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@ 23-06-2003 08:06 Guinness1759
5,220 posts	Hi! I don't know if ther's already a thread about this, but I know you all are very creative and artistic, and I know some of you write poems. Well, basicly her's where you post your poems (or someone else's) and hope your friends could give you comments about them. I'll srart then. This is a poem I wrote a while ago and I really wanted to shear it with someone. I had to translate it from hebrew though, so it might not sound as good. Self Portrait -------------- You, look in the miror you see you didn't shave this morning, you see the eyes that refuses to open. a dream is forgotten something inside of you tells you to look at you again. a coulpe of hopes you once had, drown with the teeth-brushing water making it's way in the sewage's maze. You stop watching. after all, you know what your face look like. you know each wrinkle and each scar and you can tell the story of each one and one. the thoughts are running within you and you shake them, wipe them, depart of them. You are alive. nothing more.

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0 @ 01-05-2005 01:45 IloveSCREAMO
50 posts	1 MORE DAY 1 more day- is all i need 1 more day- to watch you bleed 1 more day- and well all be gone so shut the fuck up and learn this song u broke my heart ill break your arm u brought me dread ill bring you harm i loved u once but this is now a once blissful heart has now gone foul so your loving life? im loving death and babe, im waitin' for your very last breath........ ok thats it... it came off the top of my head... but anywayz, PLZ PLZ PLZ someone respond... i think its okay but idk (at leasr read it
0 @ 01-05-2005 16:06 rainbowgirl46
143 posts	Okay, any comments would be appreciated, i know this sounds pretty bitter and stuff but i kinda think maybe that gives it more impact, i don't know, still seems like i'm missing something. the point maybe. I’m sorry I see you standing there With your matching skirt And your sweet sweet smile And I know you’re no better But I want to beat you I’m sorry I’m disguising this jealousy As disgust for your perfection That it makes you seem fake That it means you are cheating I know you aren’t fake I’m sorry That I look pained when you laugh When you stand so close I just want to dig in my heels I want to shout in the street Don’t forget about me I’m sorry I’ve created this war This edge to our smiles How we could cut each other I know I’m no better I know that I’m worse But I want to beat you. And when you left us together I saw your heart in your eyes As you looked back And I didn’t mind And when he took your hand I saw your heart in your eyes But I knew I’d be there tonight And I didn’t mind Maybe if you weren’t so nice And I wasn’t so lost And he wasn’t so easy And there was some perfection
0 @ 01-05-2005 18:01 rainbowgirl46
143 posts	* offtopic : bump
0 @ 08-05-2005 16:27 AcidYouth
15 posts	~A girl without a face she draggs her fet as she walks down the lonely street she fears the people that pass her by she his them snicker she hears them biker about the way she dresses she continues on knowing that they'll soon be gone she walks to the edge of an overlooking she opens her mouth to scream buts muffled but a deadly bang her bodynumbs,her eyes roll back as the people smile not knoing her fate but its to late, a girl without a face..
0 @ 15-05-2005 04:54 antirecoiL
31 posts	this is one... I wrote for my english class >.> Tell me if you like it plz --------------------------------------------------------- [u]envy[/u] i looked at him… lost… he was enthusiastic-- fabulous… his existence… improbable-- inexplicable-- altogether bewildering-- an insoluble problem… inconceivable… why did he not disappear… i went farther-- then still farther-- til I was so far i don’t know how I’ll ever get back… never mind plenty time i can manage i tell you-- the glamour enveloped his destitution… his loneliness... his futile wanderings… i was seduced by admiration… like Envy.. glamour urged him on. glamour kept him unscathed. he wanted nothing but space to breathe in… his need was to exist-- to move onwards-- with a maximum privation… if the absolutely pure-- uncalculating-- unpractical spirit-- had ever ruled a human being… it ruled this bepatched youth… i envied him… the possession of this modest, clear flame. it consumed all thought of self completely… i did not envy his devotion… it appeared to me the most dangerous thing… in every way. --------------------------------------------------------- so what do you think ^^;;
0 @ 15-05-2005 04:58 beefwellington
2,982 posts	Tread softly, my dear. Only those who can hear us Will be the ones that seethe us. But fear not, For escaping is not the greatest pleasure We derive it from ourselves. Our feelings of congruity (Sorry to sound mathamatical, darling) The feelings that stay Throughout our journey. Soon to be home, we will wait, for those who follow behind. Our path will bear the footsteps of many to come.
0 @ 20-05-2005 13:06 emotionalscarz
1 posts	Hi, I'm New =] just thought I'd show 2 poems, theres a lot where that came from tho lol smiles You Are You are the beat of my heart, The breath in my lungs, The warmth of my soul and everything in between. You're not like every other, Your intentions are not to use me. You're amazing and great, You're incredible.... You are the beat of my heart, The breath in my lungs, The warmth of my soul and everything in between. How do you do this to me? Every day, I think of you, Every night, You're in my dreams... You come online, and instantly, a smile spreads across my face. You are the beat of my heart, The breath in my lungs, The warmth of my soul and everything in between. -------------------------------------------------------- Star When you reach for a star, It always seems so far, But with every step, You're getting nearer Closer and closer, Till things couldn't be clearer. Climbing higher and higher, To reach heart's every desire, No use trying to put out this interal fire. When you reach for a star, It always seems so far, But with every step, You're getting nearer Closer and closer, Till things couldn't be clearer. All of a sudden, memories come back, Why can't anyone give me some slack? It's not cos there's brains I lack, Can't do anything with ya breathing down my back. When you reach for a star, It always seems so far, But with every step, You're getting nearer Closer and closer, Till things couldn't be clearer. I gotta be free, Can't have no chains around me. Look at me, And tell me what you see? Just me, Little old me. Just a girl, trying to be free. When you reach for a star, It always seems so far, But with every step, You're getting nearer Closer and closer, Till things couldn't be clearer. There's a star.. Inside each one of us, We just have to look inside and trust. There's a star... Not that far..
0 @ 05-06-2005 00:30 Shadow_Cat13
35 posts	Rage of Fire The torture the anguish it's burning me inside I can't help ,but feel this way why am I feeling this way I can't help it get me from the Rage Of Fire it's killing me toturing me trying to get out I keep it in it's killing to see the memory's what the Rage of Fire did to me and the one's I love I hate seeing there tortured face's that leave agony in them it sicken's me to see there soul's placed on dragon's head's and sent to hell like they were ment to go there ,but they were destined to go to heaven that was the Rage of Fire's doing not mine. Hope you all like it I really like the one's I've read
0 @ 05-06-2005 01:13 buzzybee316
46 posts	here's 2 poems i wrote...please tell if they're good or not... A Prayer Lord, Jesus, Savior of all, I'll always need You, but now most of all. Those people were making fun of that kid. Please help me stick up for him and know not to join in. I'm faced with challanges everyday. Help me to stick to Your Word and not stray. I'll honor my parents;I'll keep the Sabbath day holy. I'll not misuse your name;I'll worship You only. You performed miracles. You taught God's word. The leaders of the time thought that You were absurd. You did nothing wrong, yet they wanted You dead. You could have lived;You chose the cross instead. You died for me, now my sins are forgiven. Those who believe in You shall now get into Heaven. It's not hard to do;it's easy to get in. Admit, believe and confess. Lord, I love you. Amen. One Nation, Under God One nation, under God. We recite this every day. Our forefathers believed. What has happened to us today? Some people have stopped believing. They want to end this phrase. They took their plea to the Supreme Court Where they said, "American should not give God praise." We are one nation, under God. Was, is, and always will be. For if God had never existed, There would be no you and no me.
0 @ 15-06-2005 22:42 powerandpeace
28 posts	i've posted this before but here it is again: i was just thinkin' well here we are floating on a surface for which we'd die where light bulbs are replaced when they flicker and if they refuse they are smashed by clumsy, forgetful hands yes, it is as simple as it seems and yes, it is too good to be true in a place where we are expected to desire hopelessness and worship pointlessness, any word can have meaning if spoken loud enough; any person can be forgotten if pushed hard ____ you expect my compliance to destroy my defiance i snicker at the idea but I'll sit here if you speak loudly and since the gods created themselves in their image we created our hell a place where we'll have to run when we run out of our endless supplies sorry just ignore all this shit it's just angst or so the men with their shiny degrees say when you think about it if ever you do masturbation is not really a ritual it’s just a place for egotism to breed and megalomaniacs to breath on the other hand is prayer anything but an excuse to talk to ourselves without looking crazy if so I can't see it I guess I don't see much because this is NORTH AMERICA culture is a side-note a mere smear on a shoelace capital is our capital and the rest is not palpable until we are blessed with success and a good woman with a nice chest and until we desist to insist that women stay chained down I will not bow to your make-up used as cover-up on everything trusted and sound but why do I complain when I know it won't change for it's all cyclical and as the gears spin you can ride along or fall in or sit there farting out your beliefs only to watch them dissipate into the poisonous, nauseating soot that we’re so willing to breath as long as our gargantuan off road vehicles can still be driven along our suburban streets ha that’s silly and that’s life ---------------------------------------------------- and another freewrite, but i warn you this one is a bit more graphic: excercise for my mind I’ll apologise in advance for what you’re about to read In all its wandering randomness. I guess you could think of it as exercise for the mind, At least I will, ’cause as the greatest race Us humans like our info displaced or misplaced or disgraced Or whatever it takes to keep the smiles on our face. Think of all the energy we could save without the indoor skiing hills And think of all the time men could save if they just whipped their dicks out Beside a ruler upon meeting one another. There’d be a lot less deaths too Let me tell you Please? Maybe that wouldn’t offend you if you realised I don’t care About your guys’ muscly arms And your gals big tits and hissy-fits. Fuck Me? Fuck You. I would too If I didn’t respect my body as much. Damn. Thwarted by my morals once again. One day I’ll wear my skirt above my knees And buy Britney’s new CD, But not today. No, no, no. Never today. What I’m doing now is good, What I’ve done was silly, And what I’ll do is prophetic. Oh look at that I’ve masturbated all over the screen again. Are you disgusted? Well I heard a wise statement the other day That disgust is just a farce in order to be seen as normal. But of course, that couldn’t apply to you, Or you, Or you Because we’re “all so unique” says our first grade teacher And that’s all we need to deny The fact that our lives are no more different than the lasts’ But with shinier glass and louder blasts.
0 @ 15-06-2005 22:47 powerandpeace
28 posts	to buzzybee: after reading your poems my throat began to hurt and for the ife of me i couldn't figure out why and then it hit me: it was all those times throughout that you shoved your god down my throat. now i respect your right to write about anything you want, i'm not criticizing your material, instead i mean that i feel you came on a little strong with the i'm right, you're wrong message. i hope you understand that i criticize your technique not you content.
0 @ 14-07-2005 16:01 antirecoiL
31 posts	who am I? just another lost in the crowd so simple, so obsolete yet so loving, so unique you can't see me I am lost in the faces you are unable to hear me scream you will one day take me seriously pick me out upon the shoulders of millions you will hear them chant my name til then I sit and think and stare into nothing, yet everything...alone til then i am still lost in a million one face, one voice, one poem
0 @ 21-07-2005 00:00 sexyangel15
128 posts	roses are red voilets are blue angels are invisible,so are you its so comlicated i cant explain its like you complain even though you arent there Jessie
0 @ 21-07-2005 00:04 sexyangel15
128 posts	coments?
0 @ 21-07-2005 23:13 sweetthing25
5 posts	i really love it and i really can relate
0 @ 21-07-2005 23:16 sweetthing25
5 posts	true beauty shines trough of the one who believes so no matter the words that flow so wrongly from your mouth my beauty is forever lasting forever strong Amber
0 @ 21-07-2005 23:18 sweetthing25
5 posts	so ne thing???????????? ne body like it???????? come on!!!!!!!!
0 @ 22-08-2005 02:03 katieg5
7 posts	tonight tonight it hurts tonight it kills I hate this love for love that I feel to find love bestowed into every other heart but my own I am shattered I feel no grace a hard night to dream of the lovely things that take me away I’ve grown I’ve built myself up tonight I m braking down its me this obsession is my greatest passion tonight my biggest flaw I want to believe that its worth the wait but with no proof for my cause tonight it hurts tonight it kills eating away at this living mentality that everything will be okay tonight my smile fades and I’ve never known summer to be so cold and my tears haven’t taken me in so long but tonight they flow tonight my hopes die I feel so alone tonight ....let me know what you think...
0 @ 26-08-2005 22:09 MonkeySpanky
259 posts	here i am, hiding in the closet waiting for the monster to go away here i am hiding in the closet reliezing i've been hiding all day here i am breating softly hoping he wont hear taking in all this pain leting out all this fear when i know hes coming closer i pray its just a dream but nope its real and noone can hear me scream! Lac3y Jac3
0 @ 21-09-2005 09:46 DeMoon
16 posts	hey, taht was pretty good! Here is a small, kinda sad line i came up with the other day... The only one who'd cry for me, is the sky on a rainy day...
0 @ 21-02-2006 14:08 MERI_AN
942 posts	Hey! ALL of you are soooo talented! Loved your poems! so here´s mine: (untitled--> any ideas?) Yo pienso... Si tú piensas en mí. Si tú piensas en mí tanto como yo pienso en tí. Si tú piensas en mí de la manera en que yo pienso en tí. Si tú piensas en mí más de lo que yo pienso en tí. Si, no sólo piensas en mí, sino que no puedes vivir sin mí. transaltion: I think... If you think in me. If you think in me as much as I think in you. If you think in me in the way that I think in you. If you think in me more than I think in you. If, not only you think in me, but you cannot live without me. It´s kind of repetitive, but I hope you like it! it´s better in spanish i think. see you around!
0 @ 03-03-2006 00:53 Sadi
115 posts	i like that, and i agree, it sounds better in spanish. here's one i wrote for english class. it's kind of weird, but not in a depressing way. By the way, the first two lines are supposed to be one long line, and there's twenty words in the first sentence. Feedback would be great, especially with the 'time's desert' line. it's kinda cheesy. Everything that happened before will happen again unless it's a sentence with twenty words or more no one ever quotes. Because the end is the beginning, And everything's in circles. Infinite, always there, Two pi r or pi r squared. A grain of sand, A second in comparison With the long life of time's desert. That's all you get. It doesn't matter. Too short to be bitter, Too small to hate. So what if they say you're Stupid annoying crazy a loser. You're happy, They think they've got time to be bitter. You're having fun, They think they know enough to hate. And before they know it they're gone, Lifeless as a rock. And you're gone too, But who lived their grain of sand better? Language Key Map Legend All you'll ever need. See Smell Hear Taste Feel Live every minute, And don't look back. Somehow all succeed. Because the beginning is the end, And everything's in circles.
0 @ 03-03-2006 01:02 that_wasnt_me
1,441 posts	Crippled There was this guy That eveyone hates No one talks to this guy He just waits around and cries There was this girl That this guy loved But she loves him too But she dont know that her heart just died One day they happend to talk Neither one knew what the other felt They were great friends No one would have thought they loved each other Then there was this night She was driving and got hit The girl he once knew is hurt now Now he wishes that she would have known She lays unconsious now Dreaming of him how The memories of that night freash in her head She wishes he was here The next day he vistits her with flowers His heart breaks when he sees her face He holds back his tears Only to reveal his true feelings She is forgetting her fears As she carefully tells him how she feels She never would have thoght That she would get a secound chance
0 @ 09-03-2006 02:00 deaths_jr13
65 posts	yeah, im not one for long poems but heres a few i wrote during class sorry if they suck ----------- The counselor asked if I was okay, if I was alright, I said with a smile " I'm just fine." Eight hours later, blood dripped from my wrist , Watching the blood flow freely as I sit. I smile weakly. I'm just fine. ------------- Every angel has it's horns, Every darkness has it's light. All the dead will be reborn, As the wingless will take flight. ------------- (and heres a happy little limerick) There once was a fat old guy, Who was known for throwing pie. Imagine his frown, When clowns came to town. He dropped his pie and left with a sigh.
0 @ 16-03-2006 20:46 Sadi
115 posts	i like the pie-throwing one!

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