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~Blank Love Letter~ and possibly others

28-04-2005 22:04

HoldMeTonight

53 posts

Oki I wrote this a few weeks ago it's one of my best so far IMO:

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Blank Love Letter
I long to feel your arms around me
Long for your kiss
Long just for you
To feel your warmth next to me
Your soul in me
It’s why I live through the days
I hunger – hunger for your scent
And keeping time in this play of mine
To the rhythm of our hearts beating as one…

And I remember
And I crave to feel again
The kisses like a razorblade
You left on my skin… and you marked my soul…
And I run my hands over where they were

Oh the heavenly freedom we once felt
As we were in this void alone

Won’t you cut me free of those binds again?
Won’t you come to me again and give me that freedom
The freedom of myself once again I wish to feel
I wish the night to come so the shade can smother the unclean light
So you will come again
Love me again
Set me free once again

Your kisses like a razorblade marked me
Your darkness sweet salvation to me
I felt something for once
Something the blade could never give

I felt your pain… I felt your compassion
I heard the voice in your heart like velvet
I felt for you… I will continue to…

I'll see you
Want you
Love you
Need you
Burn you
Hate you
Miss you

Feel you
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28-04-2005 22:07 manders
1,302 posts	Whoah. That is WAY good. It's really deep and I can actually relate to that right now.
28-04-2005 22:08 SteelersFan77
1,656 posts	My opinion is WOW...Your right, that is one the best poems I have ever read...That truly was great...Very Very nice job...
28-04-2005 23:24 aTHiNa3174
1,430 posts	wow, that poem is great!!
23-05-2005 21:45 HoldMeTonight
53 posts	thanks all
23-05-2005 21:52 its_all_bout_me
409 posts	v.beautiful and passionate i can really relate to it... 'I long to feel your arms around me Long for your kiss Long just for you To feel your warmth next to me Your soul in me It’s why I live through the days I hunger – hunger for your scent' i love those lines...you have described it perfectly...well done
24-05-2005 00:17 HYPNOTiSED
9,699 posts	that was really good. wow you are a really awesome writer!!
24-05-2005 15:47 vaaleria
585 posts	sooo beautiful... like it very much