/category/21/poetry/1 http://www.letssingit.com/ http://new.letssingit.com/i/new/logo.gif 295 65 The webs largest music community http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/178100/the-lost/1 I like it; you create good imagery. I can't think of anything to improve it, really; I think it's fine the way it is. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/225526/poems-from-girls-to-guys/1 Why not post them? http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/251497/how-is-my-poem/1 It could use more elaboration, instead of general pessimistic terms. It's not brilliant, but it could definitely be improved. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/271718/rate-my-poem/1 :O http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/254163/hkt/1 I like the simplicity of it; and the ending of 'no regrets' suggests an optimistic future, unlike many poems with an unhappy feel to them. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/259155/lost/1 A fairly humble take on an interresting situation; I like it. It's pretty original. Not to be too anal, but a simple spelling mistake: in the third line, I believe you meant to write "Do you know how many nights." http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/271718/rate-my-poem/1 I liked it; I could overlook the 'cliche' topic of cutting to see the obvious emotion, and steady rhyming style. My only suggestion would be to space it out more, so it doesn't look like one big paragraph. Organize it into verses (poetry verses, not so http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 I like it. Especially the imagery of being 'kicked around when alive', and then 'walked on' after death; just the idea of being constantly taken advantage of, and abused. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 Wait, some become me? Oh! How lucky for them :D http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 Some become ash. So yaay, all is not lost. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 i wouldnt make a career out of poetry... people don't like to be depressed by their art http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 This is more of an opinion of whats going to happwn more than a poem. That`s my view on it. Take it as you will Its also very morbid.. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 That's extremely depressing. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/275475/poem/1 Humans; Rotting decaying flesh. Slowly whithering away into nothingness. Neverpausing death. Born. Dying. Dead. Forgotten. hidden underground for eternity. kicked around while alive yet walked on evermore. remaining filth; becoming dirt. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 To be honest, i've heard and read too many poems and such that are like this. Pretty much all I read was "blah blah, I'm emo, blah I blame my dad for everything" so on and so forth. Hence it could use improvement http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 hey lets not be mean now, the poem could be better tho :9 http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/18299/the-song-corner/1 This is a song for any body stuck in a bad authority situation. i'm in one right now and this is how i'm letting it out " Run Away" 1 for my pressure 2 for my pain 3 for this hell I'm in 4 it's all the same http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 flushdraw is awesome http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 Let me put it this way: I would much rather watch an autopsy being performed on a loved one than ever hear this poem read aloud. I would, like Oedipus, pluck out my eyes if there were no other way to avoid reading it more than once. Gleefully, I http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 :O http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/274603/rate-my-poem/1 Can you feel my pain? Like rain running down a broken window pane. Did I do something wrong?Then why are you gone? You know,i'm almost an adult.I can't keep playing these games.Everything is going to remain the same. I should have never met you.I should'n http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/15373/the-poem-corner/1 i write quite a lot of poems but im not sure wether i should post them! http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 poetry, oh noetry. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 NO!! NO!! i don't want to go inside i like it outside where its wet and cold you say thats my emotion well i'll act like it so you can have your way you say your my dad but you don't act like it its more like i'm another co-worker or even wor http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 I'm through with you so take your darn stuffed bear and start walking you thought i wouldn't catch her with you please i already knew everyone was talking looking at me with sorrow in their eyes that's when i knew but you know what P*SS me off http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 it is a personal experiance when most poets write they write from the heart which is what makes poetry a true writing form cause its true to the poet and thank you for your comment:applause: http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 that's a nice poem but a very sad poem. i hope it's not from personal experience..;(:hug: http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 when i was little i used to look at my shadow i dreamed so many things i thought i was a princess my daddy told me so but my mother told me princess where B*TCHS since i was one i cried a river when told but i did it in silence at a starry http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 where are the poems? :? http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273854/miccys-poetry/1 feel free to post and comment http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 *closed on general request* why do certain people have to hang out their negative sides like that, I wonder. It's not really cool, even if you think it is. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Seen as this topic has just turned into nothing but argument, i've asked if this topic can be closed. If you really want to keep to the pointless arguments, dee, lets keep it to pm's.. although i'd rather you didnt. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 lol pretty sure im not pushing them together andand pretty sure i dont want my boobs to b as big as yours but ANYWAYS, it shouldn't matter if i have james or not. im sorry if kevin isnt satisfying your needs. andand yes in th past i have not been able to ke http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 well its not exaclty something worth arguing over is it.. all you do is bring up points of why you think we shouldnt like eachother. and i really dont care what you have to say about it. aswell as its coming from someone who's a bf over the net aswell, http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Well lets see saying that you said yourself that you couldn't make relationships last too long. And how you asked if you were dating someone online and in real life would it be cheating. And everyones past....experiences catch up to them and control th http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 okay well today makes 3 weeks. how long you think it will last? http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Maybe we should place bets on how long it'll last http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 well frankly, i dont care what you, or anybody else has to say about it. i love james, andand thts all tht matters :) andhearts; http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Because arguments are fun. Duh http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 not that we do, or that thats any of your business. if me and her bothers you... i really dont she why. its none of your business really. if not.. why come in here and try and provoke an argument? annoy someone else. =] http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Too bad all you can do is cyber huh. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 ya he is cute :) andand all mine andhearts; http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Aw how cute sticking up for your girlfriend. http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Dee, why don't you just leave her alone and stop trying to make arguments... http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 he wont go to jail you see, since we will never meet eachother, to b able to do anything.. thanks why dont you rub it in my face some more. I never said you weren't going to meet. And I never implied it. So therefore I have nothing to r http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 to love the "wrong" person isn't the biggest crime so you should complain about something more sensible...i think... * offtopic :by the way,is it possible to put to death the need to love and be loved? http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Mmm jail is a wonderfull thingy! 33 http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 I hate being called James sometimes... http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 ..that makes sense http://forum.letssingit.com/topic/273550/love-9829/1 Jame's "love" is so big it has no boundaries