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The Poem Corner!
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@ 23-06-2003 08:06 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| Hi!
I don't know if ther's already a thread about this, but I know you all are very creative and artistic, and I know some of you write poems.
Well, basicly her's where you post your poems (or someone else's) and hope your friends could give you comments about them.
I'll srart then. This is a poem I wrote a while ago and I really wanted to shear it with someone. I had to translate it from hebrew though, so it might not sound as good.
Self Portrait
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You,
look in the miror
you see you didn't shave this morning, you
see the eyes
that refuses to open.
a dream is forgotten
something inside of you tells you
to look at you again.
a coulpe of hopes you once had,
drown with the teeth-brushing water
making it's way in the sewage's maze.
You stop watching.
after all, you
know what your face look like.
you know each wrinkle and each scar
and you can tell the story of
each one and one.
the thoughts are running within you
and you
shake them, wipe them, depart of them.
You are alive.
nothing more. |
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 0  @ 24-06-2003 14:15 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| Deker, thats pure talent to be able to write something so quick about such an odd topic...... and its a good poem too....... another 10points | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 14:57 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| I couldn't agree more!
now this one's for anybody who's NOT Dekar- write a poem about him!!! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 15:01 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| Dekar, strange but amusing
Dekar, loud and confusing
Dekar, smart and laidback
Dekar, maybe on crack 
Dekar, the person with lots of posts
Dekar, the one everyone likes most
Dekar, he's Candian eh
Dekar, do you think this poem is gay? | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 15:55 Dekar | 36,121 posts
| Yes, yes
Yes I do
Yes, yes
Don't you? | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:02 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| I'm not gay
not like this poem
but Crazy, hey
I think you're awsem!
| | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:11 Dekar | 36,121 posts
| I've written some crappy poems in my day
Just like this one I wrote now, but hey
I normally take my bad poems and toss 'em
But I wish you'd learn how to spell "awesome" | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:18 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| I'm really sorry I can't spell
words like "ket" and "duves"
but don't blame it on me, hell
I blame it on the drugs! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:19 Dekar | 36,121 posts
| That was pretty funny
I laughed a little bit
Do it again, would you?
I'm bad at rhymes | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:57 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| Dekar say he's bad with rhyms
We know he's really not
he just want to feel sometimes
like he's sir. lancelot
(don't know y I said that... probably the drugs thing) | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 16:57 happygymnast | 1,918 posts
| haha, you guys are so great | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 17:05 cRaZy_T | 2,193 posts
| that was a strange occurence of poems..... all... odd..... but better than mine so i'll keep my mouth shut | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 17:19 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| Odd's what makes life worth-while | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 17:22 happygymnast | 1,918 posts
| If one day i suddenly leave,
I want you to forgive me please,
Whatever I did i didn't mean to,
I didn't mean to kill you..
Sorry if i broke your heart,
I didn't mean to slice it apart,
The knife just slipped 47 times,
And i just happened to break your spine.
Twisted your head so it was backwords,
You screamed and screamed, your such a coward.
Bent your knees upside down,
Twisted your smile so now it frowns.
Like i said, please forgive me.
I just don't like you, can't you see?
haha, sorry, couldn't resist posting that...thats not dedicated to anyone, don't worry, it's just a joke..hehehe | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 17:22 Snowdrop | 6,156 posts
| you're all so so so so sooooooo funny!!!!!!!!
and wow, Dekar and Yochai, you're so very talented!!!! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 18:36 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| see, I can write poems that are'nt as depressed... | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 18:59 gumby | 5,051 posts
| some of those were so touching and emotional...while others had me falling off my chair with laughter! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:32 Snowdrop | 6,156 posts
| yeah, right... they aren't depressed at all
maybe you could teach me, since you're so very talented???? would you???  | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:33 happygymnast | 1,918 posts
| i sent that one about killing someone to my ex boyfriend last year...
hehehehe
i'm so demented ) | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:41 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| How can one teach another how to write poetry?
| | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:42 happygymnast | 1,918 posts
| thats a really good question...sorry, it is.. | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:46 Snowdrop | 6,156 posts
| ah you know... it's impossible... and actually I'm just kidding, but still they're so good! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:47 Gabe_M | 4,575 posts
| Roses are red
Violets are blue
Gabe is cool
and you aren't | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:50 Snowdrop | 6,156 posts
| Gabe... does the M in your nick stand for mean? nahhh, sorry... very good poem!!! | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:50 Guinness1759 | 5,220 posts
| that rhym iin the end made all the difference...
just kidding | | 0 @ 24-06-2003 19:51 happygymnast | 1,918 posts
| rrrrrrrright... |
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