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The Poem Corner!
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@ 23-06-2003 08:06 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| Hi!
I don't know if ther's already a thread about this, but I know you all are very creative and artistic, and I know some of you write poems.
Well, basicly her's where you post your poems (or someone else's) and hope your friends could give you comments about them.
I'll srart then. This is a poem I wrote a while ago and I really wanted to shear it with someone. I had to translate it from hebrew though, so it might not sound as good.
Self Portrait
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You,
look in the miror
you see you didn't shave this morning, you
see the eyes
that refuses to open.
a dream is forgotten
something inside of you tells you
to look at you again.
a coulpe of hopes you once had,
drown with the teeth-brushing water
making it's way in the sewage's maze.
You stop watching.
after all, you
know what your face look like.
you know each wrinkle and each scar
and you can tell the story of
each one and one.
the thoughts are running within you
and you
shake them, wipe them, depart of them.
You are alive.
nothing more. |
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 0  @ 04-07-2004 18:36 nanki_c | 
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| lol hu'd u say tht to?!  | | 0 @ 04-07-2004 18:38 IQ_diskborste | 1,575 posts
| To you, of course!  You should be proud of yourself, you've really got a talent, don't waste it on drugs and alcohol!  | | 0 @ 05-07-2004 09:03 nanki_c |
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| thnx sooooooo mch!  tht means alot 2 me! n lol i wonttt! | | 0 @ 05-07-2004 10:14 nanki_c |
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| um btw.. IQ_diskborste i.e christina! d poem u rote i din read it b4 iz reallllly gud  | | 0 @ 05-07-2004 12:07 IQ_diskborste | 1,575 posts
| Thank you! *hugs*  | | 0 @ 05-07-2004 12:08 nanki_c |
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| ur welcome  | | 0 @ 05-07-2004 12:09 IQ_diskborste | 1,575 posts
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* offtopic :
happy 50th post!  <--- first time I used that one...
| | 0 @ 05-07-2004 12:16 nanki_c |
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* offtopic :
LOL i only joined afew dayz ago!
| | 0 @ 05-07-2004 12:21 IQ_diskborste | 1,575 posts
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* offtopic :
Yeah, I know, that's really good of you! it took me like forever to get 50 posts when I was new around here.
| | 0 @ 08-07-2004 16:53 3MEF | 228 posts
| is there a reason ur all typing in offtopic? does any1 think my poems are any good? (there on page 70) cuz i think they sux | | 0 @ 08-07-2004 16:57 nanki_c |
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| ther really gud realy dramatic
bt u shud put dem in2 poem form.. iz easier 2 read dat way!
* offtopic :
i hav green eyes.. n dark brown hair 
| | 0 @ 08-07-2004 17:15 3MEF | 228 posts
| heh thx well i didnt really know how to put it in poem for cuz they were the first poems i have ever written in my life so ya heh. [offtopic]kool i have green eyes too and red hair | | 0 @ 08-07-2004 17:15 nanki_c |
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| i rote all 3 of these in d middle of d nite wen i waz 1/2 asleep.. read em n comment plz
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i luv u
u say u do too
but all that is - is a lie,
sumtn fake,
u dont mean a single word u say,
m just a face in d background..
calling out ur name
but u don hear me..
i luv u
u sed u did too
how did those words go to waste?
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all alone
on my own again
in a wasteland of nothingness.. a barren land
my life..
boredom, emptiness, lonliness.. sad n alone
lost the ppl who cared for me
lost the ppl who i care for..
all alone
in this battlezone..
called home
all alone,
on my own again..
in my bubble of self loathing and hate
no one knos me
no one cares
no one knos the person inside the ugly exterior
beauty is only skin deep
why dont u look alittle further?
all alone..
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i loved u
n i stil do
but m wounded..
stick a knife in me..
break all my bones
crack my skull, crush my lings
nothing will hurt me more..
than this pain
i'm bleeding inside
m dying
ur killing me
m dying.
| | 0 @ 08-07-2004 17:16 nanki_c |
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| haha ok.. well read mine.. n comment plzz! | | 0 @ 08-07-2004 17:26 nanki_c |
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| sum1 tel me wt u tink even if u tink they suk tell me PLZ  | | 0 @ 08-07-2004 19:25 Artimis | 787 posts
| i don't think they suck...i think they're really good...awesome job..really.. | | 0 @ 08-07-2004 19:28 nanki_c |
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| thanks! | | 0 @ 10-07-2004 22:24 gcyathfan041 | 81 posts
| how bout this:
shut the heck up
you nasty ho
u best watch yo back
or ill smack u on the flo
that sucks but idk whats goin on sooo....clue me in | | 0 @ 11-07-2004 03:21 tgrstar101 | 16 posts
| I have a couple of poems
One Voice
I've tried to find the words today
to tell what's in my heart,
a way to vent… a way to share
but how is one to start?
How do we write the horror
of the thousands who were lost?
How do we pen the terror felt
as lives became the cost?
How do we say "Good will prevail -
we shall not be defeated."
How do we shout with confidence
"Such acts won't be repeated!"
How do we quell the anger
reaching far beyond the brink?
How do we spill the endless tears
that flow in crimson ink?
How do we rise up full of pride
in silent rage no longer?
Together, my friends… we must be heard
one voice… united… stronger!
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Confusion
So many questions
So little time
Sometimes I ask
Am I losing my mind?
So many decisions
I know I can't make
So much critisism
I simply just can't take
I can't please everyone
Though I will always try
Sometimes I get discouraged
But I don't know why
I hate all the pressures
That are brought upon me
To many decisions
Then I'd rather there be
I just can't stand it
Don't know what to do
To feel what I feel
If only you knew
I'm not looking for sympathy
I just wish it would end
But I feel it's a battle
That I'll never win.
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tell me wat u think all of my info is in my profile or on my page
| | 0 @ 11-07-2004 08:42 nanki_c |
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| really good | | 0 @ 12-07-2004 14:11 Artimis | 787 posts
| hey Ashley, i'm thirteen so...yeah...but anyway your poems were really good..IM me if you want on AIM:gothluvsfreak. c ya | | 0 @ 17-07-2004 01:50 blondi3542 | 348 posts
| why cant u see
the look in my eyes?
why arent u at least
half surprised?
why dont u care
about what i do?
u cant see me,
but im seeing u.
why cant u look up,
just the slightest glance?
why cant u give me
the smallest chance?
why cant u hear me
when i call ur name?
why do u fear me?
is it all just a game?
why cant u c
my love for u?
why cant u c
that shes not good enough 4 u?
why cant u try
to look into my eyes
why cant u c
my longing stare
cant u c my wistful smile
haunting u, all the while?
the bell rings, u run for the door.
i stand up, my book slips to the floor.
u pick it up without a word.
gone like a shadow in the night.
u leave the room,
im speechless with joy.
have i truly found
my lover boy?
ha yeah i no it sux i just put it down in 3 min...
dekars poems rule!
| | 0 @ 20-07-2004 02:42 faked_kiss | 99 posts
| some poems that i wrote:
By your side
Cry out loud my bestest pal
Tell me your sorrows, your pains and darkest fears
I'll be the shoulder to lean on today
I will make you remember your greatest memories
We promised when thunder would ever strike our hearts
The distress would fade away with the warm summer breeze
Told each other to never give up the dreams we once had
Always love and be loved in return
Promises may be broken and secrets may be told
We might end up losing each other in the coldest winter storm
But i know that you are my glistening star that I look upon
Here for you till the day I exhale my last breath
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ending up alone
your face, its an obsession
i shake when i hear your name
you got me into a deep depression
made the mistake once more
now i regret making that step
we ended up on the ocean floor
nothing in common but yet the same
both in a total bliss but faded away
loneliness attached to the shame
you know i needed the second chance
but let me out in the cold
although i see you secretly glance
i guess life goes on
but memories will not vanish away
and i'll admit..you won!
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follow your nose
stop dreaming open your eyes
life is too beautiful to hide from
people will hate you,
ignore you for who you are
but don't give up,
follow all your dreams
there will be people out there
they won't hide, they'll accept
the world needs you
make a difference
keep on walking or run
don't look back to hell
take your step to life
better times exist
memories are ready to be made
get your butt out there
life awaits you.
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her death
seventeen and her life just started
but she was damaged, nothing to live for
the words that had been said
made her scars less visible
but she knew that it was time
time to get it over with
no friends, nobody to talk to
not even an imaginary friend
she was already dead inside
but her fear kept her breathing
she had it all planned out
now all she had to do was wait..
monday 6:47am
eyes wide open
scared to death
tiptoed her way to the kitchen
looked around until her eye saw
the thing she had concentrated on for ages
sharp and shiny
it was meant for her flesh
slowly back to her messy room
where her note was waiting to be read
the sounds of the cuts..1 by 1
blood on the pretty white bed sheets
her world turned gray
but she smiled for the last time
her wrist felt painless
this was the last breath she exhaled
now living in a world where she is understood
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sweet addiction
That pure crisp taste of sugar
Cocoa and milky flavor formed into liquid perfection
Satisfaction seems to keep me going forever
The sweet temptation of candy wrappers
One delicious bite after another..
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© Chantal Wezelenburg
| | 0 @ 20-07-2004 23:23 ManOnFire222 | 232 posts
| u have fears and i do to but dont be scared for God is with u
one thing u will learn some will leave and some returne some will always be with u just remember God will always be there to | | 0 @ 29-07-2004 18:45 lawicha | 6 posts
| wow!!! we have many talented poets in here!!! i really admire people who share whta they think... so congrats to all of you, i also write poetry but it is mainly in spanish so i don't think you would read it... but really don't stop with your talent |
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