/category/21/poetry/1 http://www.letssingit.com/ http://img.letssingit.com/images/logo.gif 295 65 Your favorite music community http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/321765/my-very-first-poem/1 This is my very first poem :/ not sure if im done yet or not, tell me what you think :) Sorry Momma She yelled again. I'm not perfect. I'll never be perfect. "I'm sorry momma" "I'll do better next time" She yells louder. I cry, hoping my tears http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/25670/favourite-poem-of-all-time/1 This poem called The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/25670/favourite-poem-of-all-time/1 En spelmans jordafärd by Dan Andersson. beatiful. the poem that made me read poetry. It's in swedish, I doubt theres an english translation, poetryb is never as good as it is at its native language. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/36103/my-poem-portfolio/1 so i looked at your poems again from a more mature side as its been like 5 years....still sucks! XD http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/15373/the-poem-corner/1 I didn't write this, it's an adaptation of a poem written by Elvis actually but I though it was funny As I awoke one morning, When all sweet things are born, A robin perched upon my sill, To greet the coming morn, He was so sweet and gentle, As http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/62845/my-poetry/1 I like your word choice and the descriptions you use. I could easily picture the scene you were describing, well, at least in the way my mind was portraying it. I am not sure your true intent, but for me, the first one kind of made me think about a http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/62845/my-poetry/1 So, I haven't posted in here for wow, three years almost. I have written things in that time but at some point, people stopped posting things like poetry on here and stopped commenting. But anyway, I wanted some feedback on a couple of poems. Criticism et http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/15373/the-poem-corner/1 Can someone rate my poem?? thanks!!! :) I strain Now that you're gone. It doesn't feel the same It feels wrong. My mind says I'm right, My heart says I'm not. But each and every night, I remember what I'd forgot. I try to be different, I t http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/320145/check-out-my-poetry-d/1 Hey guys i recently started a blog of my poems..I was hopeing you guys could check them out!!! [/url]http://robynspoems.blogspot.com/[url=] maybe comment them if you like?? thank youuu http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 Hi guys, can you please rate mine? give it to me straight:D You are a slave to your religion, you pray and you read the psalms, You are a slave to your faith, to Budhism, Hinduism and Islam, You are a slave to your possesions,as you stroke them gentl http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/287304/my-poem/1 good poem;) http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/287304/my-poem/1 Now I went back and saw IF you really ARE 13 it's Great. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/287304/my-poem/1 Very good! Not weird but just a bit hard to understand,why someone with your talent bothers to ask for affirmation here.Be confident and keep up the good work.:applause::thumb: http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/287304/my-poem/1 hi how r u all.Thank You Messageses ">This is a link http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/18299/the-song-corner/1 They told me I can’t write to heaven to speak to my dad, So I decided to pick up this pad And just reminisce on the life I had …I miss you dad….i miss you dad Going back to the years when I just a young kid, I think of all the shit me and dad di http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/309890/rate-my-poems/1 Rate them as #1 = X/10 #2 = X/10 #3 = X/10 :) Cheers #1 POEM Honey all I wanted was to hold you in my arms… my wish, you never granted, why don’t you give me a chance? A chance to prove that I… I will love you, I will hold you, I will http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/304957/pain-poem/1 The days and nights I spend alone I dont ever know which way to go. Left and right, up and down... Its all a blurr of confusion. I sit quitely in my bed Thinking, wondering, overwhelmed. I cant help but hold it in my hands The only thing that I k http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302278/bittersweet-pills/1 Hey, umm, this is my first set of lyrics i've posted here. Its about Arguing and not bothering to apologize because it's repetitive. Anyway, constructive critisism please. Um, Thanks. P.S. Sorry for the swearing o the 4th line, i've censored it out, so i http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302113/when-i-write-lines/1 cool:thumb: http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302113/when-i-write-lines/1 when I write lines my minds' blind from the start I put the pen to the paper and let God do his part Right in time, I free my mind, about my thoughts or beliefs Emotions about deceased its all about me, my life My pain, my strife Its like, http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302112/thoughts-now-and-then/1 Sometimes I find it hard to thank God for the air in my lungs When I look at my life from the outside and see what I’ve become A monster! Shit, some call me a thug It’s like The Hate U Gave me has been dying to blow up I said I’ve grown up, in the http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302110/poem-about-9-11-i-wrote-when-i-was-13-rate-it/1 Where were you when the planes hit the world trade Everybody crying, some saved, a lot of people dying You had a lot of police men all in your hands Was it part of your plan? I don't know but RIP to all who died and had to go And God help the kids w http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/302109/im-new-rate-this/1 “Nobody knows me”, when I look in the mirror One day at a time, these words become so much clearer And so real to me, I don’t give a shit who’s feelin me Or who aint, call me a devil or label me a saint I don’t care what you think about, “me” and “min http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/36304/cutting-poems-by/1 a cool winter evening the taste of stale air i cut my arm because i'm a loser with no friends I know they all want me Want me to slice open a crucial vein that kills me Perhaps tonight is the night The world prays http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/36304/cutting-poems-by/1 this is one i wrote the other night when i was feeling really emo. cutting my self open to feel the pain screaming inside trying to escape i watch the blood drip to the floor the pain it cause makes me feel in control i feel lost i feel de http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/36304/cutting-poems-by/1 aw i love these poems in here. mainly cuz i understand them. i write them to butt not as good as most of the ones in here. [b]cutting my self open to feel the pain screaming inside trying to escape i watch the blood drip to the floor the pain i http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 its good poem http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 Translation: My song sucks and I am embarrassed to put it up here http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 * offtopic :i would put a song of mine up here but I wouldnt want it copywrighted and its not the nicest song in the world(vulgar)with that being said......its too mushy gushy http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 You are welcome. Please do not give any of these poems to her. If anyone minuses my posts, they support bad poetry. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 N/A http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/293646/rate-my-poem-weeeeeee/1 Curt!! uhhhh. ummmmm. hmmmmm. crazy! ya lets go with that! http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/293646/rate-my-poem-weeeeeee/1 i agree with captaincool http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/293646/rate-my-poem-weeeeeee/1 Terrible http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 pay no attention to the Bu(cephalus)tthole behind the curtain^ His young,ignorant mass knows very little and gives real men a bad name. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294583/i-need-a-poem/1 If I could have just one wish, I would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of your breath on my neck, the warmth of your lips on my cheek, the touch of your fingers on my skin, and the feel of your heart beating with mine... Knowing that I could http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 1/10 Man, just wait a few years or somethin. SHOW, don't TELL. Eventually you'll understand it, but this stuff is garbage. Good luck with future poems. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294583/i-need-a-poem/1 im looking for a poem for my boyfriend he lives in another state and we havent physically met yet. Im wanting it to be something like along the lines of this quote I think its by Julie Andrews "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 Thanks a lot. I appriciate it. I'll post the finished poem when I complete it. This poem is going to be for my girlfriend for Valantines Day. Do any of you guys think that she'll like it? http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 8 out of 10 - somewhere between good and very good.:applause: http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/294374/rate-this-poem/1 Could someone please rate this poem please? It's not finished so it may be crappy I still need to fix it, but tell what you guys think so far. And here it is: "I find solace gazing into your eyes, and in the beauty of them I see you and I. At night I http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/293646/rate-my-poem-weeeeeee/1 Uh, it's okay. I think you need to make it longer and add some more reasons why this girl should be 'yours'. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/293646/rate-my-poem-weeeeeee/1 Belated That which I lust The thing that I must A scorpions company The one person I trust Foolish things Ive done Regrets I have none If I could go back in time I would change only one All will be fine If you Nicole Will be mine http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 Thanks guys for your honest opinions, it is greatly appreciated http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 Beating Hearts? Fair Weather? Like a rose? I'm being serious, man. There's nothin I haven't already seen 200 times. Don't be over-creative and ruin it, but show the listener, don't just tell them flat out. If you can be less cliche you honestly should http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 ignore curt, he's about as cultured as a dung beetle I think the second half of the poem is great, seems more personal. First half seemed a bit contrived/the usual stuff from love songs http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 Thanks for the harsh critisism. Really.:) But there are no rules for writing poetry. Poetry could be anything that came from the heart and has meaning, no matter how you rate it. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 I joke around a lot on here and bash pretty much every poem that isn't awesome, but this is just really really horrendous. I should not have called those other poems names, cause now I have no words left to describe what I have just read. but dude, how http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292536/rate-my-poem/1 Okay well I am NOT a poet, so my poem may not be good, but I wrote it for my girlfriend for her birthday which is on Friday. Here it is: Looking back at what makes me smile, I think of you for quite a while. You've always been so very kind, my odd beh http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/292055/in-case-you-havent-heard/1 please comment and tell me if its good or not...cuz I'm not sure (: