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Life Without The Baby

 
05-11-2005 22:11Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u  

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 Okay this may sound dumb and stuff but whatever. I wanted to get it out there. My dog just died so be nice on me. This is for you Renda (the queen).
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Life Without The Baby

Life without the baby
I thought I would never have to say that.
I thought it wouldn't be a known fact.
Life without the baby is hard.
I loved her with all my heart.
She died in my arms.
She looked so calm.
Shaking.
My heart was aching.
What if she left me?
What would I do?
I wont be able to say I love you.
That I need you.
You were my baby!
I thought that you were gonna make it just maybe.
You were my baby.
Life without you wont be the same.
I know I must sound sort of lame.
But I dont care.
They could laugh and snare.
?Me Rendita por que tu?
My Renda why you?
Can you just give me a clue.
I need you.
I love you.
Come back to me.
That is all I plead.
Nenda.
Me Nenda.
Me Renda.
Girl.
My girl.
My Renda.
Yo te amo.
I love you.




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05-11-2005 22:20Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

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Hope u liked it. Took alot to write it after all this happened. I feel good about myself now that I got it all out.
05-11-2005 22:23LPgurl_4eva is offline LPgurl_4eva 

467 posts
AWWWwwww
05-11-2005 22:34Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

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Im guessing you liked it Dawn.
05-11-2005 22:46musiclover342 is offline musiclover342 


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 that touched me...
05-11-2005 22:47Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

92 posts
It made me cry. I miss my baby.
05-11-2005 22:51Angel K is offline Angel K 

858 posts
awwwwwwwww its sweet yet sad....just like the other.....



and are you okay?
05-11-2005 22:54Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

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yea im fine kitty just in alot of pain. ty for askin
06-11-2005 02:39Roxy_Ryan is offline Roxy_Ryan 


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That seriously made me cry. What you've experienced with your dogs is almost exactly like what I experienced with my babydog.

I love your writing, it's not the best but it's straightforward and to the point with a nice style.

Again, I'm sorry for your loss.
06-11-2005 02:46Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

92 posts
what makes me real pissed is she died on wedsday and in my arms she had a stroke
17-11-2005 18:24LilChuck is offline LilChuck 

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yeh this was nice, really sad...i know wot u feelin...well...my baby ddnt die in my arms...my baby died whilst inside me...but this was real nice.
20-11-2005 02:16Sk8erchick4u is offline Sk8erchick4u 

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okayyyyyyyy my BABY was a dog

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