how can i make you understand
that i need more than just a man
i need someone who will love me
and really care
someone who will always be there
you said you wanted me
but do you even know what you want?
cuz i love you, cant you see?
i want it to be forever, just you and me
i wanna spend my life standing by your side
could spend my life looking into your eyes
i cant wait till the day comes when i can say those words
those two precious words-
i do
and i wish to hear you say them too-
i do
so you offered, but i had to turn you down
it wasnt me you wanted, just a girl that you can crown
as your own
just a girl you can brag to your friends about
just a girl for you to have
so you wont feel so alone
you want me, just like you want every other one
but to me its real
its so much of a bigger deal
its hurts so bad when youre not around
im lost, can you see i need to be found?
cuz i love you, cant you see?
i want it to be forever, just you and me
i wanna spend my life standing by your side
could spend my life looking into your eyes
i cant wait till the day comes when i can say those words
those two precious words-
i do
and i wish to hear you say them too-
i do
maybe its a little too rash
and maybe im a bit too young
but the way i feel for you
i never felt for anyone....
cuz i love you, cant you see?
i want it to be forever, just you and me
i wanna spend my life standing by your side
could spend my life looking into your eyes
i cant wait till the day comes when i can say those words
those two precious words-
i do
and i wish to hear you say them too-
....cuz i do, my love, i do....
Do you?! | | 0 @ 08-09-2003 13:29 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| It's really a good one darling... really. But you know who should read it right? | | 0 @ 09-09-2003 01:01 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| that song was kickass, i really liked it... but i agree with Yochai on this one.... that special person should read it | | 0 @ 09-09-2003 01:13 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| i swear to god ill post another song in the next 24hours... somebody on msn list remind me to though... incase i forget | | 0 @ 10-09-2003 13:41 Darling15 | 8,440 posts
| ohhhh, thnx jill hun.... *hugs* and thnx yochai of course!!! *hugs*
uh.... alright... another one for that guy....
its really bad 
ok, here goes....
i get this feeling you're avoiding me
im calling you but cant get through
i think you're scared
and want to be spared
you're scared of what i might say
but i wont let you get away
cuz i need to tell you how i feel
thats what makes it real
i dont care if i get hurt
cuz i know that i can heal
i dont care where i end up
this time im really fed up
gonna get this through to you
if its the last thing i do
let me tell you how i feel
now im determined
i will get through to you
i will call you every day, find a way
to make you listen
cuz baby dont you see i need you to know
so let me say this before you go
cuz i need to tell you how i feel
thats what makes it real
i dont care if i get hurt
cuz i know that i can heal
i dont care where i end up
this time im really fed up
gonna get this through to you
if its the last thing i do
let me tell you how i feel
cuz i need to tell you how i feel
thats what makes it real
i dont care if i get hurt
cuz i know that i can heal
i dont care where i end up
this time im really fed up
gonna get this through to you
if its the last thing i do...
cuz i need to tell you how i feel
thats what makes it real
i dont care if i get hurt
cuz i know that i can heal
i dont care where i end up
this time im really fed up
gonna get this through to you
if its the last thing i do
let me tell you how i feel
| | 0 @ 10-09-2003 14:40 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| wow darling... it really really is a good song! I wish I could hear it with music... | | 0 @ 10-09-2003 15:33 Darling15 | 8,440 posts
| i kinda made up the tune too so it really sucks and is a bit repetetive....  btw, thnx hun. *hugs* | | 0 @ 10-09-2003 16:46 Dekar | 
36,123 posts
| I felt inspired so here's a little verse I put together.
Tell me if you have ever seen
A man kill himself in his own dream
Take a jagged-edged blade
Plunge it deep into his being
Can't stand being seen one more minute
Puts himself down and decides to end it
Cause he can't defend it, he's lost against it
He invented the noose and put it to use
No one there to cut him loose
It's just no use, no saving disgrace
This basket case ain't got no faith
No one to love, no angels above
It's why he's here in the first place
Can't keep up with the race
It's the worst part of waking up
Ain't no Folgers in this man's cup
Just some bloody metal, a flower with no petals
Cause he hates himself and just went mental
He trashed his home, he's all alone
He hates everyone
Wouldn't answer the phone when someone called
He refuses it all, he's taking the fall
And he's done with it all, he's gone insane
Not feelin' the love, not feelin' the blood
Rushin' through his veins cause there ain't no more
No openin' the door cause he ripped himself apart
Cut open his heart, and it's all on the floor
Forever more laying there, staying there, waiting there
For the end of the nightmare
For the tunnel and the light
Greying hair, too old to fight so he took his life
Another lonely man killed himself tonight | | 0 @ 11-09-2003 22:04 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| ok ok, it was my b-day yesterdayt.... so i enve3r got achance to post the song... but here goes.... its prolly not as good as the other.. but its about someone this time.. so anywho... here goes
Two Seats Down
She sits two seats down from me in class
Whenever I can I make a pass
I want her to be mine
She lightens up everyone of my days
In her sweet and special way
I think she's totaly fine
And when her smile appears
I begin to fear
That another guy might get her
She sucks them all in
Like a drunk on gin
I hope she thinks I better (than the rest)
I want her to be with me
Oh, be with me
Just be with me
With me
Her smart remarks out wit all others
God, I hope that I don't smother
Her with all my love
I'm just so damn needy
I think I'm beign greedy
When I think of this dove
And when her smile appears
I begin to fear
That another guy might get her
She sucks them all in
Like a drunk on gin
I hope she thinks I better (than the rest)
I want her to be with me
Oh, be with me
Just be with me
With me
The asspirations of love fill my heart
And everytime were apart
I think I start to go insane
And then when she comes into sight
I know everything will be alright
Her love I am trying so hard to obtain
And when her smile appears
I begin to fear
That another guy might get her
She sucks them all in
Like a drunk on gin
I hope she thinks I better (than the rest)
I want her to be with me
Oh, be with me
Just be with me
With me
Can't control my feelings for her
Can't control my feelings for her
My feelings for her
Can't she be with me
With me | | 0 @ 11-09-2003 23:55 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| id enjoy imput on the song, if anyone would like to give some | | 0 @ 12-09-2003 00:08 Dekar |
36,123 posts
| Give me some and I'll give you some. | | 0 @ 12-09-2003 02:51 Puddle_of_sugar | 3,690 posts
| wow u guys are awesome | | 0 @ 12-09-2003 11:11 Darling15 | 8,440 posts
| uh.... dek, that was.... geez.... uh, ouch. but really well written. good job.
jill, that was really sweet, y dont u talk to this gurl? u sound like a really great guy so go over and sweep her off her feet! good luck hun. | | 0 @ 12-09-2003 19:36 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| sorry dek, i really did like yours though... very ummm, well... full of feeling | | 0 @ 13-09-2003 13:07 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| i totally missed Darling's post... so in responce ill ummmm respond... i have talked to this girl.. i talk to her every day... but i dunno... i cant explain it | | 0 @ 13-09-2003 23:00 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| Due to the lack of other songs being posted today I feel as though I should post another... it aint that great, its another love song... and uhhh yea... so here goes
As We Lay
As we lay across the beach
For her hand I do reach
Will we be together
Like this forever
Is it and I wonder now
Is this really how
It's gonna stay
Love not going away
I feel her hand slipping
I start to lose my gripping
And now I see I'm tripping
Over my love for her
And now I want her more
Even more than before
There's no if's anymore
She makes my mind a blur
She stops my heart
In the best of ways
She'll change for the good
Everyone of my days
She can't make me angry
Can't make me feel hate
This is the girl I wanna
Make my perminent date
I know she'll explain
Every though on her brain
She's always like that
She knows that I like that
Whenever were walking
Whenever were talking
She's always intrigued
I know she loves me
And then...
She stops my heart
In the best of ways
She'll change for the good
Everyone of my days
She can't make me angry
Can't make me feel hate
This is the girl I wanna
Make my perminent date
She's always there
She always cares
She onws all my love
Like an angel from up above
I swear never to leave her
I swear never to deceive hjer
I will be true
I'll be honest too
And then...
She stops my heart
In the best of ways
She'll change for the good
Everyone of my days
She can't make me angry
Can't make me feel hate
This is the girl I wanna
Make my perminent date | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 04:46 BuzzKiD27 | 569 posts
|    awesome songs guys!! Crazy T ur last one was good ...i write a lil.. so heres one 
"I'm Sorry Baby"
i was walking to you
i was on my way
i started lose you
and i'm sorry baby
i tried to be what u need
i thought i did my best
i tried to give everything
i'm lying here a mess
and i'm sorry baby
for not being there
i'm sorry baby
i really do care
didnt know you were gonna
walk out the door
from here on
i'm gonna try to give you more
i was tryin to make it all right
didn't know you were hurting at night
i thought i did all i can
come back to me baby
i wanna show you who i am
and i'm sorry baby
that my love wasnt enough
i'm sorry baby
for giving up
i'm trying to find you
but it seems i cant see
come back to me baby
i'm sorry for being me
and i'm sorry baby
for not being there
i'm sorry baby
i really do care | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 13:25 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| that song was good aswell | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 13:29 Rass | 5,430 posts
| ooh song corner! lets post my most controversial one! why? because i wanna hear someone bitch about it  warning, can't stand someone saying bad things about god? dun read my song o.o | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 13:30 Rass | 5,430 posts
| God Does Not Exist
Silent tears roll down my face
I'm a disgrace to the human race
Yet still I live though in mercy I slit my wrists
Why? Because God does not exist
From now on I shall be the Shepard
And He the lamb
You know who had the right idea?
The son of Sam
Geneticists play god
Well I'll play too
And from now on I'm the god of all of you
You can't break my spirit
You can't break my stride
I'm higher than you all
I got my own f*****g pride
Live a little die a little its all the same to me
From now on you're in my mercy
Only I can set you free
You better fall to your knees
You better pray to me
Because now I own everything that you see
You can't break my spirit
You can't break my stride
I'm higher than you all
I got my own f*****g pride
You can't be complete until you've read my book
It tells in detail how the first God came and how I took
Took from him his followers
He’s nothing now
He was nothing before
But now I have his "power"
You think he really loved you
Well guess again
Remember he turned his back on you
I became your only friend
Satan was even closer to a friend
Than God had ever been
Who wanted us to see the light?
Who threw us from Eden?
God was afraid of what we might do
Well now I’ve done it and he's through with you…
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side note, i was in a very bad mood at the time and conflicted with my own religion o.o let the pissing and moaning begin! | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 13:31 Rass | 5,430 posts
| oops x.x fergot to censor the F word x.x so sorry mods dun shoot me! (holds hands up) 
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(That's allright hun, done it for ya! Ally xx) | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 13:36 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| im really an atheist now.... though i still have a little bit of hope that god does exist.... but i reaslly liked the song | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 15:31 Rass | 5,430 posts
| just for criticizm i post this song i wrote long ago
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I feel the power held within my paws
I feel the power slipping through my claws
I feel the blood running down my chin
What the f--- did you get us in?
I feel the power held within my paws
I feel the power slipping through my claws
I feel the blood running down my chin
What the f--- did you get us in?
I'm a werewolf inside
There’s a full moon outside
Come on babe and dance with me
Wolves can be gentle, as you'll see
I’m like the Great Dane in the yard
Cool, strong, and big
I’m like the gray hound at the track
Smart, sly, and quick
I’m like the pup in the park
Cute, sweet, yet dark
I’m like the wolf near the stream
Slick, young and mean
I'm a werewolf inside
There’s a full moon outside
Come on babe, let me run with you
Wolves aren't dead, they have feelings too
Trail a knife across your flesh
The blood will make you want to hide
But one tiny little taste
Will make you feel strong inside
I feel the power held within my paws
I feel the power slipping through my claws
I feel the blood running down my chin
What the f--- did you get us in?
There’s a tightening in my gut
As you slowly begin to die
You struggled just a little too much
Now it's time to say goodbye
I feel your body limp within my paws
I feel your life slipping through my claws
I feel the blood burning on my chin
You made me commit a mortal sin
I'm a werewolf inside
There’s a full moon outside
Come on babe, just lie with me
Wolves grow restless as you see | | 0 @ 14-09-2003 16:28 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| i liked the song, its obviously weird... but i do like it.... | | 0 @ 16-09-2003 12:07 Darling15 | 8,440 posts
| another one coming from moi....
this is getting to be a weird habit....
What Its All About
I can't say I'm surprised
I knew I'd end up deprived (of your love)
I never expected you to agree
Never thought that you'd choose me
There are so many other girls who are just fine
Out of all the hearts, why would you take mine?
But, you know, I don't really mind
If you don't think I'm your kind
And I totally understand
If I don't match your demand
Cuz I know I came too late
You already had a new date
Did I really expect you to wait?
Cuz (as you see it)
It's all about the fun
It's okay if she's not the one
It's all about that smile
Even if it only lasts a while
It's all about this moment
Whoever the opponent
It's all about the now
It doesnt matter who or why or how
It's all about whoever
It's all about whatever
My friends all hate you
Say I need to get over you
You're not worth the tears
Or the next few years
When I close my eyes, there you are
But I know that in reality you're just too far
And I can't reach-
You don't want to be reached
Don't want to be preached
You think you're better off without me
Just wanna be free
Cuz (as you see it)
It's all about the fun
It's okay if she's not the one
It's all about that smile
Even if it only lasts a while
It's all about this moment
Whoever the opponent
It's all about the now
It doesnt matter who or why or how
It's all about whoever
It's all about whatever
So what's wrong with me?
Why am I not what a teen's supposed to be?
Where did I go wrong?
Why am I always singing the wrong song?
Why do I always have to fall, for them all?
Why do I always have to hurt
And end up feeling like dirt?
Why do I always mess up?
Why can't I ever give up?!
Cuz to me
It's all about the love
It's all about that dove
It's all about the eyes
Livin' without the lies
It's all about what's real
That's the deal
It's all about what's right
Makin' up after every fight
It's all about together
It's all about forever
It's all about the one
In the long run
It's all about "I do"
It's all about you
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